Is 150 words too much for a drabble? LOL... Driving myself insane trying to cut it to 100! argh haha
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Originally posted by atlantis sg1 View PostI never keep it under 100. I'm just not succinct enough. I've posted 200 to 300 word drabbles. No one has sent me any flames.... yet
'Life's Journeys'.... sigpic ....
"I didn't leave - because I'd rather die myself than lose Carter."
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Not exactly
Spoiler:”So, what did you tell him?” Jack asked while taking her coat and escorting his exhausted girlfriend to his living room couch.
”Not exactly” she answered. Jack's eyebrows rose when he lifted her feet to his lap.
”Interesting answer” he said rubbing gently her feet.
”I didn't want to start any rumors” she explained. ”And I didn't want anyone to know about us, not yet.” He leaned to her and placed a gentle kiss on her cheek. ”Honey, don't you think you just started a whole bunch of rumors? Besides, we got to tell Daniel. He'll be pissed that he lost the betting pool.”sigpicThank you Britta for this lovely picture.
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Originally posted by Akamaimom View PostOver the Edge
Take Two.
(Forgive me for spamming with drabbles- I'm really having fun with these. I hope y'all don't mind. )
Spoiler:
The chasm gaped. Hellish remembrance.
Brenna was bleeding, but his eyes were on Thera.
He wasn’t supposed to know this. Know her.
He could still feel her skin beneath his own, her head pillowed on his shoulder, her breath caress his throat, her fingers on his cheek. See her smile as he teased her. Her lips against his.
This, he wasn’t supposed to know. New/old memories inundated his head. Hateful reality invaded his soul, and he teetered there – despised knowing what he now knew.
Remembering who they really were.
Not Jonah. Not Thera.
“Yes, Sir.”
“Sir.”
And, shattering, he fell.
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Originally posted by Nonnie88 View PostIs 150 words too much for a drabble? LOL... Driving myself insane trying to cut it to 100! argh haha
But hey--I'm weird that way. Use as many words as you like. I'm only Drabble Policing myself. I'm enjoying everyone else's, regardless of how many words they use.
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Originally posted by ErikaMariia View PostNot exactly
Spoiler:”So, what did you tell him?” Jack asked while taking her coat and escorting his exhausted girlfriend to his living room couch.
”Not exactly” she answered. Jack's eyebrows rose when he lifted her feet to his lap.
”Interesting answer” he said rubbing gently her feet.
”I didn't want to start any rumors” she explained. ”And I didn't want anyone to know about us, not yet.” He leaned to her and placed a gentle kiss on her cheek. ”Honey, don't you think you just started a whole bunch of rumors? Besides, we got to tell Daniel. He'll be pissed that he lost the betting pool.”
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Originally posted by Akamaimom View PostI am ALWAYS too wordy. I'm using this drabble thing as a challenge for myself to remember (from my English Major days in college) how to edit and be concise. So far, I've managed to keep each one to exactly 100 words, so I'm succeeding.
But hey--I'm weird that way. Use as many words as you like. I'm only Drabble Policing myself. I'm enjoying everyone else's, regardless of how many words they use..... sigpic ....
"I didn't leave - because I'd rather die myself than lose Carter."
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The forum is very slow at the moment, I hope this works.
Over The Edge
Spoiler:"Come in!" "Nah, I've never done it before." "It doesn't bite." "I'm not so sure about that." "Just come in." "Why?" "It's cool." "Yeah, I can have cool in the shower, too." "But this is cooler." Jack sighed. Could he ever say no to her? Sam was a few meters away from him and smiled encouragingly. "All you have to do is jump!" "Ok, beware, here I come!" He stepped gingerly over the edge into the water. "After all these years I own this cabin I've only fished in the pond, I've never thought about swimming in it!"sigpic
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