John Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan Appreciation/Ship/Discussion Thread

[Linda06]

Yeah i got the idea what Elflinn meant but thanks for clarifying it!!

I really wish they would repeat season 3 on the telly,it's been ages since i saw it and i miss the Sheyla moments from it!

[MrsB108]

Happy 100 posts, MrsB! It's good thing you ladies are chatty! Makes for good reading! (Never mind the one who has under 200 posts in 8 months )

Thanks Yappichick!

Mrs. B, great fourth chapter and congrats on 100 posts!

Thanks Padme!

I know I read both of them. And, I know they were both good!!

I'm still recovering from the opening line in part 4 of your fic. Nightmares.
I think it is that one.

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The where John is shirtless under a thin sheet. My God.
As I said before I had a whump moment and envisioned Shep
intubated, nekkid, under a bed sheet!!!

LOL Scifan liked that part too I think

[Padme18]

ladies, 'Irresistable' is next on my list of epsidoes to do quotes from so that I can catch up with Camy and post them with the pics in Stargaze.

[DONNA BOOTH]

Thanks for the reviews padme im really enjoying reading them

[Padme18]

Your Welcome Donna!

[DONNA BOOTH]

No problem i really love reading reviews of jt episodes

[MrsB108]

Part 5 -

Spoiler:

Teyla opened her eyes and found she was lying on her back in one of the many hallways of Atlantis. Silence surrounded her and all the lights were dim. She quickly sat up inspecting herself, unsure of how she had gotten there. She remembered the creature she had last encountered, half child, half Wraith and shuddered at its horrid image etched into her mind. She stood shakily and was determined to figure out what was going on. She walked for many hallways, checking rooms, treading cautiously, finding nothing but silence and shadows.

Just when her legs were beginning to tire her, she heard an echoed scuffling behind her. She turned and her heart leapt into her throat as she spotted two Wraith side by side at the end of the hall she was in, their pace increasing with each step towards her. No weapons, she turned and ran as fast as she could, changing hallways, and ducking through doorways. She entered a room and closed the door behind her, holding her breath in anticipation. Staring at the door, she started to back up into the middle of the room. Something moved behind her. She gasped and turned.


There Ronon sat, half in light, half in shadow. A bloodied knife gripped tightly in his hand, the blood glistened softly in the dim glow of the lamp. “Ronon?” she whispered. Ronon’s eyes never met hers. They were fixed steady on the door. “Ronon, what is happening? There are Wraith in the city!” She was barely audible. “It’s no use, Teyla. Where there’s one, there’s a hundred. Where there’s a hundred, there’s a thousand. We can’t stop them. They’ll eat our flesh over and over again.” His voice cracked in despair. Teyla walked over to Ronon and put her hand gently on his shoulder, they way she often did when things were grim. He flinched slightly at her touch and begrudgingly brought his eyes to meet hers. “Ronon, I do not know what is going on but I feel there is something very wrong about all this. Do you not feel it? This….this fog clouding our heads? It feels as though I am awake inside my own dreams.” He looked at her blankly. She sighed and started again. “Ronon, think. How did we get to be here? How did the Wraith enter the city? Where IS everyone? Where is Colonel Sheppard?”

Ronon looked thoughtful for a moment before returning a deadly gaze to the door. “I’m sure they’re all dead.” Teyla stood back, her mouth agape at the mere thought. “No, you are wrong. If he….if they were dead I would sense it. They are here somewhere and I will find them. We need them to fight this and figure out what is going on. I ask you to come with me, Ronon.” Ronon did not respond. Teyla sighed heavily. “Be well, Ronon. I will return for you.” She tried to feign a smile to him as she left him there, but her heart sank heavy at the thought of finding anyone she cared for dead. An image of Colonel Sheppards dead body flashed through her mind, and fueled her body with such an intense rage, she felt as though she would choke on her own breath. Nothing would stand in her way of finding them.With that thought, she slipped out unnoticed by the Wraith into the hallway.

