Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

John Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan Appreciation/Ship/Discussion Thread

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

    Originally posted by YappiChick View Post
    I need to know...who is wanting to do a second part on the RR or join in if there is a second round? I need to know so that the rest of the people can either wrap the story up or continue the story for another round.

    Let me know! Thanks!
    I'm good either way!

    Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
    RR fic part um........hell if i know

    Spoiler:
    They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.

    “Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.

    “Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.

    Teyla thought about this for a moment.

    “Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.

    The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.

    Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.

    Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.

    “Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”

    The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.


    And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!

    I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
    Conflicting emotions . . .

    YAY! You posted! And it's awesome! But . . .

    Eegads! It's my turn!
    || twitter || tumblr ||

    Comment


      Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
      hehe,thanks cazz and well you helped a great deal getting my brain in gear and giving me some ideas what to do because i really was struggling badly!
      NP Linda Your brain is a scary place

      What we do in life echoes in eternity - Gladiator vghUp the Blades!

      Comment


        Originally posted by WingedPegasus View Post
        I'm good either way!



        Conflicting emotions . . .

        YAY! You posted! And it's awesome! But . . .

        Eegads! It's my turn!
        Hey i thought you couldn't wait

        Originally posted by CazzBlade View Post
        NP Linda Your brain is a scary place

        Yes it is....when it's actually here...It's posted MIA half the time!
        sigpic

        Comment


          Originally posted by Teyilia View Post
          perhaps the gfact that they are brothers in a paralell reality? thenthey start arguing with her that they aren't even related in THIS reality
          Good one.

          Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
          RR fic part um........hell if i know

          Spoiler:
          They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.

          “Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.

          “Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.

          Teyla thought about this for a moment.

          “Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.

          The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.

          Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.

          Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.

          “Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”

          The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.


          And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!

          I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
          Great job Linda.
          Icon by AceofHadeon Sig by TrueRomantic

          sigpic

          Comment


            Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
            hmmmmm,i've got an itch in my trigger finger...My finger might slip
            Working on it! but sadly this stupid computer restarted on me and i lost everything that i had done! *starts to cry* now i have tio find the post that has the preview of the epiluge for He is Mine.... AGAIN!

            This is the Assassin's Way part 17 complete
            "Elegant beauty is Nature. but only for the gentle and soft Flower" ~Hu Ge
            "The one thing every new hairstylist must learn is how to do hair in a combat zone!" Bob; owner of Bob & Weave's Combat Salon in Red Dust Club, an original story currently in progress

            Comment


              Originally posted by Cherish4 View Post
              Wow I LOVE this! Mind if I snag it?
              Thanks Cherish and no i don't mind all my artwork is snaggable.
              Originally posted by YappiChick View Post
              Another day, another pic fic...

              Communication Problem
              I love it.
              Originally posted by scifan View Post
              Wow! Wonderful job WL
              Originally posted by asgard30 View Post
              Wow I love it it's so great
              Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
              I ove this WL
              Originally posted by TeylaFan View Post
              Awesome WL!
              Thanks sci, asgard, Linda and TF.
              Originally posted by CazzBlade View Post
              Spoiler in case you want to check the results yourself! Fan Awards:
              Spoiler:

              Congrats to Nina, Camy and Steph for winning in the Fan Awards!!!


              Awesome congrats to all the winners.
              Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
              RR fic part um........hell if i know

              Spoiler:
              They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.

              “Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.

              “Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.

              Teyla thought about this for a moment.

              “Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.

              The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.

              Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.

              Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.

              “Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”

              The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.


              And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!

              I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
              Can't read it yet Linda I've only read part 1. *runs away*

              Comment


                Originally posted by Padme18 View Post
                Good one.



                Great job Linda.
                Thanks Padme....How are you today?

                Originally posted by wraithlord View Post
                Can't read it yet Linda I've only read part 1. *runs away*
                I'm sure you'll catch up eventually when you've got more time

                Originally posted by Teyilia View Post
                Working on it! but sadly this stupid computer restarted on me and i lost everything that i had done! *starts to cry* now i have tio find the post that has the preview of the epiluge for He is Mine.... AGAIN!
                aww poor Kitty....Ok i'll let you off...For the time being *eases finger off the trigger*
                sigpic

                Comment


                  Originally posted by YappiChick View Post
                  Another day, another pic fic...

