Continuing Stargate

[Fettucchini]

And Walter!!

[Jezzalinko99au]

And Walter!!

Sorry to tell you mate BUT,

Spoiler:

In this story, Walter has died

Btw can't wait till its up.....

[s09119]

And Walter!!

You haven't read my stories very closely, have you

[Apollo214]

So have you thought about trying to get the guys in the Gateworld and alternate universe fleet threads your designs for the Der'kal ships, and seeing if someone could get a 3-D model going on?

Or better yet BoBerth has a modeling challenge thread in the sci-tech, give it to him, and he could have the people compete in rendering the Der'kal fleet.

[Fettucchini]

You haven't read my stories very closely, have you

oh right forgot about that. it's not that I don't read closely but my mind rebelled against the fact that you killed him. Besides that there are three people on that list who are either dead or currently occupied.

[Elitenova]

Here is a poem for Walter and General Hammond who died this season. The poem is already copyrighted, so you cant use it.

Staring into the dark window pane
Watching the empty field and driving me insane
Senseless as it seems to be in bane
A fear of being alone grows disdain


The silent whisper cried out from the grave
As the winds shook the trees from the conclave
And the phantom pain my life be waive
Alone and afraid of this defeat enslave

Letting him go without saying goodbye
Painful and difficult to handle and apply
Promise myself not to cry
Wiping the tears, succumbing to the sigh

[cuttingedgex23]

Here is a poem for Walter and General Hammond who died this season. The poem is already copyrighted, so you cant use it.

Staring into the dark window pane
Watching the empty field and driving me insane
Senseless as it seems to be in bane
A fear of being alone grows disdain


The silent whisper cried out from the grave
As the winds shook the trees from the conclave
And the phantom pain my life be waive
Alone and afraid of this defeat enslave

Letting him go without saying goodbye
Painful and difficult to handle and apply
Promise myself not to cry
Wiping the tears, succumbing to the sigh

Is bane even a word? haha i thot it was supposed to be in vain but idk, i dont have a very good vocabulary.

[Jeffala]

bane |b?n|
noun [usu. in sing. ]
a cause of great distress or annoyance : the bane of the decorator is the long, narrow hall | the depressions that were the the bane of her existence.
• archaic something, typically poison, that causes death.

[Lt. Col. Mcoy]

Is "bane" a word? Never read Lord of the Rings, eh?


And the poem is nice, but rhyme is much more effective when confined to only two lines. It seems repetitive when the whole section rhymes. You should rely more on rhythm to keep the poem flowing.

[Jeffala]

It's also the name of a centaur in Harry Potter.

<_<
>_>

[Lt. Col. Mcoy]

What's with the eyes?

[Elitenova]

Is "bane" a word? Never read Lord of the Rings, eh?


And the poem is nice, but rhyme is much more effective when confined to only two lines. It seems repetitive when the whole section rhymes. You should rely more on rhythm to keep the poem flowing.

Well, if you like it; why wont buy the book that I wrote. The Edge of the Night. It's in Amazon.com

[Dark lord me]

Well, if you like it; why wont buy the book that I wrote. The Edge of the Night. It's in Amazon.com

*Looks on Amazon under books at "The edge of the night"....Sees a book written in 1948 called the edge of the night*Got 'nothing

[Elitenova]

*Looks on Amazon under books at "The edge of the night"....Sees a book written in 1948 called the edge of the night*Got 'nothing

Uhm, here you go. The Edge of the Night

[Jezzalinko99au]

Hey, how long until the next ep is released mate? Really looking forward to it.

Though, if the wait is to improve, by all means, take your time