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Right I finished it! It's set early S9 when Daniel was just getting used to Vala... tried to make it non-shippy... Anyway, here it is!
The Vala Invasion
She invaded his life
As though she had
A right to it.
Bouncing, barging into
His thoughts, his mind
Until her voice echoed
Around his head.
She broke his concentration;
She broke his routine;
She broke his glasses.
Everywhere he turned,
She was there,
Beaming widely,
Her eyes alight
With that alluring fire,
And full of banter.
Her voice was the
First he heard in
The morning, and
The last before
He went to bed,
Like some derranged marriage.
Not that it hadn't
Been suggested.
"Yeah! Let's make babies!"
Vala for the rest
Of his life...
Annoying.
Exciting.
Unthinkable.
Somehow she got
Into his head,
Pushed is every button,
Bantered at every opportunity.
She was vibrant, vivacious,
Taking every ounce
Of his attention.
And then she was gone.
Headstrong, reckless
To the last.
But her bravery
Saved their lives.
His empty office,
Once noisy with
Her constant chatter,
Now felt lonely
And hostile.
His work no longer
Thrilled him: he found
No solace in dead
Civilisations.
Somehow she had
Managed to make her
Absence as unbearable
As her presence.
Somehow, from another
Galaxy she still had
Control over him.
Somehow,
He missed her.
Eek it's a bit long isn't it! There just aren't enough words for Vala!
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Originally posted by LiliJ View PostRight I finished it! It's set early S9 when Daniel was just getting used to Vala... tried to make it non-shippy... Anyway, here it is!
The Vala Invasion
She invaded his life
As though she had
A right to it.
Bouncing, barging into
His thoughts, his mind
Until her voice echoed
Around his head.
She broke his concentration;
She broke his routine;
She broke his glasses.
Everywhere he turned,
She was there,
Beaming widely,
Her eyes alight
With that alluring fire,
And full of banter.
Her voice was the
First he heard in
The morning, and
The last before
He went to bed,
Like some derranged marriage.
Not that it hadn't
Been suggested.
"Yeah! Let's make babies!"
Vala for the rest
Of his life...
Annoying.
Exciting.
Unthinkable.
Somehow she got
Into his head,
Pushed is every button,
Bantered at every opportunity.
She was vibrant, vivacious,
Taking every ounce
Of his attention.
And then she was gone.
Headstrong, reckless
To the last.
But her bravery
Saved their lives.
His empty office,
Once noisy with
Her constant chatter,
Now felt lonely
And hostile.
His work no longer
Thrilled him: he found
No solace in dead
Civilisations.
Somehow she had
Managed to make her
Absence as unbearable
As her presence.
Somehow, from another
Galaxy she still had
Control over him.
Somehow,
He missed her.
Eek it's a bit long isn't it! There just aren't enough words for Vala!
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Originally posted by LiliJ View PostHehe phew glad you liked it! I was a bit worried no-one would - first poetry impressions you know. Yeah, I just love that moment: "I found your glasses...!" *hugs*
Oops... sorry Integrabyte... *hides*
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Originally posted by LiliJ View PostI was worried about that line - thought someone on this thread might object. But I thought that for Daniel this is how it would be - he finds her as annoying as hell and yet there is something that draws him to her...
Why is it that EVERY time I post something creative I clear the threads?
I love this poem - you sum up the relationship between Vala and Daniel very well
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Originally posted by valaCB View PostNew for me ^
Thanks
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