The opening.
Part 1.
"Dispatch the Oddysey and Franklin immediately!"
Explosions echo in the backround as the man screams over the noise.
"We've lost contact with the U.S.S Franklin and the Oddysey's shields are failing! Were going to have to deal with them on the planet surface!"
A man replies through a radio.
"We can't hold out, we are evacuating Command. You should leave to, we need to prepare for the invasion"
"If there is one. They could just bombard us from space"
Suddenly loud thuds can be heard over the radio, and after one last tremendous explosion the radio cuts, and all that can be heard is static.
"General! .......Damn it. Prepare ground zero for imminent attack, get all birds airborne. I want the congress safe in that bunker by 0200."
The radio cuts off.
In space, a planet sits. Blue as the deepest waters of Lantea, and silver as the great cities of her aswell, that existed so long ago. The planet's orbit is filled with wreckage, made from Trinium and naquadah to be exact.
Along with this debree exists several, large and very much intact vessels. These mighty ships are extravagant, boasting huge hangars which could hold a 304 and fit some extra fighters. With 2 of these on each side, the ship in total length is 4000 Kilometres to the point. Several of these ships have already entered the planet's atmosphere, and as they pass through the clouds, we can see which planet they attacked by recognition.
The ships sit over continental russia, the largest lone country on Earth.
Several, much smaller ships can be seen leaving the larger ones, perhaps vehicle or troop transport.
Earth's defenses from space were wiped out, and now there are some 20 of these ships over the beautiful planet.
War has been declared upon Earth in this untimely attack, but by a species that they now nothing of.
...The radio clicks on, and in the backround loud, extremely sharp screams can be heard, obviously not human. But among these alien outbursts are human cries of pain, suffering, borderline torture. Gunfire and plasma fire can be heard..
"They..they came form nowhere. Our allies did not respond, were presuming they were attacked before us. They are monsters...just slaughtering us by the dozens, each one of them...They decimated our ships, and our weapons seem to illeffective against them. They are not humanoid...they are definately not from this galaxy..."
An explosion sounds and then a loud blast of air, followed by a thud onto the floor. The soldier was thrown several metres by an explosion..
"Arghh....we can't..can't hold out. Please...help us...Ahh..aahh...ARRGGHHHH"
As a blood splattering sound cna be heard the radio is abruplty cut off, leaving nothing but mystery and terror in the ears of those who had heard it.
Part 2.
Episode list to date;
Episode 1 -"Heroes Fallen" - Part 1 up - Part 2 incomplete - Part 3 incomplete
Episode 2 - "The test of Might" - No parts up.
Episode 3 - "Rules are Rules" - No parts up.
Episode 4 - "The Monster Within" - No parts up.
Part 1.
Spoiler:
"Dispatch the Oddysey and Franklin immediately!"
Explosions echo in the backround as the man screams over the noise.
"We've lost contact with the U.S.S Franklin and the Oddysey's shields are failing! Were going to have to deal with them on the planet surface!"
A man replies through a radio.
"We can't hold out, we are evacuating Command. You should leave to, we need to prepare for the invasion"
"If there is one. They could just bombard us from space"
Suddenly loud thuds can be heard over the radio, and after one last tremendous explosion the radio cuts, and all that can be heard is static.
"General! .......Damn it. Prepare ground zero for imminent attack, get all birds airborne. I want the congress safe in that bunker by 0200."
The radio cuts off.
In space, a planet sits. Blue as the deepest waters of Lantea, and silver as the great cities of her aswell, that existed so long ago. The planet's orbit is filled with wreckage, made from Trinium and naquadah to be exact.
Along with this debree exists several, large and very much intact vessels. These mighty ships are extravagant, boasting huge hangars which could hold a 304 and fit some extra fighters. With 2 of these on each side, the ship in total length is 4000 Kilometres to the point. Several of these ships have already entered the planet's atmosphere, and as they pass through the clouds, we can see which planet they attacked by recognition.
The ships sit over continental russia, the largest lone country on Earth.
Several, much smaller ships can be seen leaving the larger ones, perhaps vehicle or troop transport.
