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    Vampire assassin story in German, tried to make my style fit my partner's style a bit but did too much of i and when provereading I obviously had my brain turned out

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      Then try and write it in your own style!
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        *I smile over to Joey* Of course, you know how to find me if I'm not still here.

        *I wipe the last of the sweat from Poet's face with a damp cloth, I can feel even through the cloth that her fever has gone down quite a lot, even since I gave her the antidote, and I smile at her* It's working my friend, you will soon be well again. *I whisper softly*

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        Edit: Not everyone can write to match someone else's style and nobody can do it perfectly. Just so happens I can match styles fairly well, but then since writing is kind of my life and has been since I was 8 years old (12 years, wow)...I guess you could say I've had a fair bit of practice.

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          Joey: of course I do Aang *he smiles again and then thinks* don't be ashamed of your feelings when you are around us, would be nicer if you let us part of them since we feel them anyway...we may not be your sister and neither are we humans but we are your friends and it does makes us feel a little left if you think you need to hide anything from us...

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            *I smile and look over to Joey and then think back* I didn't mean to make you feel left out at all. Poet and all of her guys...and now you, her twin, well you're all my closest friends on Atlantis outside my sisters. I suppose it felt easier for a while to hide what we felt. But...I won't try to hide our feelings from you anymore. I shouldn't be hiding our feelings from our friends.

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              *Joey hugs her and thinks* I know my sister felt a bit sad about it but as it's her character, she would not mention it. It's just not nice when we sense you being sad but don't know what to do, because we know you try to hide that....but don't let Poet know I said this to you, she thinks it's quite rude to interfere with others' personal stuff...but she should know you are friends and as such we can tell each other when something feels not right, I think *he smiles says aloud* what do you think, I guess we have a little time before my sister wakes, and I would like to ask you something, Aang without she's knowing it? could you spent some more time for me or do you want to go back to your sisters?

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                *hugs Joey and thinks* I know...I've tried to tell her, even yesterday when Corey first brought her to me...I am her friend and if she's not well, she shouldn't worry about what I'm doing or what my feelings are right then, but just tell me when she isn't well and let me help her. It would ruin my good day much more if she didn't come to me and I didn't find out she'd needed me until too late...than if she would come to me right away. I suppose I ought to listen to what I say also and not try to hide it when I'm feeling something isn't right.

                *and then I say out loud* My sisters can wait for me to come back for a bit. They will be there whenever I can come back. I could spend some more time to talk to you.

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                  *Joey grins and thinks* she hasn't changed quite much over all the years, character wise, she feels guilty easily for having to ask others for help thinking it will bother them...if she hadn't been too weak yesterday, she never had shown up with Corey and she only did because he forced her...but OK let's go somewhere she surely can't hear us talking aloud *he takes Aang's hand and they both vanish to reappear in Poet's room*

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                    *thinks one last bit* I had noticed that...I've come to realize that sometimes when she needs me and won't let me help her, all I can do is wait until there isn't any way she can say "no" to me...yesterday, for example...it was only a matter of time until she would pass out...and then I could help her without protest.

                    *then says out loud* What was it you wanted to talk to me about?

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                      Joey: ah yes that is so much my sister, and even then if she could somehow manage it she would run away from you because she fears nothing more than any of her friends having to do something for her *shakes his head smiling* I wanted to ask you what makes you happy? I love my sister just like all of her guys do and it makes us feel unhappy that we actually never sense real happiness from her...she always cares for others so much worrying to make them happy and well, that she forgets about herself...though now she has me back and the guilt is gone from her heart, there is still the fact that I never, not even in my first life seen her really happy and in peace like I could feel you and your sisters are

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                        I'm baaack!
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                          welcome back

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                            Good to be back!
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                              I will be off soon for dinner I guess, but you just gave me an idea in the other thread, I need to get myself a clone of the Commander somehow...along our storyline

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                                (oops im here too. Hi Sparky. Aang sis i've been working on my intro, so if you were wondering where id got to. also I had to catch up again, ignoring my head dropping to the keyboard! haha)
                                I am Queen McBeck of McTennantLand,
                                traveling in the TARDIS with King Rodney & my fine Sir Carson of Atlantis... ALONSY!

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