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    *Self destruct in 8 minutes*
    Melfan: Ohh, make him hurt, can you put subliminate messege in his head, like sabaotaging something everytime he thinks about killing something?
    Queen: Very well. *A moment later* Done.
    *Melfan looks trough the monitor as Bray lays on the floor holding his head, the others tryin to help him.*
    *Over the com*
    Melfan: Do your head hurt Bray? *In a sing song voice* It's only the beginning!
    SanGate: What are you doing to him!?
    Melfan: Not me, the Queen! We are haveing so much fun up here. And LizzieAnne, you will be the first!
    *shut of com
    Ronon. what did she mean by that?
    LizzieAnne: I killed her, she gonna kill me!
    SanGate: Not if I have my say in it!
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      *Bray still on his knees*

      Bray "AAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHH GET OUT OF MY HEAD!"

      San "I'm really sorry Bray"

      Bray *Through the pain* "For what?"

      San "This!"

      *BANG*

      *Bray slumps to the floor and goes silent a small river of blood trickling to a nearby drain*

      Everyone "NOOO!"

      San "He was comprimised!"

      (Dun dun duuhhhh)

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        *Bridge, Melfan is looking through the monitor*
        Melfan: I told you to take over SanGates head and mess with Bray, I didn't tell you shoot him! *Looks at the crumpled Bray*
        Queen: It was fun! Humans is for food and to play with.
        Melfan: Don't start playing with me!
        Queen: I would never! You are becomming one of us.
        Melfan: Again.... Hmmm... I have a plan. Come with me
        *The Queen and Melfan leaves the bride, Melfan sealed the bridge and cut off all access*

        *Hallway*
        *SanGate has gotten her mind back. She looks chocked and drops her gun*
        SanGate: Wha...
        Ronon: You shot Bray!
        SanGate: The Queen, she was in my mind!
        *LizzieAnne checks Brays pulse*
        LizzieAnne: It's very weak, he might not make it!
        SanGate: I'm sorry, You have to believe me!
        Sheppard: Give me your gun!
        SanGate: What?
        LizzieAnne: What good would it do. If the Queen get's to you there is no telling what she will do!

        *Infirmary*
        Queen.: Why are we here?
        Melfan: This is gonna hurt *Takes some blood from the Queen*
        Queen: ....
        Melfan: Or not... *Goes to a medicin cabinett and takes out a vile of blood*
        Queen: What is your plan?
        Melfan: I'm gonna clone Bray with your Wraith DNA, and voila! we have ourself a cloneWraithHybrid!
        Queen: How long does it take:
        Melfan: Usually 24 hours, I can speed it up tought.
        *starts the cloningprocess a WraithHybrid clone Bray*
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          Ronon: we might need her

          Shep: she was compromised!

          Ronon: she might come in handy later

          San: And for what would that be exactly?

          *Bray cries from pain*

          Ronon: I thought you were tougher than that

          Bray: it really hurts!

          *San looks guilty*

          San: again, sorry! We gotta get him to the infirmary!

          Ronon: no time

          Bray: I beg your pardon?

          *shep grabs emergency kit from his vest and tapes around the wound and gives a tranquilizer and painkiller*

          Shep: you should be up and running again in no time

          Lizzie: shall we go now?

          *Shep gives San a doutbful look*

          San: she's gone. I'm fine now.

          Shep: give me your gun

          San: why! She can get into any one of yours heads as well!

          Lizzie: she has a point

          Shep: fine. Come.

          *self destruct in 5 minutes*

          Shep: damnit! Come on people! Let's move!

          *run towards the control room, Bray on Ronon's shoulder*
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            (Bloody hell I'm iron man I just survived a headshot )

            *Ronon heads off to the infirmary to get Bray a plaster *

            *The rest of the team heads for the control room*

            *Mel and the queen are now back in the control room*

            #Warning, self destruct in 4 minutes#

            San "We've really got to get a move on!"

            *The team runs flat out and arrives outside the control room with 3 minutes left on the clock*

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              *Infirmary*
              *The cloning machine has made a cloneWraithHybrid version of Bray, who justs wakes up*
              Bray: Where am I?
              Melfan: Infirmary, get up. We got people to kill.
              Bray: Huh?
              Melfan: what is the last thing you remember.
              Bray: *Thinks* Uhm... Have these flashes...
              Queen: Those would be some of my memories
              Bray: Wraith!
              Melfan: have yoy look in the mirror lately?
              Bray: *Goes to a mirror and checks himself out* He's is palish blue, has yellow eyes and a slit on his hand* What have you done!?
              Melfan: Cloned you.
              Bray: I'm dead?
              Queen: No, injured.
              Melfan: I tough he died. Pity.
              Bray: I feel hungry
              Melfan: Ins't it great! we will dominate this Galaxy!
              Bray: The original me isn't dead?
              Melfan No... How do you feel?
              Bray: Wierd..
              Melfan: Disconnected? Like you not yourself?
              Bray: Yea, how do you know?
              Melfan: I feel the very same thing, must the be Wraith DNA within us
              Bray: You a Wraith?
              Melfan: What do you remember?
              Bray: At first, that we where gonna leave for The Pegasus Galaxy, now a jumble of memories, The Queens, mostly.
              Melfan: Yea, I took some of her DNA. You wanna have a snack?
              Bray: God yes! cant't we clone the other?
              Melfan: Takes to much time, the autodestruct is on.
              Bray: Turn it off. I wanna kill!
              *Autodestruct on 3 minutes*

              RL calls, gotta go!
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                Lizzie: we're never going to make it!

