Originally posted by Coronach
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On Eli's side, she was clinging to him initially as he walked down corridors. Then he got her a shower; the first person on the ship to get one *and* has him stand guard. She doesn't care that he goes off with another woman, but cries out for Eli *NOT* Scott when the light goes out. He gives her his blackberry for light, and she makes him stay, just makes him turn around, because she doesn't want to be alone in the dark. And he brings her to observation lounge to see the gas giant.
And since the start, she had such confidence in him as the one to open the gate and to get them through things.
Now, in my book, he's done a helluva lot for her, some of which were virtual demands, without any real complaint on his part. You'd think, if she were looking for someone to bang, she'd go with the guy who did the most for her.
We have a word for that: Used.
It's an ancient tactic: women have used men to survive, just as men have used women, so I don't fault her for that; it's party subconscious. She's got the smart guy eating out of her palm, so now she needs the muscles.
The smart guy needs to suddenly be busy now, doing stuff, and not having time for her. He's got the perfect excuse: He's trying to understand the ship as fast as possible to help with their survival. If she grows upset, ask, "Why are you upset? Don't you have Scott to look out for you? I wouldn't want to intrude on another man's woman."
Continuing to be the nice guy is actually the worst thing you can do.
Lastly, a note about things being done before: EVERYTHING HAS BEEN DONE BEFORE. There is no point to this line of conversation. We stand on the shoulders of giants, who have basically written out every kind of plot. The trick is in doing that plot WELL and in an entertaining manner.
Take a trip around the tvtropes website sometime, and you'll see there are topics on everything story-related. =)
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