The GateWorld Cantina

[Col.Foley]

*eats the cantina*

*gets serious indegestion as Foley shoots him repleatedly with the Lance....and it goes through*

[Crazy Tom]

I am sending Wolf a copy. The premise is...wait...which games have you played?

None, no system, not a gamer, storyline was interesting tho.

[Commander Jumper]

I wish Mapp were here.. he's always fun to bug.. or at least P-90... I miss P-90

[chevron3]

Hi

[Shanthaia]

good night jesserella

*eats baguette and chees* - yum, I am hungry

[Admiral Mappalazarou]

I truly love how you did this narration...it is so visual and one of the best ways a movie can show the true depth of any past event. With words and direction you have given the reader an awesome visual of what could be there. Incredible job Mapp

I have no idea if this idea has been used before..and quite frankly I don't care ..It has been worked beautifully into this story

The keyness of CJ is riveting I found myself glued to my screen reading this section. I was compelling and all the characters came across as real in their reactions.

Wonderfully Done Mapp

Which idea would that be?

[tombombadil]

*gets serious indegestion as Foley shoots him repleatedly with the Lance....and it goes through*

*fails epicly*
i have an unbreakable stomach.

[Col.Foley]

None, no system, not a gamer, storyline was interesting tho.

Well, then you should know what is going on. The stories takes place about twenty years after the Belkan War, a scientist reveals some information to the Ustians, that the Belkan's, or their remnant, is looking for something. This something is 'Demon Lord' the pilot that defeated them and a World Without boundries twenty years ago. The president of Ustio assembles a six man team. their mission. To find him first, rescue him. And stop the belkan's.

[Col.Foley]

*fails epicly*
i have an unbreakable stomach.

*sets the time rotor, leaves the stomach, going back in time, to places unknown*

[Commander Jumper]

Which idea would that be?

Mapp! I was just talking about you!!! *glomp* I've been soo booooored...

[Gunslinger Azrael]

whiskey. now.

[Admiral Mappalazarou]

ROFLMAO ...Mapp you are determined I am gonna back you as a Mod ((((Mapp))) ...LOL anyway on with the feedback


What a wonderful almost twist I see there... Its like a terra-forming device...but its alive as well ...How Cool is that

I love the turns this is taking and the plans that are coming together in the Captains mind

I love that Tame is standing Up as a person of her own power AND she did in such a visual way as well

I love that the crew...after just a beat knows what the Captain is thinking of again that solidarity

I so love how you brought his back around to that first thread of information with Clanger

this was just fun to read ..not so much for humor...but for the growth I saw coming out in little and different ways in each of the characters

Its time for some plannin' and some misbehavin' I think

Great job on this section as well Mapp

You had to know I would work this idea in there somehow I really enjoyed writing both sections today and figured you deserved two updates since I dared to venture out into RL yesterday

[Admiral Mappalazarou]

I have no clue

But earlier Foley had made a comment about you getting your inspiration from various Sci-fi outlets and I just wanted to be clear from the get-go that I did give a good golly gosh darn if you had...it was a damn good weave of story telling

Ohhh he meant because my baddies aren't original...apparently. Maybe not in appearence, sure...But show me a scary hooded thing, carrying a sword with claws made from pure iron through a solid wall and then call me unoriginal

[Admiral Mappalazarou]

Mapp! I was just talking about you!!! *glomp* I've been soo booooored...

read my scriiiiipt I'm going bed soon

[Crazy Tom]

Well, then you should know what is going on. The stories takes place about twenty years after the Belkan War, a scientist reveals some information to the Ustians, that the Belkan's, or their remnant, is looking for something. This something is 'Demon Lord' the pilot that defeated them and a World Without boundries twenty years ago. The president of Ustio assembles a six man team. their mission. To find him first, rescue him. And stop the belkan's.

Digfighting? Do we see those awesome multy missiles?