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Originally posted by TameFarrarI truly love how you did this narration...it is so visual and one of the best ways a movie can show the true depth of any past event. With words and direction you have given the reader an awesome visual of what could be there. Incredible job Mapp
I have no idea if this idea has been used before..and quite frankly I don't care ..It has been worked beautifully into this story
The keyness of CJ is riveting I found myself glued to my screen reading this section. I was compelling and all the characters came across as real in their reactions.
Wonderfully Done MappI write articles/features/reviews for I'm With Geek.com now. Check out our stuff if you get a minute!
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Originally posted by Crazy Tom View PostNone, no system, not a gamer, storyline was interesting tho.
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Originally posted by tombombadail View Post*fails epicly*
i have an unbreakable stomach.
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Originally posted by TameFarrarROFLMAO ...Mapp you are determined I am gonna back you as a Mod ((((Mapp))) ...LOL anyway on with the feedback
What a wonderful almost twist I see there... Its like a terra-forming device...but its alive as well ...How Cool is that
I love the turns this is taking and the plans that are coming together in the Captains mind
I love that Tame is standing Up as a person of her own power AND she did in such a visual way as well
I love that the crew...after just a beat knows what the Captain is thinking of again that solidarity
I so love how you brought his back around to that first thread of information with Clanger
this was just fun to read ..not so much for humor...but for the growth I saw coming out in little and different ways in each of the characters
Its time for some plannin' and some misbehavin' I think
Great job on this section as well MappI write articles/features/reviews for I'm With Geek.com now. Check out our stuff if you get a minute!
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Originally posted by TameFarrarI have no clue
But earlier Foley had made a comment about you getting your inspiration from various Sci-fi outlets and I just wanted to be clear from the get-go that I did give a good golly gosh darn if you had...it was a damn good weave of story tellingI write articles/features/reviews for I'm With Geek.com now. Check out our stuff if you get a minute!
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Originally posted by Commander Jumper View PostMapp! I was just talking about you!!! *glomp* I've been soo booooored...I write articles/features/reviews for I'm With Geek.com now. Check out our stuff if you get a minute!
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Originally posted by Col.Foley View PostWell, then you should know what is going on. The stories takes place about twenty years after the Belkan War, a scientist reveals some information to the Ustians, that the Belkan's, or their remnant, is looking for something. This something is 'Demon Lord' the pilot that defeated them and a World Without boundries twenty years ago. The president of Ustio assembles a six man team. their mission. To find him first, rescue him. And stop the belkan's.
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