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Is it common, or at least not unheard of, for American High School's to have War Memorials?
Or is it more a thing for colleges to have?
sigpic Long before you and I were born, others beat these benches with their empty cups,
To the night and its stars, to the here and now with who we are.
Another sunrise with my sad captains, with who I choose to lose my mind,
And if it's all we only pass this way but once, what a perfect waste of time.
I've seen colleges with them, but I don't know of any high schools with war memorials, but I have seen other commemorative memorials...
Ok, thanks guys.
sigpic Long before you and I were born, others beat these benches with their empty cups,
To the night and its stars, to the here and now with who we are.
Another sunrise with my sad captains, with who I choose to lose my mind,
And if it's all we only pass this way but once, what a perfect waste of time.
It's kind of a continuity error, involving when Egeria was captured by Ra. The fic is posted on ff.net and it is the third link under my sig. It's the third chapter.
Thing is, this kind of skews with what I had planned, I guess I could change it, but how?
Ah, I see. Well, here's where you're going to have to put your thinking cap on as a writer. You can either make your story AU (leave it as-is and let your readership know you're diverging from canon details; your story becomes a what-if scenario along with whatever it already way) or you can fix it and then brainstorm how this new change affects the story line. Does it really affect the story line in an important way? Does that detail change your theme? If you were to correct that detail would your theme still be attainable?
Thanks fems! That's perfect! Just what I needed to know!
You're welcome. Glad I could help.
Unmade Plans (WIP: 11/20): Sam's life takes a turn in an unexpected direction when she's faced with an unplanned pregnancy. The decision to keep the baby and raise it on her own will alter her life forever. Relationships are put to the test, especially the one between her and Jack. She doesn't know what to expect from him and he surprises her at every turn.
On FFnet or AO3
My S/J fics can be found on FFnet and AO3. I also tweet and tumble about the ship and my writing/stories.
Follow up question - What about the Marine detachment?
sigpic Long before you and I were born, others beat these benches with their empty cups,
To the night and its stars, to the here and now with who we are.
Another sunrise with my sad captains, with who I choose to lose my mind,
And if it's all we only pass this way but once, what a perfect waste of time.
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