Part 4 -

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John lay shirtless, sleeping silently, his body half covered by only a thin sheet. He awoke to the sound of gunfire and found himself off world, in an unknown forest. He was crouched behind some brush, holding his P-90 close to his chest, Teyla and Ronon on either side of him. They both were staring out into the woods behind him, concentrating. He looked around, confused, and instinctively ducked when a barrage of bullets clamored their way. “Wait a minute! What’s going on here?!” he asked to either of them. Neither moved, their eyes steady on their targets “I’ll take the two behind the bunker, you guys take the others,” Ronon gruffed as he began to rise from his position, John spoke to him in a hushed voice. “Ronon, wait!” Ronon took off without so much as looking back. “God damn it! What is going on, Teyla???!!”John panted as more bullets came flying by their position. "Do not worry, Colonel. I'll take point," and she stood quickly, firing multiple shots into the forest before somersaulting behind a nearby tree. John looked down at his gun, not knowing what to do and decidedly followed suit. After multiple rounds were shot back and forth, he finally spotted a Wraith hiding behind a large rock and shot him straight through his chest. He started to follow Teyla to the next cover, when he noticed another Wraith coming up dangerously close behind Ronon. "Ronon, behind you!" John yelled in his earpiece, but it was too late. The Wraith held up his gun and shot Ronon point blank in the back of the head. "RONON!" John cried. Ronon's body dropped to a heap on the forest floor, his eyes open, blood pouring out of the back of his head. "Teyla, Teyla, Ronon's been shot! There’s too many of them, we have to fall back!" John looked around wildly. Teyla was nowhere to be seen. "Teyla!" he yelled frantically. His heart stopped when he spotted Teyla ahead, surrounded and disarmed by three Wraith. She stood there amid them perfectly still. Her tearful eyes were on John as he screamed at the top of his lungs and ran towards her, running out into the open, calling her name and firing wildly at the surrounding Wraith. But he was nowhere close enough to stop one of them from jamming their hand into her chest and draining the life from her. Her eyes never left the sight of John, who was trying so hard to reach her, tears streaming from his face as he ran to no avail. His bullets seemed to pass right through the Wraith. He felt a flash of white hot pain sear through his leg and he fell on his face into the dirt, clutching his knee. The Wraith who had killed Teyla stood above John, as he lay there bleeding and heartbroken. He put a well placed foot to John’s throat and snarled at him, baring his teeth. “John Sheppard. Your failure as a leader knows no end. You could not even protect those closest to you. Your most loyal and bravest friend is dead. The woman you loved but failed to tell is dead. Their deaths are meaningless and you are responsible.” John looked over at Teyla’s limp body and his heart sank to a place he dared not go. He looked back at the Wraith and with all the strength he could muster, said “Go ahead. Kill me.” The Wraith laughed cruelly and said, “No, Colonel Sheppard. You’re punishment will be much worse. You’ll live your life knowing what you lost, suffering every day without them. Without her.” John’s eyes filled with tears and he shook uncontrollably. The Wraith removed his foot from John’s throat and kicked him in the side of his head, making John feel as if he were falling into the blackness of an unseen abyss.

Part 3 -

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Rodney had fallen asleep at his computer in his lab, face resting comfortably on the keyboard, small drops of drool slowly falling from his open mouth. He awoke to find himself in the control room. Everyone was there, running amuck and talking loudly. The whole room was shaking and sparks were flying out from all sorts of control panels. "Whats going on?!" Rodney exclaimed loudly over the din. Radek was at the main control board with another technician talking rapidly and turned around quickly. "Rodney, the city is under attack! You have to do something!" Rodney stood still for a moment, very confused as to what was going on. Then he sprang into action, pushing the technician out of the way and looked at the main control panel. Rodney's eyes widened in surprise. Nothing on the panel made any sense to him. Numbers were upside down and sideways, words read in a language that he didn't know. Rodney frantically began pressing buttons."What....what is this? he cried ducking, as sparks flew at his head. "I can't read any of this!" The quaking grew worse. "The shield has been breached!The Wraith have entered the city!" the technician yelled. Rodney felt helpless as Radek stopped and looked at him very strangely. "You dissapoint me, Rodney," he said with an eerie calm. Col. Carter approached him from the crowd and said, "You failed us, Rodney." Rodney saw three Wraith making their way up the steps. He gasped in horror as two more faces approached him. Dr Weir had terrible lacerations on her face, bleeding slowly as she put her hand on his shoulder and said, "You let me down." Rodney looked at her with heartbroken eyes before another hand touched him. He turned to see his dear friend Carson, baring scorched flesh, as he told him, "You let us all down, Rodney." Rodney closed his eyes in disbelief and felt as if he were falling in an unseen abyss.