Earth's defenses from space were wiped out, and now there are some 20 of these ships over the beautiful planet.
War has been declared upon Earth in this untimely attack, but by a species that they now nothing of.
...The radio clicks on, and in the backround loud, extremely sharp screams can be heard, obviously not human. But among these alien outbursts are human cries of pain, suffering, borderline torture. Gunfire and plasma fire can be heard..
"They..they came form nowhere. Our allies did not respond, were presuming they were attacked before us. They are monsters...just slaughtering us by the dozens, each one of them...They decimated our ships, and our weapons seem to illeffective against them. They are not humanoid...they are definately not from this galaxy..."
An explosion sounds and then a loud blast of air, followed by a thud onto the floor. The soldier was thrown several metres by an explosion..
"Arghh....we can't..can't hold out. Please...help us...Ahh..aahh...ARRGGHHHH"
As a blood splattering sound cna be heard the radio is abruplty cut off, leaving nothing but mystery and terror in the ears of those who had heard it.
Part 2.
Spoiler:
"Luitenant, come in. Luitenant please respond."
"That's it Beef. They broke through the last defense perimeter. Command issued the evacuation order over 7 hours ago, we have to leave."
The 2 male humans stand inside a room made of concrete, and a metal door. The only thing inside this regular sized room, is a table with an advanced looking communication temrinal, with many lights bleeping.
"No, we must complete what we came here to do. If we don't get this thing out of here, and they find it, it could easily mean the end of the fight."
"End of the fight? Beef, take a look outside for christ sake! This war was over as soon as thye attacked, we can't match up to them!"
"NO! With this research we can turn this around.."
"The war has only been going on for 4 days, and they have already seized control of 30 different countries. We don't even know why they have not bombarded us from space."
"They are looking for something.."
"But what.."
"What im working on. Look, if we can keep them at bay, then earth doesn't get fried."
Another man enters as the doors slide into the walls, he is in a black combat suit, with the airforce emblem on his chest.
"Sirs!"
He salutes, and they in turn salute him.
"What is it Major."
So far, we have established 2 characters, Beef and " the major". The third party in this conversation is yet to be named, but he is rather old.
Major
"You have been scheduled beam out."
Beef
"Beam out? From where exactly, we have no ships in orbit."
3rd party (referred to form this point as general, for now.)
"We established several transportation sites on the planet and underground, but they were in early stage develoment."
Beef
"So we could end up like a pile of goo on the floor? No thanks, i need to finish up here anyways. You go ahead, ill follow when im done."
General
"Very well. You have 6 minutes, then we beam you out."
Beef
"6 minutes! come on!"
The general directs a rather annoyed look at Beef.
Beef
"Alright fine. Get out of here."
Major
"Good luck sir."
The general and Major dissapear in the usual white light, as Beef leaves and enters a science lab. This lab has usual earth technology, veyr conventional. But one piece of technology stands out. It is in the corner of the room, and is a pillar of silver metal and fluorescent green, with a terminal and a screen on it's middle section.
Beef
"Why can't i decipher this language...It's not ancient, but it was found on earth..."
The underground complex has been picked up by the enemy sensors, as one of their larger ships decends over the complex. The gorund in the lab shakes, with dust eminating from the ceiling and walls. Several loud thuds can be heard, but they are not weapons fire.
Beef
"Ahh crap...Major come in."
Beef tries to contact him over the radio, but the ship above blocks the transmission. The thuds get closer and more frequent, sending a chill down Beef's spine, as the lab door busrts open, he jumps and lunge sbehind the desk.
"Get up idiot we gotta' move!"
He raises above the table with a sidearm in his grip, realising it is a marine and his group.
Beef
"We can't leave this here, if they find it, that's it for us."
Marine
"How the hell do you expect us to get that out of here!"
Beef
"There's a forklift over in the corner, it's how we got it in here in the first place."
Marine
"Look if those things find us, and im pretty sure we wil run into some trouble with them, that is going to slow us down."
Beef
"Use it for cover, weve tried all sorts of things to get it open, nothing works."
Marine
"Alright fine, Johnson, get to it!"
