excellent chapter yet again.why didnt you mention the ori war.looking forward to next chapter
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i didnt mention the Ori war because in this story it didnt happencheck my story's:
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Originally posted by locutes View Postits great indeed! Perhaps a true union of the colonies can happen, a la all three colonies joining. And perhaps the Asgard joining up with the Pegasgard.
i am currently buzy with the next chapter expect it to be out in one or two weeks at moostcheck my story's:
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nah thats not going to happen, not like that anywayscheck my story's:
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alright the ep is to the beta i dont know how long it will take him but i guess no longer than a weekcheck my story's:
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a beta is a person who(in my case) filters out the grammar mistakes and corrects other mistakes. in my case he usually transferes my barbaric dutch english( his words not mine) in to something an American or Brit woud say. he also improves the sentences and gives advices on how to do it better. I hope that answeres your question!check my story's:
Battlestar group 16
and Under Siege
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Battlestar group 16 (For BSG 16 and Under siege)
my newest story:
TFS Ticonderoga
and respond at:
TFS Ticonderoga
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