Originally posted by Amara D'Angeli
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It is not over. The OP posted again. I sunk to responding. I will say this, though: at least now s/he has other issues with the story so it's clear s/he's paying attention to what's going on and is thinking about things. That's great news in that we're not talking about somebody who is just hooking onto something in passing.
And please don't misunderstand - this person is otherwise generally happy with the story. Except for the darkness issue (and a couple of other minor things s/he'd have warned me against if s/he were my beta). I've been advised to do what I want, though, so...yay? At this point, I think I'm just pissed about the tone the whole thing has taken which is why I eventually responded. Of course, now I'm mad at myself for engaging.
And please don't misunderstand - this person is otherwise generally happy with the story. Except for the darkness issue (and a couple of other minor things s/he'd have warned me against if s/he were my beta). I've been advised to do what I want, though, so...yay? At this point, I think I'm just pissed about the tone the whole thing has taken which is why I eventually responded. Of course, now I'm mad at myself for engaging.
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