Stargate: Fait Accompli

[Col.Foley]

The word is good for me. July is pretty quiet, I have finished my current Captives section and Allies can get doen a bit at a time. I'm free and easy, boss!

Yeah July is good for me too because I might have one other writing project (have not decided) and my current one is wrapping up next week I hope.

[Aragon101]

Yeah July is good for me too because I might have one other writing project (have not decided) and my current one is wrapping up next week I hope.

Well... something like that. Probably not that. But close, though not really.

[Womble]

Very nice first chapter. Love the introduction of Hailey into the team, and the premise is intriguing.

Not convinced by the railgun modifications, but that's small change.

[Aragon101]

Very nice first chapter. Love the introduction of Hailey into the team, and the premise is intriguing.

Not convinced by the railgun modifications, but that's small change.

Had to give some reason for Hammond to use Railguns against a shielded target. While the techy fans may want to flay me for the completely unrealistic physics, i play the hollywood physics card. It sounds cool and for someone not that well versed it's 'plausible' and gies us an insight into Carter/Marks dynamic namely they trust each other enough to talk out their issues.

that being said, this isn't a techy fic. There will definitely be modifications and tech involved, but it's primarily a team and consequences of actions taken prior fic

[Womble]

Had to give some reason for Hammond to use Railguns against a shielded target. While the techy fans may want to flay me for the completely unrealistic physics, i play the hollywood physics card. It sounds cool and for someone not that well versed it's 'plausible' and gies us an insight into Carter/Marks dynamic namely they trust each other enough to talk out their issues.

that being said, this isn't a techy fic. There will definitely be modifications and tech involved, but it's primarily a team and consequences of actions taken prior fic

Not going to flay anyone. Like I said, small change. Think of it this way: it would've been totally against my character to leave a review without criticizing at least something.

[Burns]

Very good start (not that I'm at all surprised). Great action, nice use of keeping the characters true (anybody eals as schooled as me) and way to sbz not one adn in the whole story.

[Col.Foley]

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Well... something like that. Probably not that. But close, though not really.

Oh I did have a question. 10K characters or words?

[Aragon101]

Oh I did have a question. 10K characters or words?

well given that the first ep is 8k words, i'd say 10K words is a good goal to reach, and with editing and betaing it'll vary If you can tell the story effectively with less, why go with more?

sire tej scenic route might be nice, but it wastes gas

[Col.Foley]

well given that the first ep is 8k words, i'd say 10K words is a good goal to reach, and with editing and betaing it'll vary If you can tell the story effectively with less, why go with more?

sire tej scenic route might be nice, but it wastes gas

What the hell

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[sbz]

All the writers involved have written series/long stories so it's not like we're not used to it We're also all learning from this experience (I've become SBZ's dark apprentice ) and i really enjoy working with everyone

You seriously crack me up. I'm sure I know the answer to this but I gotta ask: does this stuff just come to you, or do you sit at the keyboard thinking it up??

[Col.Foley]

You seriously crack me up. I'm sure I know the answer to this but I gotta ask: does this stuff just come to you, or do you sit at the keyboard thinking it up??

Your his master shouldn't you know

[sbz]

Well, I'm almost 100% that he's going to say it just comes to him, that it's part of his sarcastic nature/brain.

[Aragon101]

Well, I'm almost 100% that he's going to say it just comes to him, that it's part of his sarcastic nature/brain.

and that's why you're the master

And Foley, i'm pretty sure i sent you a more detailed storyboard. I recall you saying i gave you a headache there was so much to think about but once the advil takes affect, feel free to email me

Although not right now, Canada Day still hurts my brain. I guess Independence day will be hurting yours soon too

Haha, that always makes me smile. Independence day celebrates the struggle of the United States of American to be free from British Tyranny. Canada Day just celebrates us just asking the British for our freedom I've suddenly got the inexplicable urge to watch Due South. Excuse me

[Choo1701]

Well, I'm almost 100% that he's going to say it just comes to him, that it's part of his sarcastic nature/brain.

No, no, the awful sarcasm is what I'M training him in. (Aragon also makes just sandwiches when you ask him. Just to let you know )

Just curious, BUT: what does it take to get on the "Fait Accompi" writing list? I mean, if i wanted to try and write a story, would i stand a chance?

I've suddenly got the inexplicable urge to watch Due South. Excuse me

Best comment i've ever heard about Due South is its about a "Terminator in a Mountie Uniform".

[Aragon101]

No, no, the awful sarcasm is what I'M training him in. (Aragon also makes just sandwiches when you ask him. Just to let you know )

Just the awful though. the brilliance is all me

Just curious, BUT: what does it take to get on the "Fait Accompi" writing list? I mean, if i wanted to try and write a story, would i stand a chance?

To sound professional, everyone on the 'writing team' have written longer fics.

on a silly note, You also have to put up with my annoying poking and offhanded comments. Oh wait! you do that already!

Best comment i've ever heard about Due South is its about a "Terminator in a Mountie Uniform".

Pretty much, but Paul Gross has a level of deadpan comedy that ranks him as one of the shining stars of Canada.