Shadow I really liked your season! You had some really great stuff in it!
Not true, for me anyway. Season 5 had 3(?) scenes that I though were shippy. Ship has to be blocked just like Jack and Daniel scenes IMO.
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Since I'm no writer I'll just motify the current s7
Jack's Absense in my season 7 would be CLEARLY explained by his having temporary command at the Alpha Site.
Oh, and Teal'c would have lines through out the season not just when there were other Jaffa around.
07x01 - Fallen -- Left basically the same minor change would be instead of "Starwars Bombing Run" the team would ring up and plant a bomb to take out the "eyes" (not very original but it removes the "homage" that made me cringe )
07x02 - Send Off - Jonas would be given a GOOD send off, and Jack would hand him a GDO and tell him to stop by from time to time. Minor stuff with Daniel's ascention he's still very much having problems remembering stuff. Maybe a scene where Teal'c doesn't do too well in a hand-to-hand battle to give support to the Orpheous storyline.
07x03 - Fragile Balance - mini-Jack would be less obssesive over beer. mini-Jack would die in the end because the Asgard couldn't prevent it.
07x04 - Orpheous - Stay the same.
07x05 - Revisions - The community would be related to the Ancients to keep the whole "Lost City" arc alive. Other changes too, but I'm no writer and I can't think of anything right now
07x06 - Lifeboat - Stay the same.
07x07 - Enemy Mine - (wouldn't exist) Mayborne would show up, and they would find Naquadah beyond that I don't have a plot
07x08 - Space Race - One important change I'd make is that Warrick would ask Sam about Jonas and they'd have a little chat. Maybe Jonas would even be in the episode.
07x09 - Avenger 2.0 - I'd like to see how this episode would work with McKay.
07x10 - Birthright - Stay the same.
07x11 - Evolution Part 1 - The SS would fire one (1) shot and Teal'c would be hit in the opening scene and it would be a close call, thus making the SS actually sort of dangerous
07x12 - Evolution Part 2 - the whole Burk thing would be sorted out in 2 scenes instead of 4 thus leaving time for the acutal plot of dealing with the SS and saving Daniel.
07x13 - Grace - I think I might modify some of the dialog in the S/J scene just slightly.
07x14 - Fallout - Less of the bickering delagates. A Jonas/Teal'c scene which was sorely missing. Durring the Jonas/Sam scene Sam would mention that she's just started seeing someone named Pete.
07x15 - Chimera - Daniel/Osiris line is 70% of episode. Pete stumbles onto a report he asks Sam about it, she tells him it's classified, he accepts what she says. Sam ultimately decides that as nice as Pete is she's happy being single right now, and Pete just wasn't "the one". We see Sarah start to deal with the whole Goa'uld thing.
07x16 - Death Knell - Stay the same except that the wound on Sam's leg would clearly be from a SS weapon and not just an "anonumous injury". When Sam stopped for water from the DEEP RIVER, the SS would hit her in the shoulder, and he'd get swept down river by the fast moving current when he tried to cross, so he'd be unable to follow her.
07x17 - Heroes Part 1 - Stay the same except Sam would say "He's given more of himself to this program then anyone else" instead of 'given up more'.
07x18 - Heroes Part 2 - I'd have Cassie actually be in the episode.
07x19 - Inauguration - Inauguration would stay the same. Resurrection would no longer exist.
07x20 - Lost City Part 1 -
07x21 - Lost City Part 2 -
07x22 - Lost City Part 3 - Fleshout the story and make it a three parter since it was supposed to be a movie this would be more in keeping with the length
Originally posted by Dani347
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Since I'm no writer I'll just motify the current s7
Jack's Absense in my season 7 would be CLEARLY explained by his having temporary command at the Alpha Site.
Oh, and Teal'c would have lines through out the season not just when there were other Jaffa around.
07x01 - Fallen -- Left basically the same minor change would be instead of "Starwars Bombing Run" the team would ring up and plant a bomb to take out the "eyes" (not very original but it removes the "homage" that made me cringe )
07x02 - Send Off - Jonas would be given a GOOD send off, and Jack would hand him a GDO and tell him to stop by from time to time. Minor stuff with Daniel's ascention he's still very much having problems remembering stuff. Maybe a scene where Teal'c doesn't do too well in a hand-to-hand battle to give support to the Orpheous storyline.
07x03 - Fragile Balance - mini-Jack would be less obssesive over beer. mini-Jack would die in the end because the Asgard couldn't prevent it.
07x04 - Orpheous - Stay the same.
07x05 - Revisions - The community would be related to the Ancients to keep the whole "Lost City" arc alive. Other changes too, but I'm no writer and I can't think of anything right now
07x06 - Lifeboat - Stay the same.
07x07 - Enemy Mine - (wouldn't exist) Mayborne would show up, and they would find Naquadah beyond that I don't have a plot
07x08 - Space Race - One important change I'd make is that Warrick would ask Sam about Jonas and they'd have a little chat. Maybe Jonas would even be in the episode.
07x09 - Avenger 2.0 - I'd like to see how this episode would work with McKay.
07x10 - Birthright - Stay the same.
07x11 - Evolution Part 1 - The SS would fire one (1) shot and Teal'c would be hit in the opening scene and it would be a close call, thus making the SS actually sort of dangerous
07x12 - Evolution Part 2 - the whole Burk thing would be sorted out in 2 scenes instead of 4 thus leaving time for the acutal plot of dealing with the SS and saving Daniel.
07x13 - Grace - I think I might modify some of the dialog in the S/J scene just slightly.
07x14 - Fallout - Less of the bickering delagates. A Jonas/Teal'c scene which was sorely missing. Durring the Jonas/Sam scene Sam would mention that she's just started seeing someone named Pete.
07x15 - Chimera - Daniel/Osiris line is 70% of episode. Pete stumbles onto a report he asks Sam about it, she tells him it's classified, he accepts what she says. Sam ultimately decides that as nice as Pete is she's happy being single right now, and Pete just wasn't "the one". We see Sarah start to deal with the whole Goa'uld thing.
07x16 - Death Knell - Stay the same except that the wound on Sam's leg would clearly be from a SS weapon and not just an "anonumous injury". When Sam stopped for water from the DEEP RIVER, the SS would hit her in the shoulder, and he'd get swept down river by the fast moving current when he tried to cross, so he'd be unable to follow her.
07x17 - Heroes Part 1 - Stay the same except Sam would say "He's given more of himself to this program then anyone else" instead of 'given up more'.
07x18 - Heroes Part 2 - I'd have Cassie actually be in the episode.
07x19 - Inauguration - Inauguration would stay the same. Resurrection would no longer exist.
07x20 - Lost City Part 1 -
07x21 - Lost City Part 2 -
07x22 - Lost City Part 3 - Fleshout the story and make it a three parter since it was supposed to be a movie this would be more in keeping with the length
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