Originally posted by YappiChick
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Round Robin--Final Part!!
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Thank you again to everyone who has participated in this round! Great job!! Woo hoo!!!
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Part 11 by YappiChick
Her eyes fluttered open as she heard the steady beep, beep, beep of the medical monitors around her. Her body slightly relaxed now that she knew she would never hear the dripping sounds of Michael’s compound again.
Still, so many unanswered questions were floating around her muddled mind. How did she get back to Atlantis? Was her child alright? Had Kanaan been telling the truth when he said who the father really was? Subconsciously, she moved her hands slowly to her stomach. Her eyes widened.
The baby wasn’t there.
Suddenly, the beeping was faster and louder. Within seconds, Dr. Keller came into her vantage point.
“My child--”
“--is fine, but you won’t be unless you calm down,” Keller interrupted.
Teyla forced herself to take a couple of deep breaths. If there was something wrong, Keller would have told her. After her pulse slowed down, she turned to the young doctor. “What happened?”
“Whatever Michael injected you with, it sent you into labor. You’re lucky Rodney didn’t have to deliver the baby in the puddle jumper,” she joked lightly.
“Where is my child? Is he well?”
Keller smiled. “The baby is fine.” She pulled the certain back quietly to show John holding the little baby in his arms. He was humming a soft song.
Not noticing his audience, he continued until Keller walked to him. “I believe somebody wants to see you,” she said as she excused herself, leaving them to have some privacy. He grinned sheepishly he quickly made his way to Teyla’s side.
“How are you feeling?’ he asked, studying her face carefully.
“Very confused,” she answered truthfully. She looked at the baby in his arms with such love.
John followed her gaze. “Here,” he said, transferring the baby to her, “I think it’s time the little guy got to see his momma.”
She accepted him happily. Teyla studied his face: plump cheeks, a pile of messy brown hair, a tiny button nose. His eyes were closed but she had no doubt they were beautiful as well. “He is perfect,” she whispered.
John nodded, pulling a chair to sit beside her. Though the words “just like his mother” popped in his mind, he refrained from saying them. Teyla had been through so much; there was no need to complicate things now. There would be a time for them to progress their relationship forward.
For now, he was content watching his son being held by Teyla. Already, the transformation of his heart had begun. With a smile, he looked at the two of them: his love, his life, his family.
Her eyes fluttered open as she heard the steady beep, beep, beep of the medical monitors around her. Her body slightly relaxed now that she knew she would never hear the dripping sounds of Michael’s compound again.
Still, so many unanswered questions were floating around her muddled mind. How did she get back to Atlantis? Was her child alright? Had Kanaan been telling the truth when he said who the father really was? Subconsciously, she moved her hands slowly to her stomach. Her eyes widened.
The baby wasn’t there.
Suddenly, the beeping was faster and louder. Within seconds, Dr. Keller came into her vantage point.
“My child--”
“--is fine, but you won’t be unless you calm down,” Keller interrupted.
Teyla forced herself to take a couple of deep breaths. If there was something wrong, Keller would have told her. After her pulse slowed down, she turned to the young doctor. “What happened?”
“Whatever Michael injected you with, it sent you into labor. You’re lucky Rodney didn’t have to deliver the baby in the puddle jumper,” she joked lightly.
“Where is my child? Is he well?”
Keller smiled. “The baby is fine.” She pulled the certain back quietly to show John holding the little baby in his arms. He was humming a soft song.
Not noticing his audience, he continued until Keller walked to him. “I believe somebody wants to see you,” she said as she excused herself, leaving them to have some privacy. He grinned sheepishly he quickly made his way to Teyla’s side.
“How are you feeling?’ he asked, studying her face carefully.
“Very confused,” she answered truthfully. She looked at the baby in his arms with such love.
John followed her gaze. “Here,” he said, transferring the baby to her, “I think it’s time the little guy got to see his momma.”
She accepted him happily. Teyla studied his face: plump cheeks, a pile of messy brown hair, a tiny button nose. His eyes were closed but she had no doubt they were beautiful as well. “He is perfect,” she whispered.
John nodded, pulling a chair to sit beside her. Though the words “just like his mother” popped in his mind, he refrained from saying them. Teyla had been through so much; there was no need to complicate things now. There would be a time for them to progress their relationship forward.
For now, he was content watching his son being held by Teyla. Already, the transformation of his heart had begun. With a smile, he looked at the two of them: his love, his life, his family.
The page has been updated as well.
Thank you again to everyone who has participated in this round! Great job!! Woo hoo!!!
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Anyone have a suggestion for a title??
Spoiler:
John holding his son... what a cute picture I get in my head from that ...
And then thinking that they have time to move their relationship forward.. only that he know was just taking in the fact that he has a son,, by the woman that means the most to him...
And then thinking that they have time to move their relationship forward.. only that he know was just taking in the fact that he has a son,, by the woman that means the most to him...
Awesome work everyone on the fic... it has been a great read...no idea for a name though sorry....
Originally posted by scifan
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Oh Tey!!That is so cool.
Can you copy and paste what she said?![Embarrassment](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/redface.gif)
I saw it on Youtube and it wasn't my favorite, but not my most hated either.![Wink](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/wink.gif)
That is so true and that's what I like about this this cast. They seem to be so down to earth.![Big Grin](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/biggrin.gif)
I made a little something.![Wink](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/wink.gif)
![](http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z259/luvjandt/JTfamilypic.png)
Can you copy and paste what she said?
![Embarrassment](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/redface.gif)
I saw it on Youtube and it wasn't my favorite, but not my most hated either.
![Wink](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/wink.gif)
That is so true and that's what I like about this this cast. They seem to be so down to earth.
![Big Grin](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/biggrin.gif)
I made a little something.
![Wink](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/wink.gif)
![](http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z259/luvjandt/JTfamilypic.png)
![Wink](https://forum.gateworld.net/core/images/smilies/../gw_smilies/wink.gif)
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