Originally posted by MrsB108
View Post
Ok Heres my entry for the "Heated Argument" and so maybe it went more than 20 sentences, oh well.
Spoiler:
Teyla turned swiftly to look at John. “I can’t believe you’re just going to sit here and do nothing!” John’s face twisted in frustration. “Teyla, I’m an officer. I have to do what my superiors tell me, I don’t have a choice! If I don’t follow orders, I could lose my job!”
Teyla glared. “My people are missing! They could be hurt or suffering or worse! If you will not aid me in discovering there whereabouts, I will have to find help elsewhere!” Her heart beat fast in her chest. She could not believe she was getting so mad at Colonel Sheppard this way.
John stood and his breath was quickening. “What does that mean, Teyla?”
Teyla looked into his eyes and could see the pain she was causing him but continued as she thought of her people crying out for her. “Ronon will help me.”
John started to say something and then stopped, his lips curling in anger.
“What were you going to say, Colonel?” Teyla huffed, her voice shaking.
“Nothing.”
“Please tell me!!”
He reached up and grabbed her arms tightly holding her in front of him. His face was so close to hers and they were both breathing heavily “You think I don’t want to help you? You think I don’t care??!! You don’t have any idea how I feel, Teyla!!!”
“Then tell me John, tell me how you feel!!”
The door opened. Ronon stuck his head in. “Am I interrupting something?”
Teyla glared. “My people are missing! They could be hurt or suffering or worse! If you will not aid me in discovering there whereabouts, I will have to find help elsewhere!” Her heart beat fast in her chest. She could not believe she was getting so mad at Colonel Sheppard this way.
John stood and his breath was quickening. “What does that mean, Teyla?”
Teyla looked into his eyes and could see the pain she was causing him but continued as she thought of her people crying out for her. “Ronon will help me.”
John started to say something and then stopped, his lips curling in anger.
“What were you going to say, Colonel?” Teyla huffed, her voice shaking.
“Nothing.”
“Please tell me!!”
He reached up and grabbed her arms tightly holding her in front of him. His face was so close to hers and they were both breathing heavily “You think I don’t want to help you? You think I don’t care??!! You don’t have any idea how I feel, Teyla!!!”
“Then tell me John, tell me how you feel!!”
The door opened. Ronon stuck his head in. “Am I interrupting something?”
How true MrsB.
my ships 
)
Although my dad's family is all from TX and OK and none of them say "y'all", but *I* the Californian do.
Comment