Originally posted by SF_and_Coffee
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As you said, you were aware of Earth’s location on the map as was I. By indicating it was wrong, one would only have to google to see what I meant and draw their conclusions.
I was merely trying to suggest other options but it appears you are convinced of your view, so I would like to propose we simply agree to disagree.
As for the map, I have been working on several fanfic projects and am thinking of creating a map that would work with my interpretation of canonical material.
Originally posted by Choo1701
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Originally posted by SaraBahama
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Originally posted by SaraBahama
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I’m just wondering but is it necessary to actually discuss the distance, means of transportation and exact location of the planet in your fic? You’re using a ha’tak for your minor lord, right? According to the Stargate Wikia, which you’re basing the speed on (as would I, since there are no other sources), it can carry about 2000 Jaffa. Since the minimal crew is twelve, I’m assuming that means the rest of the Jaffa are there to serve their lord and not necessarily needed to fly the ship/protect the Goa'uld. So would that and the cargo capacity be enough room for your planet’s (starting) population? Otherwise it might be best to drop the logistics and have the SGC (or whoever you’re going to use) make assumptions about it, if you still want to include some of the details.
Originally posted by SaraBahama
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Originally posted by SaraBahama
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As for the pov hopping, I am guilty of that. I do a lot of pov hopping, sometimes even alternating between paragraphs. But I like doing it, because like WraithRichard I like omniscience. I need my readers to be all-knowing at times because it works great for angst, especially when people misinterpret each other. I’ve tried sticking to one pov and do sometimes, but mostly I alternate throughout scenes/chapters.
Just a few weeks ago I was discussing it with the person I beta for, as we were discussing povs and stuff. We actually tried rewriting one of my scenes to make it one pov and it just didn’t have the same effect.
I only use scene breaks if the actual scene changes. For the alternating povs I just show/tell it by writing it Sam-ish or use Teal'c’s alien phrasing for his spoken lines as well as interior monologue, for example.
None of my readers have ever complained about it and most actually like my style (or so they say).
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