good chapter... lord Bra'tac? i would figure that Bra'tac would be very against ohters calling him lord lol oh well.
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It makes since, he is a 'system lord'. besides it's not like he is pretending to be a god.Comment
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Gotta agree it was VERY short.
I tore through it on my Cell Phone in only a few minutes.
I'm sure we're all willing to wait a bit longer if it means the chapters are more fleshed out.Comment
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If it was hinted then why wold you go. It not like you weren't expecting it a little. the only reason I would go is if the story gets stagnate.Comment
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That is soooooo amazing. You can do something like that. But it is cool.Comment
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This chapter is great.........Comment
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damn great!check my story's:
Battlestar group 16
and Under Siege
and respond at:
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Interesting addition to the struggle.
(This happens to make two fanfics here updated in one day!)Comment
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Next chapter is up people.
Damn I really want the next chapter now.Last edited by IWKYZerocool; 21 October 2009, 12:11 PM.sigpicIf The Simpsons ever get on StargateComment
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It's weird that bra'tac went on this mission... this is something they should have done on their own.
The chaper was entertaining and all but picking up of few ppl seemed a little waste of precious and oh so sweet text.
It's weird seeing mckay and mrs. Mckay like that, i know they are married(i thought mckay was smarter than that), it's just that they weren't so 'cuddly cuddly' in the 5th season... these two years that have passed are hard to get used to....science/physics/universe can't tell good from bad, which means that both concepts are abstract and don't matter... don't be afraid of acting on this knowledge...Comment
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I know the story has picked up some pace, how the chapter ended I just want the next one to read. Oh well I will read the whole lot again.sigpicIf The Simpsons ever get on StargateComment
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I like how McKay acts not liking the 'pet-name' Keller gave him, that makes since plus together for a while it's just weird seeing it so suddenly.
I imagined something funny happening. alright it's like this someone says to them something like like "Dr. Mckay, no the other Dr.Mckay." sounded better in my head.
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As for the suggestions of the passage of time, let me iron that out.
ROTA begins approximately 2 years after Season 5(minus EATG).
Episode 13 begins approximately 2 years after that.
So, for character development, FOUR years have passed since last seen on screen.
Spoiler:
Again, this is a large story and is NOT structured 1 year per season.Comment
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That is a long time. Wonder what happens in the time skips.Comment
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