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    #16
    Chapter 14 - The Human Story - now up!

    Excerpt:

    "Most of our allies are human, or descended from humans. Some others look far different. But I am convinced we are all far more similar than we are dissimilar. Details of what SG-1 and the other exploratory teams have achieved over the last fifteen years will prove that to you, and we only need to look to our allies the Hebridians - who are comprised of two totally different species - to realise that no matter where you go, people are people. Even our allies that are a different species to us share our basic humanity.

    "I know I've talked for longer than you were expecting, but I'm hoping that this has given you a little taste of the more human side of what we've all been doing these past several years. I won't be taking questions at this point as there will be other speakers, but I would like to sincerely thank you for your time."

    With that, Daniel brought his winding speech to a close, and joined SG-1. Together they posed for photographs, arms around each others shoulders in a show of complete unity as a myriad of camera flashes bombarded them.

    Battle walked up to the lectern to inform the press of the rest of the day's schedule as SG-1 filed off, and he made sure to shake each of their hands as they left, before starting the run-down of the schedule.

    SG-1 arrived back in the waiting room to a round of applause from the chair operators.

    "Dr Jackson, that was some speech...The press liked that a lot more than either Strom's or Park's," John smiled.

    "It was a very impressive speech," Teal'c intoned, a small smile on his features.

    "You're an alien?" Dave said in shock.

    "Indeed!" Vala responded on his behalf, "We're very alieny."

    Read at "Most of our allies are human, or descended from humans. Some others look far different. But I am convinced we are all far more similar than we are dissimilar. Details of what SG-1 and the other exploratory teams have achieved over the last fifteen years will prove that to you, and we only need to look to our allies the Hebridians - who are comprised of two totally different species - to realise that no matter where you go, people are people. Even our allies that are a different species to us share our basic humanity.

    "I know I've talked for longer than you were expecting, but I'm hoping that this has given you a little taste of the more human side of what we've all been doing these past several years. I won't be taking questions at this point as there will be other speakers, but I would like to sincerely thank you for your time."

    With that, Daniel brought his winding speech to a close, and joined SG-1. Together they posed for photographs, arms around each others shoulders in a show of complete unity as a myriad of camera flashes bombarded them.

    Battle walked up to the lectern to inform the press of the rest of the day's schedule as SG-1 filed off, and he made sure to shake each of their hands as they left, before starting the run-down of the schedule.

    SG-1 arrived back in the waiting room to a round of applause from the chair operators.

    "Dr Jackson, that was some speech...The press liked that a lot more than either Strom's or Park's," John smiled.

    "It was a very impressive speech," Teal'c intoned, a small smile on his features.

    "You're an alien?" Dave said in shock.

    "Indeed!" Vala responded on his behalf, "We're very alieny."

    Read at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/14/Exile or http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...apters/6843233

    Feedback is very much appreciated!!
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      #17
      Chapter 15 - Home - now up!

      Excerpt:

      John had opted to walk to Dave's, and the security detail surrounded him at distance. He'd had time to go to the house and pack a bag full of Patrick's clothes, some diapers, some formula and some of his favourite toys. Now they were walking in the midday sun towards Dave's house, or more formally, Dave's main residence.

      It seemed an irony that their affluent community seemed to have survived unscathed when John knew from the TV that so many poor places had been wiped off the face of the Earth.

      No, here there was no damage, or so he thought, until he spotted a fed-upon corpse in the grounds of one of the nearby houses.

      John suddenly held Patrick closer, trying to shield him from anything untoward, not that the 14 month-old would understand or care about what he might see.

      "Any casualty estimates here?" John asked one of the accompanying marines.

      "Very little dart damage – the darts that came her dropped off troops...It might look unscathed sir, but we've already found hundreds of bodies in this area."

      That thought chilled John. This neighbourhood looked the same as always, but how many of his neighbours had been killed? And just how high was the death toll in the worse affected areas?

      Read at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/15/Exile or http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...apters/6867503
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        #18
        Chapter 18 - Base Camp - now up!

