John Sheppard Whump

[knocknashee]

Ok, ok, here it is. And yes, it's evil The bunnies made me do it!

*pondering writing a flashback addition to it*

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2606085/1/

*runs from Beanie*

A flashback addition would be good...

Still in shock that you

Spoiler:

deaded

the woobie...

[Merentha]

A flashback addition would be good...

Still in shock that you

Spoiler:

deaded

the woobie...

Don't worry, in the sequel he

Spoiler:

ascends, then descends... nekkid

[Nessva]

Don't worry, in the sequel he

Spoiler:

ascends, then descends... nekkid

Oooh!! I can't be bothered to read back a page to see what this is about but oooh!!! I like the sound of this! (Fic, I'm going to depressingly assume!)

[Merentha]

Oooh!! I can't be bothered to read back a page to see what this is about but oooh!!! I like the sound of this! (Fic, I'm going to depressingly assume!)

Not even a real fic, either, but we can all use our imaginations...

[Nessva]

Not even a real fic, either, but we can all use our imaginations...

Oh I sure can!

[knocknashee]

Don't worry, in the sequel he

Spoiler:

ascends, then descends... nekkid

Now you are just teasing...

[Nessva]

Now you are just teasing...

I can't tell, but its sure working!

[Merentha]

Now you are just teasing...

Ok, I'll go back to whumping... Though I'm finding the flashback very hard to write, too sad I think it's time for that sleep I said I'd be getting about an hour ago...

[CeeKay Sheppard]

Mer!! That was AMAZING!! That little ficcie left me absolutely speechless!

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They’d brought him into the control room with his hands cuffed behind his back, lip bloodied and swollen. No chance for heroics this time. He grinned at Kolya and reminded him of the score last time they’d gone up against each other. Kolya gave him the score this time and John spat in his face. That was the John Sheppard she wanted to remember, defiant to the end.

I loved that part!! The entire story was just so powerfully written... I cannot express in words how totally awesome that story is!

[Linzi]

I loved the ficcie, but thought it was really sad! Whenever I read a fic. where Shep

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dies

I feel a lump in my throat and a real pain in my chest! From Elizabeth's description of Shep at the time of the 'horrible incident' I could really picture the look on his face!!! I'm giong away to cry now!
Mind you

Spoiler:

ascended, descended and nekkid Shep has cheered me up some!

[knocknashee]

I loved the ficcie, but thought it was really sad! Whenever I read a fic. where Shep

Spoiler:

dies

I feel a lump in my throat and a real pain in my chest! From Elizabeth's description of Shep at the time of the 'horrible incident' I could really picture the look on his face!!! I'm giong away to cry now!
Mind you

Spoiler:

ascended, descended and nekkid Shep has cheered me up some!

That idea warms even the coldest of hearts Linzi...

[Linzi]

That idea warms even the coldest of hearts Linzi...

It wasn't my heart that was feeling the warmth Beanie.....

[knocknashee]

It wasn't my heart that was feeling the warmth Beanie.....

Now why does that *NOT* surprise me...

[prion]

For non-spoilerphobes, check out Emedian's wonderful new Shep whump shots from "Epiphany" at

http://sg-atlantis.emedian.net/s212.html

Just in case anybody missed them....

[Naeara]

Don't worry, in the sequel he

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ascends, then descends... nekkid

LOL. Sounds promising.

But OUCH, Mer! That was painful but beautifully done.