The Martin WooHoodStock Thread

[llp]

Okay, here's my dilemma - I am writing a new story. I have three ideas for a murder, but not sure which one to use....opinion requested (oh and I won't tell you who did it so don't ask)

1st - A semi glad woman is found - apparently a suicide off her balcony - falling 6 floors onto the cement. But is she really a suicide. She is only around 23, is an "actress" hoping to make it, things haven't been going really well, but were they that bad - have to read the story to find out.

2nd - A woman is found dead, near a lover's lane, an apparent overdose. But small details start to come out that makes them question whether she was an accidental overdose or murdered.

3rd - A body is found hacked to death. After careful analysis by the corner she turns out to be the runaway from a case almost ten years old. Who killed her and why?

Lovely thoughts to contemplate - but which one if any would catch your interest the most?

Thanks for any help you might give me. Now going back 3 pages to catch up.

[josiane]

Good! *huggles back*



I bet it was But on a school exchange?

Yes. It was the German school's idea. Unsurprisingly. Us poor innocent English teenagers had no idea what we were about to be subjected to

[Jumble]

Difficult choice Laurie Can't you weave all three scenarios in? That wood make for a nice complicated story/case for them to figure out

I do like the idea of the 3rd one though, working their way back through a ten-year-old case would be interesting

[josiane]

Okay, here's my dilemma - I am writing a new story. I have three ideas for a murder, but not sure which one to use....opinion requested (oh and I won't tell you who did it so don't ask)

1st - A semi glad woman is found - apparently a suicide off her balcony - falling 6 floors onto the cement. But is she really a suicide. She is only around 23, is an "actress" hoping to make it, things haven't been going really well, but were they that bad - have to read the story to find out.

2nd - A woman is found dead, near a lover's lane, an apparent overdose. But small details start to come out that makes them question whether she was an accidental overdose or murdered.

3rd - A body is found hacked to death. After careful analysis by the corner she turns out to be the runaway from a case almost ten years old. Who killed her and why?

Lovely thoughts to contemplate - but which one if any would catch your interest the most?

Thanks for any help you might give me. Now going back 3 pages to catch up.

Ooh, intriguing! I think I'd go for the third idea, just because of the link to the old case would seem to leave more questions about what happened in the interim.

[Jumble]

Yes. It was the German school's idea. Unsurprisingly. Us poor innocent English teenagers had no idea what we were about to be subjected to

Because you'd been closeted away and hadn't heard of Hair so didn't know what it was most famous for? A likely story

*stares at sig* I sooo love that pic............ so I'm just going to sneak it in again..

No way in the world does he look anywhere near his age *sigh*

[starlover]

I do like the idea of the 3rd one though, working their way back through a ten-year-old case would be interesting

I agree

Wanted to type the same, but too lazy to do so, plus you could have some flashbacks perhaps Tell it from two sides...

*sigh* reminds me of the times I would still write stuff...(not FF based)

[starlover]

Ooh, intriguing! I think I'd go for the third idea, just because of the link to the old case would seem to leave more questions about what happened in the interim.

For a moment I read "intern" there and I thought... she is telling the story about my murder

[Sarai]

I do like the idea of the 3rd one though, working their way back through a ten-year-old case would be interesting

I agree with Josi and Jumble. A cold case is always more juicy. The new killer can lead to the old killer who thinks they've got away with it etc etc... Much more fun !

...in a creepy kind of way

[Jumble]

[starlover]

Oohhh we're on a kinky amount of pages...now kinky stuff must be told...

I think Jumble, the least innocent person in here, should start.

*adjusts halo*

[josiane]

Because you'd been closeted away and hadn't heard of Hair so didn't know what it was most famous for? A likely story

You mean you even don't believe me when I protest the innocence of my younger self?

*stares at sig* I sooo love that pic............ so I'm just going to sneak it in again..

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/g...G_0056-cut.jpg

No way in the world does he look anywhere near his age *sigh*

Good sneaking

[Jumble]

Oohhh we're on a kinky amount of pages...now kinky stuff must be told...

I think Jumble, the least innocent person in here, should start.

*adjusts halo*

You woodn't think that if you'd heard some of Laurie's stories

[Jumble]

You mean you even don't believe me when I protest the innocence of my younger self?

Nope!

Good sneaking

I thought so

[DutchIndeed]

There's nothing kinky 'bout Big '69es!

[Jumble]

There's nothing kinky 'bout Big '69es!

Since you're the ickybah 69 expert, I guess we'll have to take your word for it

*runz*