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The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Originally posted by Cpt. RitterWe don't have that... but I wasn't senior speaker and I didn't get the top grade point, granted it was still a 4.3....
Fishyone... that was brilliant... I mean WOW. Seriously... that had me riveted... even with the music in the background that was completely inappropreite to the setting... simply gorgeous. You need to archive this stuff on Convergence.
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Camerine... nice poem... so true.
Thank you... I'm so touched that everyone liked it so much. It started out as a little piece that I wrote in about an hour that had lots of tense change (plenty of editing marks when I got it back )
I am very willing to put it up on the Convergence site... As for ff.net... I cannot explain my strange aversion to getting an account there, I like the site and read stories on there, but I just don't want to get an account there...The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Originally posted by Doxymom
Fishyone, excellent fic. It was powerful and haunting. I think your word choices were perfect. You did have John's voice correct. I like that it was his moment of death fic and he actually thought he'd died. I like that John noticed that she used his name. Well done! You have to write more.
DoxyThe really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Congrats Ritter but being British I have no idea what any of you are talking about.
I'm enjoying the recent fic and artwork and Amen to whoever said this is a wonderful and creative thread.
We're all lost without Stargatecaps.com
Jackfic.com have a great screencap collection, Abydos do as well but they are S/W so it tends to favour them. New Atlantis have lots HQ pics (as opposed to caps) Stargate fusion (french) and Oxoniensis have a nice collection of caps and Mercscilla and TheSciFiWorld have HQ caps of about the last 4 eps of S2. Gifted has Teyla caps and Flyboy has Shep ones (need to register though). Annie and Warrior post a lot of caps here at GW, it's worth searching their posts and there's another site that I can't remember the name of (:\) that also has caps. I will search for it tomorrow.
EDIT: I understand you aversion to FF.net, unfortunatly it has a reputation for dross rather than the hidden gems but thats mostly because it's the most well known open-to-all, all fandoms archive.
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Originally posted by Angel007I really liked it, Fishyone! You did a great job! I didn't know you could post directly to the forum....The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Originally posted by fishyoneOkay... Challenge fic... Sunday's challenge...
Doing some standard header stuff... Not good at this...
Author: fishyone
Word Count: 579
Rating: PG, I think
Summary: We all have a price.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters... If I did... No one wants to know what that would be like. And I don't get paid for this... If I did, I'd be writing for the show, which would never happen.
Author's Note: I did have this beta'd by Vaberella, and Jess also gave me suggestions for it. Unfortunately, I'm kind of stubborn, and I didn't accept all the word changes they gave me as I felt it lacked my "voice." So any mistakes found in here are mine...though they tried to persuade me otherwise. Oh, VB, if you don't want to beta for me again, I understand... I wouldn't appreciate it if someone ignored my suggestions as I did with some of yours... Sorry...
We All Have a Price
We all have a price, and he wonders if she is his. He wonders if he would sell his soul, doom himself to eternal damnation if he could only have her. He wonders just how much he’ll pay, if it will be in blood. She’s right there but just out of reach, and no matter how hard he tries, he can’t catch her. She’s untamed and mysterious in ways that he can’t begin to imagine; so complex that he would need more than a lifetime to understand her.
Strange. It doesn’t seem to matter so much the pain, the knowledge that he probably won’t live through this. Weren’t a person’s last moments supposed to be about considering life? What is his life?
Without her, nothing. That is why she is his price. He didn’t truly live before he knew her. He had given up everything that he had ever known, everything that he had—granted, it wasn’t much—but it had taken everything to find one thing, one person so infinitely perfect that no one else mattered.
Yeah, she was his price—all right. He hadn’t known that he would find her, not really, yet somehow, a part of him had. Even after that, he didn’t have her. Didn’t deserve her.
She is a price that he can never pay, not in his lifetime, which is looking shorter and shorter by the minute. He is dying, and he’ll never get the chance to tell her that he is a stupid fool that has taken the easy road rather than fight for her. He’s done some stupid things—fallen for other women. Maybe even pushed her into another’s arms. He wants to tell her all this. He knows he can’t. There isn’t time, and she isn’t here. He’d gone off to be the hero again, and this time, it would cost him everything.
