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(Um, not to interrupt the story here, but when did he wake up? Sorry, I'm confused.)
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(umm.... he didn't... AND she's right next to him....Originally posted by Raine Anaya
but, the story must go on... and i have an idea to make it make SOME sense again 
hope you don't mind if i go WAY over the word limit to rescue the plotline back.... 
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But then just as quickly, he was gone again, laying on the floor just as he had been a moment ago. Yet just as suddenly, she blinked, doing a double-take as the scenery around her completely changed. She found herself no longer in Baal's chamber next to his unconscious body, but instead face-to-face with a group of people who should have been dead.The jaffa entered the room just as Ba'al started to walk over towards Sam and placed his arm on one of her shoulders, keeping her in place.
(again, sorry bout going WAY over... don't shoot me please!!!!! )
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(don't worry about it, nice twist!)
She saw Narim, Martouf, Fifth, all the men that she
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had loved before... Those that had fallen to "Sam's Curse".
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(ooh! even AWESOMER twist!
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She was immediately dizzy with confusion as she looked upon their faces.Comment
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(great, that's what I was going for!)
They all looked at her, their eyes accusing her of...
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(grrrrrr... double post)
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... their ranks.
"No! I can't stand to lose you, too!"
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she cried out. She was still confused, but now she...
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also felt that Baal was dying and she couldn't bear it...Comment
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...especially now that she had finally realized her true feelings...
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She loved him, and it physically hurt to feel him...
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in so much pain because of her, especially since she...Comment
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