                  Communication Problem
                  LOL ... I have a feeling John isn't happy at the moment

                  Originally posted by CazzBlade View Post
                  Spoiler in case you want to check the results yourself! Fan Awards:
                  Spoiler:

                  Congrats to Nina, Camy and Steph for winning in the Fan Awards!!!


                  Say what??? OH MY.... My Common Ground video won... I'm shocked...

                  Originally posted by Linda06 View Post
                  RR fic part um........hell if i know

                  Spoiler:
                  They all looked up to see where the sword landed,shocked to discover it hit the man directly in the shoulder blade.He fell back down into his chair shocked,in a great deal of pain.

                  “Guards,” he tried to shout out but it was barely a whisper.He mustered all his strength and shouted again,”GUARDS,SIEZE HER!” About a half dozen guards stormed into the ring.Teyla grabbed the other sword that was disguarded on the ground.

                  “Surrender or die,” one of the guards said.

                  Teyla thought about this for a moment.

                  “Funny,that is what I was going to say to you.” She said back to them.

                  The guards circled her,Teyla was keeping her eye on all of them by going around in circles with the sword in her good hand.Teyla swung the sword side to side as two of the guards moved closer to her.As they do,she dived forward catching them off guard and sliced one of them across the chest.He fell to the floor.Seeing him unable to fightshe brought the sword up to the other guard and caught him across the throat.

                  Noticing movement out of the corner of her eye,Teyla was distracted by John as he was trying to get up to help her and doesn't see one of the guards coming up behind her.He hit her over the head with the butt of his sword and Teyla fell to the ground.She looked around,slightly dazed to see the guard standing over her but quickly recovered.She swing kicked his legs and he fell to the floor.Teyla grabbed the sword again and stabbed him with it as he lay on the ground.

                  Teyla stood up but the dizziness returned.The remaining three guards descended upon her.She tried to fight them off but one of them managed to get a punch in and hit her on the cheek.Teyla heard something crack,probably her cheekbone.The other two guards finally managed to restrain her.They tied her hands behind her back and grabbed her off the ground.The man in the stands shouted to the guards.

                  “Take her away,lock her up.Take the others as well.”

                  The man didn't notice that there was one member of the team missing.


                  And thank you so much cazz and YC for your help with this!!!

                  I think i managed to fix all the grammar mistakes,i might have missed a few..I'm not sure...I need to go back to English class
                  Great update...

                  Spoiler:
                  Hrmmm which one of the team members is missing...
                  sigpic
                  Sigs by Scifan

                  Comment


                    Originally posted by NinaM View Post
                    LOL ... I have a feeling John isn't happy at the moment



                    Say what??? OH MY.... My Common Ground video won... I'm shocked...



                    Great update...

                    Spoiler:
                    Hrmmm which one of the team members is missing...
                    Why are surprised? That video rocked!

                    And no, he doesn't seem too happy
                    sigpic
                    Humor is the great thing, the saving thing after all. The minute it crops up, all our hardnesses yield, all our irritations, and resentments flit away, and a sunny spirit takes their place. --Mark Twain

                    Comment


                      Originally posted by NinaM View Post
                      LOL ... I have a feeling John isn't happy at the moment



                      Say what??? OH MY.... My Common Ground video won... I'm shocked...



                      Great update...

                      Spoiler:
                      Hrmmm which one of the team members is missing...
                      Thanks Nina...I got alot of help from cazz and YC for this part!
                      sigpic

                      Comment


                        Congrats to the winners!!!!

                        Ninja - Great job with your update! Man, you're WAY better at this than you think.....

                        Comment


                          Well, this went faster than I expected . . .

                          RR fic Part 10

                          Spoiler:
                          After a brief stint of being dragged through the never-ending corridors of the arena, the three injured comrades were thrown harshly into a cell. Ronon was still unconscious, and John was flitting in and out. Teyla struggled to raise herself on her good arm and crawled as best she could to his side.

                          “John,” she said quietly. “John, can you hear me?”

                          His normally spiky black hair was matted with sweat, whether from the intolerable heat of the planet or the pain of his injuries, or both. She put two fingers to his neck and checked his pulse—rapid but strong. Good. Then his head turned toward her and his eyes slid open.

                          “Teyla?” His voice was barely audible, but it was something.