Part 2 -

Spoiler:

Ronon's snoring was deafening as he lay face down, sprawled,and uncovered across his bed, his arms and legs dangling off the edges. When the fog entered him, he had not been dreaming. He opened his eyes and found himself alone in the training room, standing dead center, holding a large jagged knife. He stared down at it curiously, for he did not remember how he got here or what he was doing. Brushing his long hair from his face, he turned suddenly hearing a low growl behind him. His eyes glowed with anger as he spotted a Wraith, standing there, screeching. His body tensed and took position as he focused his eyes on the enemy. He baded the Wraith, waving his knife around, toying with him, before he lunged at him, full speed, hair flying, and slitting its throat. Ronon stood victorious over it's lifeless body, when he began to wonder how the Wraith had gotten in Atlantis in the first place. Surprised, Ronon heard another low growl behind him. Standing there strangely, were two Wraith this time. Ronon began to sweat. He knew they had not been there before. Still, he took stance and focused, carefully carving them up one at a time. He panted slightly and wiped the bloody knife on his pantleg, before starting to walk towards the door.
Growl.
Ronon feared turning around, yet he did ever so slowly to find there were four Wraith this time, each of them snarling and snapping at him. He dove at them, subduing two of them before the others had a chance to pin him down to the training room floor. His eyes were filled with hatred and confusion as the Wraith straddling him lifted it's arm in the air before striking him hard in the chest. Ronon closed his eyes in pain and felt as if he were falling back into an unseen abyss.

[Elflinn]

*lol* When you write it like that it sounds like you want him dead..

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Thunk is more a fangirl ting I guess..where you can talk and gush over the fact that is Joe/John....

Whump..is in easy terms..hurt/comfort... where you don't mind seeing him hurt be it physical or emotional.. and then him rising to the occasion ..coming out of it stronger in the end...

Well something like that... *lol*

Hope it clarified a little better Linda06

Nina- You'll get kick out of this.

Spoiler:

SheppyD loved the description of the whump and the fact that I concluded
with him intubated....You know that is one of her dreams to see Shep go
through....

[Elflinn]

Part 5 -

Spoiler:

Teyla opened her eyes and found she was lying on her back in one of the many hallways of Atlantis. Silence surrounded her and all the lights were dim. She quickly sat up inspecting herself, unsure of how she had gotten there. She remembered the creature she had last encountered, half child, half Wraith and shuddered at its horrid image etched into her mind. She stood shakily and was determined to figure out what was going on. She walked for many hallways, checking rooms, treading cautiously, finding nothing but silence and shadows.

Just when her legs were beginning to tire her, she heard an echoed scuffling behind her. She turned and her heart leapt into her throat as she spotted two Wraith side by side at the end of the hall she was in, their pace increasing with each step towards her. No weapons, she turned and ran as fast as she could, changing hallways, and ducking through doorways. She entered a room and closed the door behind her, holding her breath in anticipation. Staring at the door, she started to back up into the middle of the room. Something moved behind her. She gasped and turned.


There Ronon sat, half in light, half in shadow. A bloodied knife gripped tightly in his hand, the blood glistened softly in the dim glow of the lamp. “Ronon?” she whispered. Ronon’s eyes never met hers. They were fixed steady on the door. “Ronon, what is happening? There are Wraith in the city!” She was barely audible. “It’s no use, Teyla. Wherever there’s one, there’s a hundred. Where there’s a hundred, there’s a thousand. We can’t stop them. They’ll eat our flesh over and over again.” His voice cracked in despair. Teyla walked over to Ronon and put her hand gently on his shoulder, they way she often did when things were grim. He flinched slightly at her touch and begrudgingly brought his eyes to meet hers. “Ronon, I do not know what is going on but I feel there is something very wrong about all this. Do you not feel it? This….this fog clouding our heads? It feels as though I am awake inside my own dreams.” He looked at her blankly. She sighed and started again. “Ronon, think. How did we get to be here? How did the Wraith enter the city? Where IS everyone? Where is Colonel Sheppard?”

