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HONOR--An Atlantis scientist meets the Wraiths. Up close.
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Originally posted by Traveler64 View Postalmost at 22,000.... Only a few more.
But, I do wish some of the readers would leave one little comment... Sigh...
I did read to the end, and I could have sworn that I reviewed earlier.
I loved the ending. It was very emotional and a good break away from the Disney-esque happy endings. You created your character's personalities perfectly, how you give a new point of view on the relationship between humans and wraith (ex. how the Amber wraith showed his love in his own
alien way). I was so surprised when one of the twins attacked Elena and died, it was very unexpected, just like the amber wraith sacrificing his life. *sigh* You are so talented! This was the best fic I have ever read.sigpic
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Originally posted by Mariellelita View PostSorry T64.
I did read to the end, and I could have sworn that I reviewed earlier.
I loved the ending. It was very emotional and a good break away from the Disney-esque happy endings. You created your character's personalities perfectly, how you give a new point of view on the relationship between humans and wraith (ex. how the Amber wraith showed his love in his own
alien way). I was so surprised when one of the twins attacked Elena and died, it was very unexpected, just like the amber wraith sacrificing his life. *sigh* You are so talented! This was the best fic I have ever read.
I didn't mean to rattle the 'regulars'. It was the 'drive by' readers. Or, may be I should be happy that they don't--there's always the good possibility that they hate the story and they are simply being kind by saying nothing.
Again, thank you and I am so very pleased that you liked the ending. I was really conflicted about it, thinking that the readers expected a Hollywood, or Diseney-esque ending.
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Originally posted by Traveler64 View PostOh, thank you so much, Mariellelita!
I didn't mean to rattle the 'regulars'. It was the 'drive by' readers. Or, may be I should be happy that they don't--there's always the good possibility that they hate the story and they are simply being kind by saying nothing.
Again, thank you and I am so very pleased that you liked the ending. I was really conflicted about it, thinking that the readers expected a Hollywood, or Diseney-esque ending.
I know, but I still wanted to leave a review. The last couple of months had been very hectic and I neglected many of my duties.
I hope no one drops by and says anything bad about your fic. If they do, then they are fools who can't appreciate good writing.
Did you say that this was your last fic?sigpic
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Originally posted by Mariellelita View PostYou're welcome.
I know, but I still wanted to leave a review. The last couple of months had been very hectic and I neglected many of my duties.
I hope no one drops by and says anything bad about your fic. If they do, then they are fools who can't appreciate good writing.
Did you say that this was your last fic?
Mmmmm... last fic? I don't know... did I say that?
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Originally posted by Traveler64 View PostFor the past two months I've been in my own RL cave as well, so I understand perfectly, believe me.
Mmmmm... last fic? I don't know... did I say that?
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Originally posted by MCH View PostNow you've done it..... we are waiting with bated breath.....
MCH
Don't bate breath.
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Originally posted by MCH View PostToo late ..... I'm bored ...... MCH
I need to talk to the boys about your boredom. Let's see if they can get some hyperdrives--
MCH! Out of the gutter!
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Originally posted by Traveler64 View PostWell, then... start writing worshipful poems about Wraith (Amber in particular) in your little, green book.
I need to talk to the boys about your boredom. Let's see if they can get some hyperdrives--
MCH! Out of the gutter!
"There was a wraith called Amber who really could gander ....... " Now I need a rhyme to include Blue, maybe the beautiful ships, about Honor ..... this could be a long one ......
Oh dear I'm wobbling on my crutches ......
Thank god for the gutter cushions otherwise I could really have hurt myself
I'll just have to sit here until rescue arrivies under this Wraith undercarriage, in the meantime I'll try to compose worshipful poems or limericks in Honor our our boys.
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Originally posted by MCH View PostA Little Limerick in Honor of Wraith Commanders.
"There was a wraith called Amber who really could gander ....... " Now I need a rhyme to include Blue, maybe the beautiful ships, about Honor ..... this could be a long one ......
Oh dear I'm wobbling on my crutches ......
Thank god for the gutter cushions otherwise I could really have hurt myself
I'll just have to sit here until rescue arrivies under this Wraith undercarriage, in the meantime I'll try to compose worshipful poems or limericks in Honor our our boys.
MCH
Yes, I told Blue that he should scatter some cushions around the gutter. Some of his admirers are kind of wobbly these days. The vain Wraith took it to mean that the sight of him got you all wobbly. I didn't want to burst his bubble and explain to him that it was the crutches.
So, keep up the good work. Amber and Blue are strutting. It's quite a sight, as you can well imagine, when those two strut.
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Originally posted by Traveler64 View PostEasy now!
Yes, I told Blue that he should scatter some cushions around the gutter. Some of his admirers are kind of wobbly these days. The vain Wraith took it to mean that the sight of him got you all wobbly. I didn't want to burst his bubble and explain to him that it was the crutches.
So, keep up the good work. Amber and Blue are strutting. It's quite a sight, as you can well imagine, when those two strut.
Must be quite a sight as they strut their stuff in their long leather coats yeah I can imagine sweeping down your stair case. Ha Ha
And the cushion Blue you have got such good taste. The drapes are just pure Amber as well. Just the right type of place for some proper Wraith worshipping!!!!
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