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John Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan Appreciation/Ship/Discussion Thread
LLOL~! As long as the story is good, no one cares about the grammar man. And you did great as far as storyline!
WP -
Spoiler:
Awesome update!! And gawd dang fast too!!! I think its cool you made it Rodney!
Yeah i guess...I didn't want to look like a doofus so i sent it to YC first so she could go over it and tell me what needed fixing...I'm learning though
So if WP's was part 10 then i guess mine was part 9 i lost track of the numbers!
After a brief stint of being dragged through the never-ending corridors of the arena, the three injured comrades were thrown harshly into a cell. Ronon was still unconscious, and John was flitting in and out. Teyla struggled to raise herself on her good arm and crawled as best she could to his side.
“John,” she said quietly. “John, can you hear me?”
His normally spiky black hair was matted with sweat, whether from the intolerable heat of the planet or the pain of his injuries, or both. She put two fingers to his neck and checked his pulse—rapid but strong. Good. Then his head turned toward her and his eyes slid open.
“Teyla?” His voice was barely audible, but it was something.
She smiled a bit. “Yes John, I'm here.”
“You—okay?”
“I am fine.” Okay, so she couldn't immediately remember a time when she'd felt worse . . . her wrist and cheek ached horribly, her head felt like it was going to fall off, and every muscle in her body felt like jelly . . .but there would be time to worry about herself later.
“Ronon?” John asked.
“He is unconscious, but I believe he will be all right,” She replied.
John turned his head a little to look around the cell.
“Where's Rodney?” He asked.
Teyla quickly glanced around the room. She had forgotten all about the scientist . . . and now she had no idea where he was.
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From where he was in the stands of the arena, Rodney had watched his team be subdued and taken off the field. He crouched low and hoped that the guards wouldn't notice his absence in the uproar following the emperor's injury. Someone had left their cloak unattended in the confusion, so he grabbed it and threw it over his shoulders, instantly blending in with the crowd surrounding him. He soon made his way to an access corridor behind the seating and began walking swiftly along, but then the sound of footfalls behind him made him slip into a shadowy alcove. A group of men soon walked past supporting the wounded emperor, too worried about him to notice the cloaked figure in the shadows. As soon as they were a safe distance, Rodney slid out of his hiding place and silently followed them.
heh,you really think so i really need to get my grammar in order though...It kinda sucks
You should have seen it before YC beta'd it for me
I did see it before the beta and your grammer is perfectly fine! No need for you to go back to school; they wouldn't be of much help! All I did in my English GSCE class was take the mickey out of everyone with my friend Especially when they started asking about Pronouns which lead to nouns, then verbs, adverbs, adjectives and finally back to pronouns! this was stuff I'd learnt in Primary school!
I seriously need a new keyboard! The the 'o' button is now coming off, soon it will be sat on my bedside table with the 'a' button!
What we do in life echoes in eternity - GladiatorvghUp the Blades!
LOL, thanks. I'm glad that you liked it. I think I've done 18.
And isn't the RR great? I think everyone is rockin' with it!
So...you're going to join next month...right????
Ahhh nope...I no good for next month quite busy Yep!!..maybe let me check my calendar ..ah yes an opening..
Well I can definitely pencil you in for July......2010
Here is an update to A Wish Yet To Come. As usual, now, the new stuff is below the horizontal line.
In my last fic update I forgot to mention that Teyla Snatchers is a sequel to DNA Snatchers for those newbies to Teyla Snatchers and thanks for the comments on it to anyone who has or will comment on it.
They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.
“Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.
“Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.
Teyla thought about this for a moment.
“Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.
The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.
Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.
Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.
“Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”
The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.
And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!
I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
Working on it! but sadly this stupid computer restarted on me and i lost everything that i had done! *starts to cry* now i have tio find the post that has the preview of the epiluge for He is Mine.... AGAIN!
After a brief stint of being dragged through the never-ending corridors of the arena, the three injured comrades were thrown harshly into a cell. Ronon was still unconscious, and John was flitting in and out. Teyla struggled to raise herself on her good arm and crawled as best she could to his side.
“John,” she said quietly. “John, can you hear me?”
His normally spiky black hair was matted with sweat, whether from the intolerable heat of the planet or the pain of his injuries, or both. She put two fingers to his neck and checked his pulse—rapid but strong. Good. Then his head turned toward her and his eyes slid open.
“Teyla?” His voice was barely audible, but it was something.
She smiled a bit. “Yes John, I'm here.”
“You—okay?”
“I am fine.” Okay, so she couldn't immediately remember a time when she'd felt worse . . . her wrist and cheek ached horribly, her head felt like it was going to fall off, and every muscle in her body felt like jelly . . .but there would be time to worry about herself later.
“Ronon?” John asked.
“He is unconscious, but I believe he will be all right,” She replied.
John turned his head a little to look around the cell.
“Where's Rodney?” He asked.
Teyla quickly glanced around the room. She had forgotten all about the scientist . . . and now she had no idea where he was.
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From where he was in the stands of the arena, Rodney had watched his team be subdued and taken off the field. He crouched low and hoped that the guards wouldn't notice his absence in the uproar following the emperor's injury. Someone had left their cloak unattended in the confusion, so he grabbed it and threw it over his shoulders, instantly blending in with the crowd surrounding him. He soon made his way to an access corridor behind the seating and began walking swiftly along, but then the sound of footfalls behind him made him slip into a shadowy alcove. A group of men soon walked past supporting the wounded emperor, too worried about him to notice the cloaked figure in the shadows. As soon as they were a safe distance, Rodney slid out of his hiding place and silently followed them.
I did see it before the beta and your grammer is perfectly fine! No need for you to go back to school; they wouldn't be of much help! All I did in my English GSCE class was take the mickey out of everyone with my friend Especially when they started asking about Pronouns which lead to nouns, then verbs, adverbs, adjectives and finally back to pronouns! this was stuff I'd learnt in Primary school!
I seriously need a new keyboard! The the 'o' button is now coming off, soon it will be sat on my bedside table with the 'a' button!
Oh yeah so you did...I actually learned more stuff since i left school
ooooooooooooooo really.....well the o can keep the a company
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