Stargate: Universal Sin - (Alternate Ending to Atlantis from Mid Season 4)

[Guest]

ok, if you ever need some more in depth things about the US military just drop me a line and I will do what i could to help you out.

If I were Shepphard I would have done that also. Ive done something kinda like that, but thats going to be a PM if you would like to know.

Sure. PM away

I'm curious... does anyone see any glaring holes? (i can think of one and i'm kicking myself now hoping noone sees it... but now everyone's gonna look and find even more and i'm going to hang my head in shame )

[Guest]

So i've decided to make some picture teasers to go along with the story.

Here's a teaser for the next episode Oh uhhh forgive the widescreen. This is a screenshot from Stargate Empire At War and i've got a widescreen LCD on my desktop

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In case it's not clear, here's the full size image

[Ltcolshepjumper]

Sure. PM away

I'm curious... does anyone see any glaring holes? (i can think of one and i'm kicking myself now hoping noone sees it... but now everyone's gonna look and find even more and i'm going to hang my head in shame )

Nothing glaring. Mitchell's a full-bird colonel, though. Love the story. It's the best that I've seen so far, and it isn't too far-fetched.

[Guest]

Nothing glaring. Mitchell's a full-bird colonel, though. Love the story. It's the best that I've seen so far, and it isn't too far-fetched.

Really? I always thought he was a Lt. Col.

Oh well.. can't get em all

i love how you say "too far fetched" so it's a little far fetched

nah, i appreciate the support and hope you're enjoying it

Time for teaser picture number 2!

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[Ltcolshepjumper]

Really? I always thought he was a Lt. Col.

Oh well.. can't get em all

i love how you say "too far fetched" so it's a little far fetched

nah, i appreciate the support and hope you're enjoying it

Time for teaser picture number 2!

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I may have missed something in reading them... who knows I've read some that are waaaaayyyyy out there.

[Guest]

I may have missed something in reading them... who knows I've read some that are waaaaayyyyy out there.

Oy so have I I'd name examples but meh...

anyways, final teaser picture. I've also got more pictars that go with the actual episode some screen caps, some machinama it's proving to be fun to make these

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[Guest]

New Episode!

Episode 7 - Median

With a plan now formulating, the leaders in Atlantis are forced to choose between their loyalty and their morals. The expedition continues to prepare for the inevitable, except it comes too soon. Ronon and Daniel end up getting to know each other up close and personal while Atlantis fends off a siege that is not all that it appears.

The end has begun, and now the only thing left is to choose their destiny. An easy choice for few, a difficult choice for many.

This one's got lots! A Space Battle, a gunfight, snark, drama, angst, a little tragedy...

And new feature! Pictures to go along with the story!


Wraith Hives

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Wraith Hive under Traveler Fire

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Sneaky Jumper

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Sam's new Background image (I actually use this as my background on my desktop i love my widescreen LCD... there's a little joke in the picture, 20 points to whoever gets it!)

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Refit Daedalus

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Larrin is told the 'Plan'

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'Fessing up

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[Rudy Pena]

In the Sam's new background pic, there looks like there is a frying pan towards the bottom right of the pic.

[Dodgified]

In sam's new background pic
is that a cylon basestar on the right?

[Guest]

In the Sam's new background pic, there looks like there is a frying pan towards the bottom right of the pic.

Close... you're in teh right area it's a 4th wall joke.

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The Sci-Fi watermark is melting from the blast i took this screenshot from nBSG S4E9) So yes... that IS a Cylon Basestar on the right

[Rudy Pena]

Close... you're in teh right area it's a 4th wall joke.

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The Sci-Fi watermark is melting from the blast i took this screenshot from nBSG S4E9) So yes... that IS a Cylon Basestar on the right

cool, i see it now.


Oh and that new epsoide is good, I like how its getting better story wise. Nice, Darker and cool.

[Guest]

Since i had the week off, i made a special little something.

Still Frame of Daedalus firing new forward cannons.

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And for those who want something a little extra...

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See a 4 second teaser for the Refit Daedalus in action

EDIT: Since the medium i'm using (Stargate Empire at War) doesn't have my class of the ship (with teh extra cargo pods), i can only do so much in as far as editing the game to suit my needs. But hey, Machinama is machinama!

[Nanjana]

Hi

I just start your story and I have to say I enjoy it! I will read every day a little more! Hope it will not take me to much time, but I gess because it's so good I can't come to an reading end!

[Guest]

Hi

I just start your story and I have to say I enjoy it! I will read every day a little more! Hope it will not take me to much time, but I gess because it's so good I can't come to an reading end!

lol well you can take your time, It's not going anywhere and there's still 4 episodes to go (maybe more if ithe circumstances allow)

it's LONG just FYI. It's very character focused and darker than SGA was.

In fact, to any new readers i'll give a warning list here and tack it to teh first post.

WARNING: This is a Darker fic that gets very angsty, there is mention of torture on more than one occasion, strong violence in some chapters, as well as recurrring character deaths. One main character death... sorta. you'll see what happens.

No real shippiness, but there is plenty of H/C that may seem like it. no pairings will be confirmed as of this moment.

[boeli]

very good chapter again.
might that picture have been (Spoiler for BSG season 4 finale)

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the destruction of the colony?