Originally posted by ruby_caspar
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Thanks!
Spoiler:
Someone left me a review on ff.net saying that it was slightly disturbing that such young children would know so much about torture, which is something that did cross my mind as I was writing it, but it was 2am so I wasn't too bothered... reading it now, though, I sort of see the point...
Ah well. It was all John's imagination making it real, so he could play along like a good daddy. That's my story and I'm sticking to it!
Ah well. It was all John's imagination making it real, so he could play along like a good daddy. That's my story and I'm sticking to it!
Spoiler:
Well I took to read that the children were just playing. The girl was poking him with her wand and the boy tied Shep up (now I wonder who taught him that).. but they didn't really know anything about torture per se.. it was just all John's imagination.. lol
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