Ronon looked thoughtful for a moment before returning a deadly gaze to the door. “I’m sure they’re all dead.” Teyla stood back, her mouth agape at the mere thought. “No, you are wrong. If he….if they were dead I would sense it. They are here somewhere and I will find them. We need them to fight this and figure out what is going on. I ask you to come with me, Ronon.” Ronon did not respond. Teyla sighed heavily. “Be well, Ronon. I will return for you.” She tried to feign a smile to him as she left him there, but her heart sank heavy at the thought of finding anyone she cared for dead. An image of Colonel Sheppards dead body flashed through her mind, and fueled her body with such an intense rage, she felt as though she would choke on her own breath. Nothing would stand in her way of finding them.With that thought, she slipped out unnoticed by the Wraith into the hallway.

Part 4 -

Spoiler:

John lay shirtless, sleeping silently, his body half covered by only a thin sheet. He awoke to the sound of gunfire and found himself off world, in an unknown forest. He was crouched behind some brush, holding his P-90 close to his chest, Teyla and Ronon on either side of him. They both were staring out into the woods behind him, concentrating. He looked around, confused, and instinctively ducked when a barrage of bullets clamored their way. “Wait a minute! What’s going on here?!” he asked to either of them. Neither moved, their eyes steady on their targets “I’ll take the two behind the bunker, you guys take the others,” Ronon gruffed as he began to rise from his position, John spoke to him in a hushed voice. “Ronon, wait!” Ronon took off without so much as looking back. “God damn it! What is going on, Teyla???!!”John panted as more bullets came flying by their position. "Do not worry, Colonel. I'll take point," and she stood quickly, firing multiple shots into the forest before somersaulting behind a nearby tree. John looked down at his gun, not knowing what to do and decidedly followed suit. After multiple rounds were shot back and forth, he finally spotted a Wraith hiding behind a large rock and shot him straight through his chest. He started to follow Teyla to the next cover, when he noticed another Wraith coming up dangerously close behind Ronon. "Ronon, behind you!" John yelled in his earpiece, but it was too late. The Wraith held up his gun and shot Ronon point blank in the back of the head. "RONON!" John cried. Ronon's body dropped to a heap on the forest floor, his eyes open, blood pouring out of the back of his head. "Teyla, Teyla, Ronon's been shot! There’s too many of them, we have to fall back!" John looked around wildly. Teyla was nowhere to be seen. "Teyla!" he yelled frantically. His heart stopped when he spotted Teyla ahead, surrounded and disarmed by three Wraith. She stood there amid them perfectly still. Her tearful eyes were on John as he screamed at the top of his lungs and ran towards her, running out into the open, calling her name and firing wildly at the surrounding Wraith. But he was nowhere close enough to stop one of them from jamming their hand into her chest and draining the life from her. Her eyes never left the sight of John, who was trying so hard to reach her, tears streaming from his face as he ran to no avail. His bullets seemed to pass right through the Wraith. He felt a flash of white hot pain sear through his leg and he fell on his face into the dirt, clutching his knee. The Wraith who had killed Teyla stood above John, as he lay there bleeding and heartbroken. He put a well placed foot to John’s throat and snarled at him, baring his teeth. “John Sheppard. Your failure as a leader knows no end. You could not even protect those closest to you. Your most loyal and bravest friend is dead. The woman you loved but failed to tell is dead. Their deaths are meaningless and you are responsible.” John looked over at Teyla’s limp body and his heart sank to a place he dared not go. He looked back at the Wraith and with all the strength he could muster, said “Go ahead. Kill me.” The Wraith laughed cruelly and said, “No, Colonel Sheppard. You’re punishment will be much worse. You’ll live your life knowing what you lost, suffering every day without them. Without her.” John’s eyes filled with tears and he shook uncontrollably. The Wraith removed his foot from John’s throat and kicked him in the side of his head, making John feel as if he were falling into the blackness of an unseen abyss.

Part 3 -

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Rodney had fallen asleep at his computer in his lab, face resting comfortably on the keyboard, small drops of drool slowly falling from his open mouth. He awoke to find himself in the control room. Everyone was there, running amuck and talking loudly. The whole room was shaking and sparks were flying out from all sorts of control panels. "Whats going on?!" Rodney exclaimed loudly over the din. Radek was at the main control board with another technician talking rapidly and turned around quickly. "Rodney, the city is under attack! You have to do something!" Rodney stood still for a moment, very confused as to what was going on. Then he sprang into action, pushing the technician out of the way and looked at the main control panel. Rodney's eyes widened in surprise. Nothing on the panel made any sense to him. Numbers were upside down and sideways, words read in a language that he didn't know. Rodney frantically began pressing buttons."What....what is this? he cried ducking, as sparks flew at his head. "I can't read any of this!" The quaking grew worse. "The shield has been breached!The Wraith have entered the city!" the technician yelled. Rodney felt helpless as Radek stopped and looked at him very strangely. "You dissapoint me, Rodney," he said with an eerie calm. Col. Carter approached him from the crowd and said, "You failed us, Rodney." Rodney saw three Wraith making their way up the steps. He gasped in horror as two more faces approached him. Dr Weir had terrible lacerations on her face, bleeding slowly as she put her hand on his shoulder and said, "You let me down." Rodney looked at her with heartbroken eyes before another hand touched him. He turned to see his dear friend Carson, baring scorched flesh, as he told him, "You let us all down, Rodney." Rodney closed his eyes in disbelief and felt as if he were falling in an unseen abyss.

