Originally posted by Skydiver
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As for head-hopping, I used to do it all the time and my readers didn't seem to have any problem with it. I like getting inside the heads of all of my characters. Since I write romance, I find that style suits most of my stories. My beta, however, is not a fan of head-hopping and calls me to task on it every time, reining me in until I at least put a break between POVs. I've gotten better about it, but I still like to at least show my main characters' POVs, particularly in the actual sex scenes. And yes, I write romance--not harlequin--and I'm not afraid of the smut. Anymore.
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