Originally posted by MrsB108
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Ok read this little bit and tell me if it's even remotely interesting cuz if not I wont bother writing more and posting a whole story in a fanfiction section!
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Teyla looked at John’s eager face and her heart broke having to tell him the truth. She felt ashamed she had not known it was him. She had just wanted to be with him so badly that she put any odd behavior he had displayed out of her mind since she was overwhelmed with the sudden turn of events. She felt sick thinking the person she had been with, the person who had touched her, the person she confessed her feelings too, was not John. It was a parasite, a mockery, and she was glad it was dead, she only wished she could have killed it herself. And now, she knew she had to tell John she was pregnant. Already Dr. Keller knew, although she did not know by whom. No one knew the truth, and Teyla planned to keep it that way. Why suffer the embarrassment from both herself and the Colonel, she thought, when he obviously did not feel the same way about her as she did him. She decided to make something up, invent a lover. It would make no difference since the real John Sheppard had never seemed interested in Teyla in that way besides when he was not himself. Her eyes focused steadily on his as she said, “John, please do not worry. I am not ill, I am pregnant.” And then something happened she never expected. John’s face appeared blank for a moment. Then his eyes seemed to fill with sadness, and soon his whole face looked shattered. He didn’t say anything for a few moments, before he looked at away and gave sort of a half cough. “Wow, well that’s…um..wow Teyla. I mean that’s, that’s really something.” His eyes evaded hers completely. Teyla lay there confused at his reaction. This was not what she expected. “I’m ……really glad for you and stuff...,” Suddenly his eyes beamed directly on hers and his expression changed. “Who’s the father?” he asked almost forcefully. Teyla, taken aback, stammered for a moment before replying with her lie, “It’s a fellow Athosian man. One with great honor and dignity.” John looked at her with utter disbelief. “Yeah that’s great, I’m gonna let you get your rest.” And with that, he simply turned and walked out the door leaving Teyla speechless, lying on the bed in the infirmary staring at the empty doorway.
Awesome teaser! I can't wait for the rest. GREAT JOB! And you had your doubts.
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