Part 2 -

Spoiler:

Ronon's snoring was deafening as he lay face down, sprawled,and uncovered across his bed, his arms and legs dangling off the edges. When the fog entered him, he had not been dreaming. He opened his eyes and found himself alone in the training room, standing dead center, holding a large jagged knife. He stared down at it curiously, for he did not remember how he got here or what he was doing. Brushing his long hair from his face, he turned suddenly hearing a low growl behind him. His eyes glowed with anger as he spotted a Wraith, standing there, screeching. His body tensed and took position as he focused his eyes on the enemy. He baded the Wraith, waving his knife around, toying with him, before he lunged at him, full speed, hair flying, and slitting its throat. Ronon stood victorious over it's lifeless body, when he began to wonder how the Wraith had gotten in Atlantis in the first place. Surprised, Ronon heard another low growl behind him. Standing there strangely, were two Wraith this time. Ronon began to sweat. He knew they had not been there before. Still, he took stance and focused, carefully carving them up one at a time. He panted slightly and wiped the bloody knife on his pantleg, before starting to walk towards the door.
Growl.
Ronon feared turning around, yet he did ever so slowly to find there were four Wraith this time, each of them snarling and snapping at him. He dove at them, subduing two of them before the others had a chance to pin him down to the training room floor. His eyes were filled with hatred and confusion as the Wraith straddling him lifted it's arm in the air before striking him hard in the chest. Ronon closed his eyes in pain and felt as if he were falling back into an unseen abyss.

Part 5!! Woohoo! Thank you Mrs.B!! *Elf pauses momentarily to go read*

[Elflinn]

I guess that's why I like Common Ground so much and don't forget 38 Minutes. That has open shirt and a nasty bug!

I have an idea for another fic and I started, but I felt bad doing another whumping story for John. Poor guy . I already did 2 out of 5. Oh well, it'll be awhile before it's even done.

I so agree with on the eps!! If I could I would love to as a ring back tone
on my mobile to be either one of these:

38 mins
[

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The scream as they pour water on bug!! as ringtone and
AWWWWWWW!!......Please Don't do that again!!

Conversion

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My body is mutating into a bug....How are you?
I think that would be an excellent ringback tone!!

[Elflinn]

ladies, 'Irresistable' is next on my list of epsidoes to do quotes from so that I can catch up with Camy and post them with the pics in Stargaze.

I can't wait. I have been enjoying reading the quotes you've been posting.
I think I even used snippets from them in the weekly update. That is how
very cool it is what you are doing!!

[Elflinn]

Very Good Mrs. B!! I'm loving what you're with Nightmares!! Can't wait until
ch.6!!

[scifan]

Part 5 -

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Teyla opened her eyes and found she was lying on her back in one of the many hallways of Atlantis. Silence surrounded her and all the lights were dim. She quickly sat up inspecting herself, unsure of how she had gotten there. She remembered the creature she had last encountered, half child, half Wraith and shuddered at its horrid image etched into her mind. She stood shakily and was determined to figure out what was going on. She walked for many hallways, checking rooms, treading cautiously, finding nothing but silence and shadows.

Just when her legs were beginning to tire her, she heard an echoed scuffling behind her. She turned and her heart leapt into her throat as she spotted two Wraith side by side at the end of the hall she was in, their pace increasing with each step towards her. No weapons, she turned and ran as fast as she could, changing hallways, and ducking through doorways. She entered a room and closed the door behind her, holding her breath in anticipation. Staring at the door, she started to back up into the middle of the room. Something moved behind her. She gasped and turned.