                Shep: of course we will!

                San: first we need to take out melfan and the Queen, then we need to override the code. Weir and Shep, you do that, Ronon, put your gun to stun

                Ronon: ...

                San: you stun melfan, we have to hope she can still be friendly to use, Lizzie and me will take out the queen. Shoot to kill Lizzie!

                Lizzie; yes Ma'am.

                San: go!

                *doors to the control room open and shooting is heard*
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                  *The queen, Melfan and Bray are once again at the bridge, Melfan has just aborted the self Destruct*
                  *Self Destruct aborted*
                  Queen: And now?
                  Melfan: Wreck some havock
                  Bray: I feel something
                  Queen: That would be your Wraith power getting stronger
                  Melfan: Isn't great? *Closes eyes, Sees LizzieAnne, starts to make LizzieAnne Hallucinate*
                  Bray: What is she doing?
                  Queen: Having fun. Frech out to someone and have fun!
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                    *clutches head*

                    OMG what is happening to me?

                    My head.

                    What's that? Oh no -not more rabbits. *three very large rabbits appear and disappear*

                    *some one appears from the shadows into the light*

                    What. How . What. Todd?!!! What on earth are you doing here?

                    *Todd just grins* He takes a step forward, long black coat swishes.

                    Todd: "I have come to give you some assistance. My Queen is here and out of control I fear."

                    "I don't trust my senses at the moment - you're a hallucination ,"
                    *shuts eyes and opens them again*

                    Todd: "See, I'm still here."
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                      *Bridge*
                      Queen: How did he come hear?
                      Melfan: Transporter
                      Bray: Can we kill him?
                      Queen: Yes, he's weak, he's been around humans too long!
                      Melfan: It would be my pleasure to kill him my Queen, come Bray, we are gonna kill Todd, then I'm gonna kill LizzieAnne for killing me.
                      Bray: Who injured me?
                      Melfan: SanGate shot you, however, we do not now if you gonna live, but you are free to kill her if you wanna.
                      Bray: Excellent, first we kill Todd, then you kill LizzieAnne, then I kill SanGate, the we kill the rest of the crew
                      *Bray and Melfan takes off to kill, the Queen desides to get into Sheppards mind*
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                        (just to be certain, could we all place an original bray, evil bray in it, or upcoming other evils and fakes because I kinda forgot how everything was so sorry in advance for any plotholes)

                        San: Can it get any worse than this?

                        Shep: probably not, at least the self destruct got cancelled

                        Lorne: that was rather perculiar

                        Ronon: *original, but I think they don;t know an evil one exist yet* Bray is in the infirmary with clone Carson and John's PJ, I'm sure he'll be fine.

                        Shep: he's of our least concerns now *as he sees Todd and a white rabbit*
                        Todd? What are you doing here?! And why a white rabbit?

                        *san looks worried at Shep and then at Todd as Ronon raises his stunner*

                        Ronon: give me one reason why I shouldn't shoot your right here right now

                        Todd: I can help you

                        Lizzie: Don't trust him! He just said he was going to help his queen!

                        TOdd: the queen is messing with your head. Letting you see things, that aren't there

                        *BANG a gunshot is heard*

                        *Ronon and San looks behind them and their jaws drop*
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                          *In front of them stand Melfan and Evil!Bray.*
                          SanGate: Bray? How...
                          Melfan: Cloning...
                          Evil!Bray: Damn! He didn't die! *About Todd*
                          Sheppard: Why does he looks like a Wraith?
                          Melfan: *Grins happily* I used the Queens DNA when I cloned Bray! *Raises her gun at shots LizzieAnne in the chest*
                          *Ronon shot at Melfan and Evil!Bray but thier personalshield deflect the shot*
                          *SanGate as she tries to stop the wound from blooding all over the place*
                          SanGate: Why?
                          Melfan: Why what? Why shot LizzieAnne? Revenge? Why I cloned and wraithified Bray? I was a lonely WraithHybrid clone! Plus, Bray was a maniac when he was human, now he's an insane maniac!
                          Sheppard: Who stopped the countdown?
                          Melfan: Me! We wanted to kill you all.
                          EvilBray: But it's no fun when we just stand here talking, run, scream.
                          SanGAte: We have too take LizzieAnne to the infirmary!
                          Melfan: Be my guest! Watch out for the Queen!
                          *The gang runs to the infirmary with a dying LizzieAnne*
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                            I've been shot.......... I don't feel anything....................Whumped and out........
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                              Johns PJ: Quickly on the operating table. Must stem all that bleeding. Give me room everyone. You can't do anything here. GO.

                              Lorne: Let me stay. I want to stay Don't let her die.............

                              JohnsPJ: Just for awhile then.

                              All the rest walk away from the infirmary.

                              Sheppard to Todd: Tell me why I shouldn't shoot you this time?

                              Todd: I need to get my Queen back to her hive in one piece. Others are waiting.
                              Without her there could be war.

                              Sheppard: And why should we help you?

                              Todd: You want your people back too? I can influence the Queen. She is not the only one who can get inside human minds.
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                                John's PJ: Let's take her to surgery! We must stop the bleeding!
                                *John's PJ and crew tries to stop the bleeding and have LizzieAnne flatline on them several times*
                                John's PJ: You don't die on me!
                                *Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*
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