The soldier operates the forklift and picks the device up, it is about 7 feet in height. The forklift enters the corridor, barely fitting. Luckily, the turnings of the complex are much wider.
Marine
"do you have a weapon?"
Beef
"I have this?"
Beef waves his sidearm.
Marine
"What the? Do you actually thing will do any damage to them things. Take this"
He throws an assault rifle to Beef, and they leave. After travelling several corridors, designed much like the SGC's we are used to, they come into some trouble. Turning a corner, the marine driving the forklift sees the enemy ahead.
Forklift Driver
"We have contacts!"
Marine
"Defensive positions around the forklift, use it for cover!"
The enemy beings are unlike anyhting ever seen. Standing at around 7 feet, they have an arched spine and a long skull, with 2 mandibles. They have grey skin, very dark, and pure black eyes. With three fingers and an apposable thumb on each side of each hand, and 2 legs with a long tail. They have black armour, covering their shoulders, chest and thighs, and fire purple energy weapons.
Beef
"Aim for the shin, its a weaker point!"
The marines are surrounder by purple energy fire which hits the walls and the device, as the returning bullets down the 2 enemies.
Marine
"MOVE MOVE MOVE!"
The forklift goes forward, but as it does another creature swoops around the corner. The mairne operating the forklift is already comitted, and so puts the pedal to the floor, plunging the creature into the wall witht he forklift crushing it's body and impaling it.
Beef
"oah that hadda' hurt man."
Marine
"Keep moving"
The forklift turns the corner, with the marines squad leader behind it followed by beef then the squad. But from the seemingly dead remains of the enemy, one of them raises it's weapon, striking on eof the soldiers in the back. The soldiers face looses all emotion, as he drops to his knees with his comrades finishing off the enemy.
Marine
"DAMN IT!!"
Forklift driver
"Sir we have to keep moving were a few sconds away from the pickup!"
The forklift and the team make it up a ramp were light beckons upon the opening. As they all race out of it, they can see their pickup. It is a large aircraft, with 2 large thrusters on each side at the rear, and 4 (2 on each side) rotating blades on the sides for control. The team enters it, and it takes off. Beef and the marine leader make it to the pilot.
Pilot
"This is Raptor 541 returning to the nest, over."
Command respond over the radio, as the soldiers catch their breath.
Command
"We receive you raptor 541, be careful, were picking up alto of enemy activity around where you are."
The pilot looks up to the massive ship covering most of the visible sky.
Pilot
"Yup, noticed that. Thanks command, Raptor 541 out."
The raptor leaves, but soon after is followed by 2 enemt aircraft, which is obviously fighter class. They catch the Raptor with no problems.
In the forward section alarms go off, as the lights go out and red lgihting fills the area. The marines in the back spring to life, picking up their weapons and strapping in.
Pilot
"Uh-oh, looks like we got tagged on the exit. Hold on boys, this is gunna' be one bumpy ride!"
Beef
"We have to get this device to command!"
The Raptor avoids 2 plasma shots from each fighter, as a cannon at the bottom and top of the raptor swivvel around, opening up with slow fire of very large rounds, 2 of which strike one enemy fighter, resulting in its destruction, as the other avoids the fire and continues to reutnr the fire. The Raptor picks up pace, and as soon as they get over sea, 2 other, very different fighters launch missiles into it, destorying it.
Pilot
"Thanks for the assist mac"
Mac (pilot of the earth fighter)
"No problem. Weve been assigned to get you home safe and sound, apparently you have some package aboard of the biggest importance."
Beef
"So they sent 2 fighters?"
Mac
"Check your scope."
A HUD comes up on the window, showing the surroinding area. 30 green fighter shaped emblems appear.
Mac
"They sent the hwoel of squadron A to protect your sorry asses.. Now punch it."
At the "new" command centre for Earth operations, the main control room is filled with computers and consoles as you would expect. The general and Major are in the room.
Major
"Squadron A reported in sir. They have them and are en route."
General
"That stupid son of a.."
Major
"Come on sir, they got out of there."
General
"Yeah, but we had to sacrifice 12 fighters and 2 frigates to keep that mothership occupied. He was reckless.."
