Originally posted by YappiChick
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I need to know...who is wanting to do a second part on the RR or join in if there is a second round? I need to know so that the rest of the people can either wrap the story up or continue the story for another round.
Let me know! Thanks!
Let me know! Thanks!
Originally posted by Linda06
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RR fic part um........hell if i know
Spoiler:
They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.
“Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.
“Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.
Teyla thought about this for a moment.
“Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.
The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.
Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.
Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.
“Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”
The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.
“Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.
“Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.
Teyla thought about this for a moment.
“Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.
The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.
Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.
Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.
“Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”
The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.
And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!
I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
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