There Ronon sat, half in light, half in shadow. A bloodied knife gripped tightly in his hand, the blood glistened softly in the dim glow of the lamp. “Ronon?” she whispered. Ronon’s eyes never met hers. They were fixed steady on the door. “Ronon, what is happening? There are Wraith in the city!” She was barely audible. “It’s no use, Teyla. Wherever there’s one, there’s a hundred. Where there’s a hundred, there’s a thousand. We can’t stop them. They’ll eat our flesh over and over again.” His voice cracked in despair. Teyla walked over to Ronon and put her hand gently on his shoulder, they way she often did when things were grim. He flinched slightly at her touch and begrudgingly brought his eyes to meet hers. “Ronon, I do not know what is going on but I feel there is something very wrong about all this. Do you not feel it? This….this fog clouding our heads? It feels as though I am awake inside my own dreams.” He looked at her blankly. She sighed and started again. “Ronon, think. How did we get to be here? How did the Wraith enter the city? Where IS everyone? Where is Colonel Sheppard?”

Ronon looked thoughtful for a moment before returning a deadly gaze to the door. “I’m sure they’re all dead.” Teyla stood back, her mouth agape at the mere thought. “No, you are wrong. If he….if they were dead I would sense it. They are here somewhere and I will find them. We need them to fight this and figure out what is going on. I ask you to come with me, Ronon.” Ronon did not respond. Teyla sighed heavily. “Be well, Ronon. I will return for you.” She tried to feign a smile to him as she left him there, but her heart sank heavy at the thought of finding anyone she cared for dead. An image of Colonel Sheppards dead body flashed through her mind, and fueled her body with such an intense rage, she felt as though she would choke on her own breath. Nothing would stand in her way of finding them.With that thought, she slipped out unnoticed by the Wraith into the hallway.

Part 4 -

Spoiler:

John lay shirtless, sleeping silently, his body half covered by only a thin sheet. He awoke to the sound of gunfire and found himself off world, in an unknown forest. He was crouched behind some brush, holding his P-90 close to his chest, Teyla and Ronon on either side of him. They both were staring out into the woods behind him, concentrating. He looked around, confused, and instinctively ducked when a barrage of bullets clamored their way. “Wait a minute! What’s going on here?!” he asked to either of them. Neither moved, their eyes steady on their targets “I’ll take the two behind the bunker, you guys take the others,” Ronon gruffed as he began to rise from his position, John spoke to him in a hushed voice. “Ronon, wait!” Ronon took off without so much as looking back. “God damn it! What is going on, Teyla???!!”John panted as more bullets came flying by their position. "Do not worry, Colonel. I'll take point," and she stood quickly, firing multiple shots into the forest before somersaulting behind a nearby tree. John looked down at his gun, not knowing what to do and decidedly followed suit. After multiple rounds were shot back and forth, he finally spotted a Wraith hiding behind a large rock and shot him straight through his chest. He started to follow Teyla to the next cover, when he noticed another Wraith coming up dangerously close behind Ronon. "Ronon, behind you!" John yelled in his earpiece, but it was too late. The Wraith held up his gun and shot Ronon point blank in the back of the head. "RONON!" John cried. Ronon's body dropped to a heap on the forest floor, his eyes open, blood pouring out of the back of his head. "Teyla, Teyla, Ronon's been shot! There’s too many of them, we have to fall back!" John looked around wildly. Teyla was nowhere to be seen. "Teyla!" he yelled frantically. His heart stopped when he spotted Teyla ahead, surrounded and disarmed by three Wraith. She stood there amid them perfectly still. Her tearful eyes were on John as he screamed at the top of his lungs and ran towards her, running out into the open, calling her name and firing wildly at the surrounding Wraith. But he was nowhere close enough to stop one of them from jamming their hand into her chest and draining the life from her. Her eyes never left the sight of John, who was trying so hard to reach her, tears streaming from his face as he ran to no avail. His bullets seemed to pass right through the Wraith. He felt a flash of white hot pain sear through his leg and he fell on his face into the dirt, clutching his knee. The Wraith who had killed Teyla stood above John, as he lay there bleeding and heartbroken. He put a well placed foot to John’s throat and snarled at him, baring his teeth. “John Sheppard. Your failure as a leader knows no end. You could not even protect those closest to you. Your most loyal and bravest friend is dead. The woman you loved but failed to tell is dead. Their deaths are meaningless and you are responsible.” John looked over at Teyla’s limp body and his heart sank to a place he dared not go. He looked back at the Wraith and with all the strength he could muster, said “Go ahead. Kill me.” The Wraith laughed cruelly and said, “No, Colonel Sheppard. You’re punishment will be much worse. You’ll live your life knowing what you lost, suffering every day without them. Without her.” John’s eyes filled with tears and he shook uncontrollably. The Wraith removed his foot from John’s throat and kicked him in the side of his head, making John feel as if he were falling into the blackness of an unseen abyss.

