Return of the Ancients

[Lord-Keroth]

this is a story that is writen better than many professional novels. I think this would make a great movie or series. I wish your story was used in season five instead of the super wraith ship fail. this is a superb story and the plot is gripping and just amazing.
you must like dr wier because you brought her back. I think that was a good choice I felt bad watching her drift in space. but I want to see more of this. I give it a 10 out of 10 must read

[Guest750]

Liking it so far.

[altimasmitty]

Hey can you keep up up to date on when you psot new info. I really cannot wait for chapter Six to finish. Finally a look at the rest of the crew at work.

[Rudy Pena]

this is a great story.

[_Famrir_]

very good i like it tho alterrans is spelled Alterans and Alterra is spelled Altera.

[Aer'ki]

very good i like it tho alterrans is spelled Alterans and Alterra is spelled Altera.

I've seen that before, along with a different spelling for the androids in SG-1, which may have got their name as a derivative. As far as I know Terra has always been spelled with two r's, and since the term seems to have been linked to the Alterra(I think the writers chose Alterra from Terra, actually), I chose to spell it that way.

Maybe I'm wrong on that, but the only place it is written in the series is in the book found under glastonbury...and I'm pretty sure the book was written in Ancient...so the English spelling is a bit arbitrary.

[_Famrir_]

really good i have finally finished the first 6! arkei can u explain the 6 gate system thingy more because how u explained it in the series was kinda hazy to me because stevenson couldn't talk

[bigM]

Very good story, I like it
it reads easy

[Shinto-Male]

i found something interesting




Stevenson nodded slowly. “I plan to stay here and deal with the Wraith while I develop. What of the Furlings?”

Lyran shook his head. “I would not involve them so soon. They are still in Ryss and Nextor, and have yet to attract the attention of the Empire. Do not involve them until you are in a position to protect them.”

“I’ll keep that in mind. At least they’re still alive.”

“Alive, but at risk. They are currently involved in a war of their own against an enemy far more powerful than the Wraith.




will somebody create a fanfiction series based on this?

[Shinto-Male]

at least 23 galaxies have a gate network!

[altimasmitty]

I highly enjoy this series simply because it's a very wide representation of the stargate franchise. Things aren't being overlooked because of budgetary reasons, plot holes are mostly filled, and for the most important part, IT HAS COMMON SENSE!

I love that while the story timeline has spanned over a year. Everything has been very precise, no BS just common sense. I do feel that the the activity of this new group does seem a bit slow. I am not sure if that is something intentional or not.

I'm quite enjoying your work Aer'Ki (as you well know) and i totally encourage you to further showcase that Humanity isn't the only culture to exist in two whole galaxies (and even more when we go to others!)

I have always thought that is was weird that we never showed other cultures take a led through the Stargate like we have. In all 10 years of SG1 and 5 of Atlantis. Only one civilization stepped to the plate and that was the Genii.

I'm guessing alot of people will be screaming at you for the Teyla bit, but honestly it makes sense to me. This is your Chimera... Stand Firm! (actually i get the feeling more will happen that will make people go wide eyed in shock)

I cannot wait. I hope he never makes Sheppard an Alterran. I like his go after them addittude, but he has been too much of a wise guy for my liking.

KEEP THOSE EPS's COMMING!!!!

[altimasmitty]

I just realized my spelling sucks.

[NIMBUS]

this is the greatest thing ever!!!!!!
i like the enormity of the things Stevenson does, you would never see them(sg-1,sga writers) try to convert whole j**f* lives in such a way, or make T*y** an a*t**r*n on tv, they are just scared to do it, in fears viewers won't like even though it so SUPER COOL

ofc there some things i don't like, like earth being the bad guy isn't pleasant, but i can see ioa turning into a bigger than it is now monster, but i don't see USAF going so easily with it, but those are nothing compaired with THHHHHEEEE COOOOOOOLNESSS of this thing

[Shinto-Male]

how many chapters will episode 7 have?

[Aer'ki]

how many chapters will episode 7 have?

5 per episode.