I find that plot way too similar to Lost City. It only has two plotlines going at the same time, which, although good, can be better. The weapon being on the planet, Adria holograming down and everyone shooting at her, giant space battle which we don't seem to be winning at all, it all is way too similar to Lost City. The Daniel-turning-into-a-Prior-again thing is also way too similar to O-neil absorbing the Ancient knowledge again, making both of them the only one's who could operate the machine.
Also, there are a few plotholes. As other's have said, Merlin is probably dead, Morgan is either under extreme watch or descended, and Oma is fighting Anubis. Also, I don't think that Merlin would have designed the weapon to be used by a Prior. Otherwise, the Ori would be able to use it to destroy the Ancients.
You could make a few revisons to change these errors. For example, instead of those three Ancients saving them, Skaara could save them. And instead of making Daniel a Prior, they could use the machine Khalek was in to accelerate his genetic make up. Still, the plot is way too similar to Lost City. Its good, but its already been done. If anything, I would try to add a few more layers to it, maybe try to go for more of a "reckoning" feel than Lost City, cuz reckoning was awesome.
Also, there are a few plotholes. As other's have said, Merlin is probably dead, Morgan is either under extreme watch or descended, and Oma is fighting Anubis. Also, I don't think that Merlin would have designed the weapon to be used by a Prior. Otherwise, the Ori would be able to use it to destroy the Ancients.
You could make a few revisons to change these errors. For example, instead of those three Ancients saving them, Skaara could save them. And instead of making Daniel a Prior, they could use the machine Khalek was in to accelerate his genetic make up. Still, the plot is way too similar to Lost City. Its good, but its already been done. If anything, I would try to add a few more layers to it, maybe try to go for more of a "reckoning" feel than Lost City, cuz reckoning was awesome.
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