Part 3 -

Spoiler:

Rodney had fallen asleep at his computer in his lab, face resting comfortably on the keyboard, small drops of drool slowly falling from his open mouth. He awoke to find himself in the control room. Everyone was there, running amuck and talking loudly. The whole room was shaking and sparks were flying out from all sorts of control panels. "Whats going on?!" Rodney exclaimed loudly over the din. Radek was at the main control board with another technician talking rapidly and turned around quickly. "Rodney, the city is under attack! You have to do something!" Rodney stood still for a moment, very confused as to what was going on. Then he sprang into action, pushing the technician out of the way and looked at the main control panel. Rodney's eyes widened in surprise. Nothing on the panel made any sense to him. Numbers were upside down and sideways, words read in a language that he didn't know. Rodney frantically began pressing buttons."What....what is this? he cried ducking, as sparks flew at his head. "I can't read any of this!" The quaking grew worse. "The shield has been breached!The Wraith have entered the city!" the technician yelled. Rodney felt helpless as Radek stopped and looked at him very strangely. "You dissapoint me, Rodney," he said with an eerie calm. Col. Carter approached him from the crowd and said, "You failed us, Rodney." Rodney saw three Wraith making their way up the steps. He gasped in horror as two more faces approached him. Dr Weir had terrible lacerations on her face, bleeding slowly as she put her hand on his shoulder and said, "You let me down." Rodney looked at her with heartbroken eyes before another hand touched him. He turned to see his dear friend Carson, baring scorched flesh, as he told him, "You let us all down, Rodney." Rodney closed his eyes in disbelief and felt as if he were falling in an unseen abyss.

Part 2 -

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Ronon's snoring was deafening as he lay face down, sprawled,and uncovered across his bed, his arms and legs dangling off the edges. When the fog entered him, he had not been dreaming. He opened his eyes and found himself alone in the training room, standing dead center, holding a large jagged knife. He stared down at it curiously, for he did not remember how he got here or what he was doing. Brushing his long hair from his face, he turned suddenly hearing a low growl behind him. His eyes glowed with anger as he spotted a Wraith, standing there, screeching. His body tensed and took position as he focused his eyes on the enemy. He baded the Wraith, waving his knife around, toying with him, before he lunged at him, full speed, hair flying, and slitting its throat. Ronon stood victorious over it's lifeless body, when he began to wonder how the Wraith had gotten in Atlantis in the first place. Surprised, Ronon heard another low growl behind him. Standing there strangely, were two Wraith this time. Ronon began to sweat. He knew they had not been there before. Still, he took stance and focused, carefully carving them up one at a time. He panted slightly and wiped the bloody knife on his pantleg, before starting to walk towards the door.
Growl.
Ronon feared turning around, yet he did ever so slowly to find there were four Wraith this time, each of them snarling and snapping at him. He dove at them, subduing two of them before the others had a chance to pin him down to the training room floor. His eyes were filled with hatred and confusion as the Wraith straddling him lifted it's arm in the air before striking him hard in the chest. Ronon closed his eyes in pain and felt as if he were falling back into an unseen abyss.

Part 5 is really good. Thanks Mrs. B. I like the smilies. Good touch.

[scifan]

I so agree with on the eps!! If I could I would love to as a ring back tone
on my mobile to be either one of these:

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The scream as they pour water on bug!! as ringtone and
AWWWWWWW!!......Please Don't do that again!!

Conversion

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My body is mutating into a bug....How are you?
I think that would be an excellent ringback tone!!

I don't have a cell phone, but that's funny.

[Elflinn]

I don't have a cell phone, but that's funny.

I figure it would definitely get people's attention. OR they would think I
am totally nuts!!

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But, honestly with me being in the Music Ministry and my pastors calling
me alot for meetings. It would not quite be the type of tones on the phone!
I can always dream and watch the eps!!