                          She smiled a bit. “Yes John, I'm here.”

                          “You—okay?”

                          “I am fine.” Okay, so she couldn't immediately remember a time when she'd felt worse . . . her wrist and cheek ached horribly, her head felt like it was going to fall off, and every muscle in her body felt like jelly . . .but there would be time to worry about herself later.

                          “Ronon?” John asked.

                          “He is unconscious, but I believe he will be all right,” She replied.

                          John turned his head a little to look around the cell.

                          “Where's Rodney?” He asked.

                          Teyla quickly glanced around the room. She had forgotten all about the scientist . . . and now she had no idea where he was.

                          ------------------------

                          From where he was in the stands of the arena, Rodney had watched his team be subdued and taken off the field. He crouched low and hoped that the guards wouldn't notice his absence in the uproar following the emperor's injury. Someone had left their cloak unattended in the confusion, so he grabbed it and threw it over his shoulders, instantly blending in with the crowd surrounding him. He soon made his way to an access corridor behind the seating and began walking swiftly along, but then the sound of footfalls behind him made him slip into a shadowy alcove. A group of men soon walked past supporting the wounded emperor, too worried about him to notice the cloaked figure in the shadows. As soon as they were a safe distance, Rodney slid out of his hiding place and silently followed them.


                          Off to do homework now. Be back later!
                          || twitter || tumblr ||

                          Comment


                            Originally posted by YappiChick View Post
                            Why are surprised? That video rocked!

                            And no, he doesn't seem too happy
                            Thanks
                            Guess it's that worst own critic syndrome... don't usually feel anything of mine if better or in the same league as the others out there... I think that was the toughest video I have ever done... trying to cramp a 40 min epi into like a 4 minute video
                            sigpic
                            Sigs by Scifan

                            Comment


                              Originally posted by MrsB108 View Post
                              Congrats to the winners!!!!

                              Ninja - Great job with your update! Man, you're WAY better at this than you think.....
                              heh,you really think so i really need to get my grammar in order though...It kinda sucks

                              You should have seen it before YC beta'd it for me
                              sigpic

                              Comment


                                Originally posted by WingedPegasus View Post
                                Well, this went faster than I expected . . .

                                RR fic Part 10

                                Spoiler:
                                After a brief stint of being dragged through the never-ending corridors of the arena, the three injured comrades were thrown harshly into a cell. Ronon was still unconscious, and John was flitting in and out. Teyla struggled to raise herself on her good arm and crawled as best she could to his side.

                                “John,” she said quietly. “John, can you hear me?”

                                His normally spiky black hair was matted with sweat, whether from the intolerable heat of the planet or the pain of his injuries, or both. She put two fingers to his neck and checked his pulse—rapid but strong. Good. Then his head turned toward her and his eyes slid open.

                                “Teyla?” His voice was barely audible, but it was something.

                                She smiled a bit. “Yes John, I'm here.”

                                “You—okay?”

                                “I am fine.” Okay, so she couldn't immediately remember a time when she'd felt worse . . . her wrist and cheek ached horribly, her head felt like it was going to fall off, and every muscle in her body felt like jelly . . .but there would be time to worry about herself later.

                                “Ronon?” John asked.

                                “He is unconscious, but I believe he will be all right,” She replied.

                                John turned his head a little to look around the cell.

                                “Where's Rodney?” He asked.

                                Teyla quickly glanced around the room. She had forgotten all about the scientist . . . and now she had no idea where he was.

                                ------------------------

                                From where he was in the stands of the arena, Rodney had watched his team be subdued and taken off the field. He crouched low and hoped that the guards wouldn't notice his absence in the uproar following the emperor's injury. Someone had left their cloak unattended in the confusion, so he grabbed it and threw it over his shoulders, instantly blending in with the crowd surrounding him. He soon made his way to an access corridor behind the seating and began walking swiftly along, but then the sound of footfalls behind him made him slip into a shadowy alcove. A group of men soon walked past supporting the wounded emperor, too worried about him to notice the cloaked figure in the shadows. As soon as they were a safe distance, Rodney slid out of his hiding place and silently followed them.


                                Off to do homework now. Be back later!
                                Awesome part WP...Man you write fast...so who's next?
                                sigpic

                                Comment

                                Working...
                                X