        Excerpt:
        "Look, come on, just let me in!" Lorne begged security.

        "You're not bringing that dog onto this base Colonel."

        Evan was growing angry now, and got out of his SUV and marched up to the Sergeant at the gate.

        "I helped save the planet yesterday...All I want to do now is to get away from the media and make sure my dog is okay...There's aliens in that mountain 24 hours a day...Maggie's a dog, for Christ's sake! Call Landry, or Carter, or whomever's currently in charge and let me in!"

        "I already called Landry sir."

        "Yes, he did," Landry suddenly appeared from the direction of the access road, "Let him in."

        "Sir?"

        "The Colonel's right – it's a dog. I think we can manage."

        "Thank you sir."

        Read at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/18/Exile or http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...apters/6993155
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          #19
          Chapter 19 - Decision Time - posted!

          Excerpt:

          "So who's all going to be here for the meet and greet?" John asked Landry as he, Rodney, Carson, Carolyn, Sam and Jack sat in the briefing room

          "It'll be Muriel O'Sullivan of the WHO, Under-Secretary-General for Humanitarian Affairs Ava Latto, and the new UN Special Envoy for Wraith Attack Survivors Dr. Carlos Molino. They UN wanted to send more people but the President agreed with Jack and I that we would only allow three on base. During the meeting we need you, Rodney and Carson present. We're assigning Lorne's team for the security detail...That'll be as much for PR as anything."

          "You want them to see a full SG-Team," John surmised

          It made sense. Lorne's team – SG-7 – was an exploratory unit like SG-1 were and like Sheppard's team had been.

          "We'll start the meet and greet at Todd's cell. The UN want to see feeding in action, and also how Todd's been held while he's been here. After that there'll be a sit-down meeting in one of the observation rooms." Jack explained.

          Read at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/19/Exile or http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...apters/7037540
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            #20
            Chapter 20 - Back to Atlantis - posted!

            Excerpt:

            ""You still kicking about here Richard?" Sam asked Woolsey who was loitering in the briefing room, "or are you needing to speak to Landry?"
            "Colonel, I've told you before to call me Dick," Woolsey gave her a polite but uncomfortable look.

            "And I've told you before to call me Sam," she smiled back at him.

            Woolsey's smile back at her was more genuine this time, and Sam rounded the table to join him as he gazed out at the Stargate.

            "What's on your mind Dick?" Sam tried out his nickname.

            "Atlantis," he stated.

            "It's playing on my mind a bit too," Sam sighed.

            "You thinking of putting in for your old job?" he queried.

            "There is no way a member of any armed force is going to get to control the city, and even if that option was open to me...I got married for a reason...Can't go off and live in another galaxy now, can I?""

            Read at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/20/Exile or http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...apters/7460204
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              #21
              Up to Chapter 29 on ff.net and A03!

              https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/28/Exile

              http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/10846826
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                #22
                Chapter 30 now up!!

                https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/30/Exile
                http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/10879832

                And artwork update

                http://archiveofourown.org/works/277...apters/6236018
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                  #23
                  Chapter 31 now up!!!

                  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/31/Exile

                  http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/10926998
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                    #24
                    Chapter 32

                    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/32/Exile
                    http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/10988801
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                      #25
                      Chapter 34

                      https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/34/Exile
                      http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/11136824

                      I know I've had no feedback at all here, but thank you to everyone on ff.net and ao3 who've been reviewing and messaging, it means a lot!!
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                        #26
                        Penultimate chapter of part 1 now up:

                        https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/35/Exile
                        http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/11185573
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                          #27
                          And that's a wrap on part 1...part 2 coming very soon!!!

                          https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9870131/35/Exile
                          http://archiveofourown.org/works/105...pters/11220934

                          Story is 95,000 words according to ff.net and 90,000 according to A03...so either way it's rather lengthy!
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                            #28
                            Hello Susan,

                            I am sure waiting for the Exile follow-up.

                            Randy

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