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Is it normal for a cough to last for more than a week?? I can't remember if I've had one go on for this long before, and it's really akward to be hacking my head off in front of customers at work......
Dear Journal My contribution to the Stargate Rewatch experience. Will be updated nearly everyday, and will cover all episodes, and characters.
EDIT: Think that I'll try going on to bed now. May be back if I can't sleep, but I'll say it anyway just in case. Good night, good morning, and good day to you all. I'll be back around 1400 CST.
Last edited by JacksonMiracle; 12 October 2007, 07:52 PM.
Dear Journal My contribution to the Stargate Rewatch experience. Will be updated nearly everyday, and will cover all episodes, and characters.
Writer's suggestion, something that was drilled into me by my first editor.
Never (almost never) bury character speach inside a paragraph.
Abc walked over to the wall, saying, "This picture is crooked." She fussed with it for a few minutes then turned to talk to Def, "That's better, isn't it?"
I was told that the speach gets lost in the actions. Some of us here cheat and highlight speach with a different color.
Also, when you finish one thought process and start another, make a new paragraph.
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