Major
"Beef was doing wha the thought could help us.."
General
"We shall see. For now i need you in command of the Frigate Everlance, she's just been cleared for duty and we have about 5 enemy motherships heading this direction."
Major
"We can't take on one, let alone 5!"
General
"We know. I have made contact with someone who can help us.."
"That's it Beef. They broke through the last defense perimeter. Command issued the evacuation order over 7 hours ago, we have to leave."
The 2 male humans stand inside a room made of concrete, and a metal door. The only thing inside this regular sized room, is a table with an advanced looking communication temrinal, with many lights bleeping.
"No, we must complete what we came here to do. If we don't get this thing out of here, and they find it, it could easily mean the end of the fight."
"End of the fight? Beef, take a look outside for christ sake! This war was over as soon as thye attacked, we can't match up to them!"
"NO! With this research we can turn this around.."
"The war has only been going on for 4 days, and they have already seized control of 30 different countries. We don't even know why they have not bombarded us from space."
"They are looking for something.."
"But what.."
"What im working on. Look, if we can keep them at bay, then earth doesn't get fried."
Another man enters as the doors slide into the walls, he is in a black combat suit, with the airforce emblem on his chest.
"Sirs!"
He salutes, and they in turn salute him.
"What is it Major."
So far, we have established 2 characters, Beef and " the major". The third party in this conversation is yet to be named, but he is rather old.
Major
"You have been scheduled beam out."
Beef
"Beam out? From where exactly, we have no ships in orbit."
3rd party (referred to form this point as general, for now.)
"We established several transportation sites on the planet and underground, but they were in early stage develoment."
Beef
"So we could end up like a pile of goo on the floor? No thanks, i need to finish up here anyways. You go ahead, ill follow when im done."
General
"Very well. You have 6 minutes, then we beam you out."
Beef
"6 minutes! come on!"
The general directs a rather annoyed look at Beef.
Beef
"Alright fine. Get out of here."
Major
"Good luck sir."
The general and Major dissapear in the usual white light, as Beef leaves and enters a science lab. This lab has usual earth technology, veyr conventional. But one piece of technology stands out. It is in the corner of the room, and is a pillar of silver metal and fluorescent green, with a terminal and a screen on it's middle section.
Beef
"Why can't i decipher this language...It's not ancient, but it was found on earth..."
The underground complex has been picked up by the enemy sensors, as one of their larger ships decends over the complex. The gorund in the lab shakes, with dust eminating from the ceiling and walls. Several loud thuds can be heard, but they are not weapons fire.
Beef
"Ahh crap...Major come in."
Beef tries to contact him over the radio, but the ship above blocks the transmission. The thuds get closer and more frequent, sending a chill down Beef's spine, as the lab door busrts open, he jumps and lunge sbehind the desk.
"Get up idiot we gotta' move!"
He raises above the table with a sidearm in his grip, realising it is a marine and his group.
Beef
"We can't leave this here, if they find it, that's it for us."
Marine
"How the hell do you expect us to get that out of here!"
Beef
"There's a forklift over in the corner, it's how we got it in here in the first place."
Marine
"Look if those things find us, and im pretty sure we wil run into some trouble with them, that is going to slow us down."
Beef
"Use it for cover, weve tried all sorts of things to get it open, nothing works."
Marine
"Alright fine, Johnson, get to it!"
The soldier operates the forklift and picks the device up, it is about 7 feet in height. The forklift enters the corridor, barely fitting. Luckily, the turnings of the complex are much wider.
Marine
"do you have a weapon?"
Beef
"I have this?"
Beef waves his sidearm.
Marine
"What the? Do you actually thing will do any damage to them things. Take this"
He throws an assault rifle to Beef, and they leave. After travelling several corridors, designed much like the SGC's we are used to, they come into some trouble. Turning a corner, the marine driving the forklift sees the enemy ahead.
Forklift Driver
"We have contacts!"
Marine
"Defensive positions around the forklift, use it for cover!"
