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    And Cadman is one fine marine...

    Thank you to all who replied to my query.
    "What do you mean by 'Oopps'?"
    Team Starfist protects all. But having a fully loaded P-90 helps...
    Reality is an illusion... Created by those who cannot handle Stargate...!
    Jankowski's Rules: Rule 1: Check your Six!
    I'm not perfect. But parts of me are excellent I also cook...!
    To thy own self... Be true
    May the odds.... Be ever in your favour..!

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      Actually, she's alone. Cadman is trying to keep Kavanaugh from doing something.
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        So she's stopping him from doing something stupid...?
        "What do you mean by 'Oopps'?"
        Team Starfist protects all. But having a fully loaded P-90 helps...
        Reality is an illusion... Created by those who cannot handle Stargate...!
        Jankowski's Rules: Rule 1: Check your Six!
        I'm not perfect. But parts of me are excellent I also cook...!
        To thy own self... Be true
        May the odds.... Be ever in your favour..!

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          she'd just punch him. Kneeing in the nuts is kinda hard to explain in casual instances 'he was going to pull the breaker so I spun him around and racked him'...a punch or smack on the head would go over better.
          Where in the World is George Hammond?


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            Originally posted by Starfist View Post
            I know Kavanaugh is a <Insert Suitable Expletive>. I would actually think there would be a queue.
            Totally OT, but...
            Spoiler:
            I once asked a client whether anyone would mind if I killed Charlie; he said I'd probably have a lot of help and a very good defense attorney (who would be one of the guys I work with). Charlie is a real person and, like Kavanaugh, an <insert suitable expletive>.


            Therefore, I agree that a punch to the head is easier to explain and leads to fewer "blame the victim" scenarios than a knee to the nuts would.

            Seaboe
            If you're going to allow yourself to be offended by a cat, you might as well just pack it in -- Steven Brust

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              Originally posted by Starfist View Post
              So she's stopping him from doing something stupid...?
              Spoiler:
              She's stopping him from killing Elizabeth by shutting off her nanites
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                Gottcha...!
                "What do you mean by 'Oopps'?"
                Team Starfist protects all. But having a fully loaded P-90 helps...
                Reality is an illusion... Created by those who cannot handle Stargate...!
                Jankowski's Rules: Rule 1: Check your Six!
                I'm not perfect. But parts of me are excellent I also cook...!
                To thy own self... Be true
                May the odds.... Be ever in your favour..!

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                  Originally posted by Starfist View Post
                  Gottcha...!
                  You'd have to read my SGA story to know everything.
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                    I'll have to take a look...
                    "What do you mean by 'Oopps'?"
                    Team Starfist protects all. But having a fully loaded P-90 helps...
                    Reality is an illusion... Created by those who cannot handle Stargate...!
                    Jankowski's Rules: Rule 1: Check your Six!
                    I'm not perfect. But parts of me are excellent I also cook...!
                    To thy own self... Be true
                    May the odds.... Be ever in your favour..!

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                      It's the second link under my sig.
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                        I need help: I am not professional writer and i not know how can write about battle scenes ?
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                          Just write the action. Are you going to write it from one character's point of view or several? Just sit down and write what one sees, then the other (if applicable)

                          Don't be scared by all the 'must have this tech detail, must research that weapon, must research this protocol'......most of that stuff will never even come up in a fic.(and to be honest, a lot of it is just endless detail that bogs down the fic and makes them harder to read.)

                          Just write what you want the scene to be, then you can fill in the gaps.

                          Let's say it's Jack and you're writing that first scene in Forever and a Day when the Jaffa are attacking, what does he see? What does he feel? What does he do? Close your eyes, imagine that you are there and describe it as it happens around you.
                          Where in the World is George Hammond?


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                            Am I misremembering things?

                            I could've sworn that in an early ep of SG-1, Daniel mentions that something in the DHD translates alien languages for you if you've been through the Stargate a few times.
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                            To the night and its stars, to the here and now with who we are.

                            Another sunrise with my sad captains, with who I choose to lose my mind,
                            And if it's all we only pass this way but once, what a perfect waste of time.

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                              Originally posted by BruTak View Post
                              Am I misremembering things?

                              I could've sworn that in an early ep of SG-1, Daniel mentions that something in the DHD translates alien languages for you if you've been through the Stargate a few times.
                              I think that's fanon, not canon.
                              Unmade Plans (WIP: 11/20):
                              Sam's life takes a turn in an unexpected direction when she's faced with an unplanned pregnancy. The decision to keep the baby and raise it on her own will alter her life forever. Relationships are put to the test, especially the one between her and Jack. She doesn't know what to expect from him and he surprises her at every turn.
                              On FFnet or AO3


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                                Originally posted by BruTak View Post
                                Am I misremembering things?

                                I could've sworn that in an early ep of SG-1, Daniel mentions that something in the DHD translates alien languages for you if you've been through the Stargate a few times.
                                Nope. As best I can remember, no explanation is ever given in any of the series as to how everybody is suddenly speaking English. There are numerous theories (Daniel translates everything offscreen, DHD translator effect etc) but nothing official.
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