battlestar group 16

[boeli]

i already have a file which is detailing the ships names and if it is still fighting and also when it was built, i am already starting to make a small list about one ship that i will use for the third story. but for the rest, i still have to start, maybe when i have some spare time

BTW, you might want to speak English in here, not everybody is Dutch

[locutes]

I know, but I guess you missed what I meant.



I meant to put ALL of the stories of the same universe, thus, Battlestar group 16 and Unde Siege plus all yet to be written parts in one file, so if you open up one link all stories are behind each other like in a book with multiple stories, a story bundle

[puddlejumperOZ]

Hi Boeli, finally got around to finishing your story, I'm not going to point out any flaws, the story was too good so I tend to overlook stupid things that others might say. You put too much effort into this for it to over judged by people who think they know better...damn good job, looking forward to more. (Oh and I won't promote my own stuff here...)

[locutes]

I am not judging because I know better, which I don't, I have allot of trouble writing my own fanfic, I try to give constructive criticism and give ideas

[boeli]

I like constructive critisism, it helps me to improve my writing which might in turn improve the story overall.
as long as the critisism is justified and true i can take it, for example with BSG 16 I at one part had Jack and Sam together, someone commented that it wasnt possible because of regulations in the military, what that person didnt know was that i had already explained it in that same chapter so his point was wrong, the least i expect of people who comment is that they first check to see of i havent explained it before, i do the same when i comment or reply.

Chapter 5 is almost done, i think that it'll be done today or tomorow, than to the beta so it wont take to long anymore. so far i have planned seven chapters total for under siege

[locutes]

thta's allot of things to write, but that is going to be great fun reading

[boeli]

thta's allot of things to write, but that is going to be great fun reading

five of the seven chapters have already been writen

[locutes]

lol

[boeli]

and four have been posted

[locutes]

and CV thor is working on number 5 now (as beta)

[boeli]

if he received the file, i sometimes have trouble with my msn mail, stuff doesnt get across which can be very annoying

[locutes]

lol, use Yahoo mail

[boeli]

dont have any, maybe I'll try it if my msn keeps it up

[boeli]

i'm already halfway done with chapter 6, problem is that in about an hour i have to be at school so uploads are going to be a lot slower

[Commander Thor]

i have read it but will need to re-read to do the grammatical stuff and i have to say you guys will love it