The enemy beings are unlike anyhting ever seen. Standing at around 7 feet, they have an arched spine and a long skull, with 2 mandibles. They have grey skin, very dark, and pure black eyes. With three fingers and an apposable thumb on each side of each hand, and 2 legs with a long tail. They have black armour, covering their shoulders, chest and thighs, and fire purple energy weapons.
Beef
"Aim for the shin, its a weaker point!"
The marines are surrounder by purple energy fire which hits the walls and the device, as the returning bullets down the 2 enemies.
Marine
"MOVE MOVE MOVE!"
The forklift goes forward, but as it does another creature swoops around the corner. The mairne operating the forklift is already comitted, and so puts the pedal to the floor, plunging the creature into the wall witht he forklift crushing it's body and impaling it.
Beef
"oah that hadda' hurt man."
Marine
"Keep moving"
The forklift turns the corner, with the marines squad leader behind it followed by beef then the squad. But from the seemingly dead remains of the enemy, one of them raises it's weapon, striking on eof the soldiers in the back. The soldiers face looses all emotion, as he drops to his knees with his comrades finishing off the enemy.
Marine
"DAMN IT!!"
Forklift driver
"Sir we have to keep moving were a few sconds away from the pickup!"
The forklift and the team make it up a ramp were light beckons upon the opening. As they all race out of it, they can see their pickup. It is a large aircraft, with 2 large thrusters on each side at the rear, and 4 (2 on each side) rotating blades on the sides for control. The team enters it, and it takes off. Beef and the marine leader make it to the pilot.
Pilot
"This is Raptor 541 returning to the nest, over."
Command respond over the radio, as the soldiers catch their breath.
Command
"We receive you raptor 541, be careful, were picking up alto of enemy activity around where you are."
The pilot looks up to the massive ship covering most of the visible sky.
Pilot
"Yup, noticed that. Thanks command, Raptor 541 out."
The raptor leaves, but soon after is followed by 2 enemt aircraft, which is obviously fighter class. They catch the Raptor with no problems.
In the forward section alarms go off, as the lights go out and red lgihting fills the area. The marines in the back spring to life, picking up their weapons and strapping in.
Pilot
"Uh-oh, looks like we got tagged on the exit. Hold on boys, this is gunna' be one bumpy ride!"
Beef
"We have to get this device to command!"
The Raptor avoids 2 plasma shots from each fighter, as a cannon at the bottom and top of the raptor swivvel around, opening up with slow fire of very large rounds, 2 of which strike one enemy fighter, resulting in its destruction, as the other avoids the fire and continues to reutnr the fire. The Raptor picks up pace, and as soon as they get over sea, 2 other, very different fighters launch missiles into it, destorying it.
Pilot
"Thanks for the assist mac"
Mac (pilot of the earth fighter)
"No problem. Weve been assigned to get you home safe and sound, apparently you have some package aboard of the biggest importance."
Beef
"So they sent 2 fighters?"
Mac
"Check your scope."
A HUD comes up on the window, showing the surroinding area. 30 green fighter shaped emblems appear.
Mac
"They sent the hwoel of squadron A to protect your sorry asses.. Now punch it."
At the "new" command centre for Earth operations, the main control room is filled with computers and consoles as you would expect. The general and Major are in the room.
Major
"Squadron A reported in sir. They have them and are en route."
General
"That stupid son of a.."
Major
"Come on sir, they got out of there."
General
"Yeah, but we had to sacrifice 12 fighters and 2 frigates to keep that mothership occupied. He was reckless.."
Major
"Beef was doing wha the thought could help us.."
General
"We shall see. For now i need you in command of the Frigate Everlance, she's just been cleared for duty and we have about 5 enemy motherships heading this direction."
Major
"We can't take on one, let alone 5!"
General
"We know. I have made contact with someone who can help us.."
Episode list to date;
Episode 1 -"Heroes Fallen" - Part 1 up - Part 2 incomplete - Part 3 incomplete
Episode 2 - "The test of Might" - No parts up.
Episode 3 - "Rules are Rules" - No parts up.
Episode 4 - "The Monster Within" - No parts up.
Other wise great! 
and that's not meant as a criticism, things usually become a cliche' because they work(ed).
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