His life is slowly leaving him, trickling out a hole so small that it can’t compare to the one in his heart since he has known her. He is bleeding, warm blood running down his side. Not much longer now…
Regrets? Sure, he has them. She’s the biggest one. He regrets not telling her how he felt. He’d give anything to change the past, but he can’t. He knows this. What was it they said about prices…? A familiar cliché… We all have a price. The price is always more than you can afford. He’s learned that lesson now. Too little, too late.
He thinks he should leave the trite remarks to someone else. He’s starting to lose focus, concentration. He’s more than half-gone already.
What price, he wonders, would bring her to him now? Would let him see that enigmatic smile of hers? Let him touch that beautiful hair?
Death, probably. He can’t give much else. He’s lost his gun—dropped it somewhere in the middle of his fight. Everything important is gone. She is gone, and that is the only thing that matters now.
He closes his eyes. He’s had enough. Time to let go…too late… Too late to fight now. Too far gone…
He blinks into the sudden light. He’s somewhere else now, not heaven, but it can’t be hell because she is standing above him.
She holds his hand. “Welcome back, John. We were afraid that we had lost you.”
She calls him John. And somehow he understands that he has paid his price, and she’s his.
Just as soon as he apologizes.
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Originally posted by CamyFishyone, I"m gonna have to read it later...really busy right now...but I'm loving it...you should really post it in FF.net...if you don't want to open an account, I can put it under my name but WRITE that it's your fic...and mention GW...alll up to you...but this way others get to see it won't get lost in this thread....let me know or PM me...
I'm glad you like what you've read so far.The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Originally posted by Padme18Ahhh, Cute. I like it.
I'm ever hopeful where S/T are concerned.The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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Originally posted by Cpt. RitterWe don't have that... but I wasn't senior speaker and I didn't get the top grade point, granted it was still a 4.3....
But now its time to PARTY!
Its JT so it's on topic...I hope!
P.S...That's Root Beer that they're drinking!
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This is really cool, did I say how talented you are yet? And you fic on Teyla's birthday was so cute.
Have you written anything J/T? If so, I would love to read!
(You can use this image, but please, if you use the poem, I wrote it, so please leave a copywrite on it. Thanks!)
My Fanfiction! --- http://www.fanfiction.net/u/993353/
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Originally posted by bellaCongrats Ritter but being British I have no idea what any of you are talking about.
I'm enjoying the recent fic and artwork and Amen to whoever said this is a wonderful and creative thread.
We're all lost without Stargatecaps.com
Jackfic.com have a great screencap collection, Abydos do as well but they are S/W so it tends to favour them. New Atlantis have lots HQ pics (as opposed to caps) Stargate fusion (french) and Oxoniensis have a nice collection of caps and Mercscilla and TheSciFiWorld have HQ caps of about the last 4 eps of S2. Gifted has Teyla caps and Flyboy has Shep ones (need to register though). Annie and Warrior post a lot of caps here at GW, it's worth searching their posts and there's another site that I can't remember the name of (:\) that also has caps. I will search for it tomorrow.
EDIT: I understand you aversion to FF.net, unfortunatly it has a reputation for dross rather than the hidden gems but thats mostly because it's the most well known open-to-all, all fandoms archive.The really disturbing thing is, this is me on a GOOD day.
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To give everyone a good laugh, here's some Sgt. Bates as a Sheyla device...
I think I got a little carried away with Bates, but that's the first thing that came to mind for the funny Wp/banner challenge. But then again, can you really have too much Bates as a Sheyla device?
Great fics nicole and fishy!
Congrats Ritter!! Way to go!!!Sig by Cazzblade
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Originally posted by Angel007Thanks much for the comment on my fic and my picture!
Have you written anything J/T? If so, I would love to read!Icon by AceofHadeon Sig by TrueRomantic
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