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    Shep "I think..."

    *Iris shield raises*

    Shep "Nope not that"

    *Shep punches an ancient console*

    Bray & San "Careful!"

    *Shield raises*

    Shep "Job done!"

    Ronon "Lets go find out what happened to Mel"

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      *Melfan is still kneeling next to the Queen*
      Queen: I sence something in you *Sniffs*
      Melfan: I'm just an ordinary clone, nothing wrong with me!
      *The Queen takes Melfans and looks at it*
      Queen: You are a human, yet you have this *Meaning the slit on the hand*
      Melfan: I'm a clone, my original was turned into a Wraith, they killed her. Maybe something transfered into me when they made me!
      Queen: You speak as you where not the original. A clone should not be aware it's clone
      Melfan: I feel strangely detached at the moment! *She looks up at the Queen who frowns* What?
      Queen: Your eyes, your pupils are not round, more the way of a wraith!
      Melfan: They don't know you are hear. I can make sure that you live and you can hide in the city, I can tamper with the life sign detector so it wont pick you up! You can take over minds of other right?
      Queen: Yes...
      Melfan: *Grins* Excellent! I know who to start with...
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        *opens comm*
        San:melfan! Are you there? Melfan, please respond! Nothing!

        Ronon: can you see her on the life signs detector?

        Bray: no, no sign of her anymore

        *san and Bray exchange worried look*

        Shep: I bet she's fine, maybe they beamed her on board of the other ship

        San: right, that must be it

        Ronon: let's get to the chair room and find out
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          Queen: The others are comming
          Melfan: Leave! *She sit's down in the chair* Can you make me go uncunsios? As if strain to blow up 3 and damage one became to much
          Queen: Yes *Enter Melfans mind and renders her uncunsious*
          *The Queen leaves*
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            *Bray enters the room first*

            Bray "Mel!"

            Mel ".....urgh...."

            Bray "JPJ medic up!"

            JPJ "Mild concussion nothing serious"

            Mel ".....Urgh.....tell that to my head"

            JPJ "err I just did I wasn't speaking to your foot"

            *Bray opens the comm*

            "Lorne whats the status on the last hive?"

            Lorne "It's trying to retreat at sublight, the cruisers have all jumped out"

            Bray "Take it out, bring the rain!"

            Lorne "Bringing the rain sir!"

            *A huge flash is seen in the night sky*

            Lorne "Bogie destroyed"

            Bray "Good work, Bray out"

            *comm closed*

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              Melfan *Groaning* Tell Lorne to land beam everyone down, there is no wraith left
              Sangate: What about the Queen?
              Melfan: what Queen?
              Bray: There is usually a Queen around.
              Melfan: Maybe she was on one of the ships that i totally destroyed. I rock! *Gives big smile and pumps her arms in the air, concealing the slit*
              Ronon: Uh uh...
              Melfan: hi, you must be Ronon. I'm General Melfan *Holds out hand*
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                *Ronon draws his pistol with that cool bwah sound*

                Bray "Stand down!"

                Ronon "She's a wraith!"

                Bray "What...no she isn't!"

                Ronon "I'm telling you she is!"

                Bray "Ronon outside now!"

                Ronon "I don't take orders from you!"

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                  San: Bray! Ronon! What the heck do you think you're doing!

                  Ronon: She's a wraith

                  San: What do you mean she's a wraith

                  Melfan: I'm not a wraith! Where did you get that weird idea?

                  Ronon: she has a slit on her hand

                  *San gives melfan worried look*

                  San: melfan, show me your hand

                  Melfan: I'm my own boss, I don't have to do that

                  San: Melfan, show me your hand, or I will have to force you too

                  Melfan: you can't force me

                  San: Bray, show me her hand

                  Melfan: Bray, I order you not to touch me!

                  San: Bray!

                  *bray looks from san to melfan and back, and makes a dicision*
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                    Melfan: How can I be a wraith! I haven't encounter any wraith until now. I'm clone dammit! *Stops to think of what she just said* Uhm. I'm a human!
                    Ronon Clone?
                    Bray, SanGate: You know!?
                    Melfan: *under her breath* Crap. Uhm, I found John's PJ's medical record, it was laying out in the open next to my bed! i don't remember being cloned or being turned into clone by Michael. Good job killing him btw. Nore do I resent LizzieAnne for killing me.. The originial me... Being a clone is no big deal. I'm still me. No change in that.
                    *Bray and SanGate exchange looks*
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                      *Bray holsters his weapon and grabs Mels right hand*

                      Bray "Oh no"

                      San "What?"

                      Bray "You aren't going to like this"

                      *Bray shows the hand*

                      San "But how come she isn't...well...blue?"

                      Ronon "Who cares lets kill her now!"

                      *At that moment Shep shoots ronon in the leg*

                      Ronon "ARGH"

                      *Bray tackles Shep*

                      Bray "What the hell are you doing??!!"

                      Shep "I.....I don't know"

                      *Mel runs out the door*

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                        San: Bray, grab her!

                        *Bray is too late, melfan's gone*

                        San: Sheppard, what the hell was that?

                        Shep: I-I don't know

                        *Bray and San exchange looks, once again*

                        Ronon: we gotta get out of here

                        Bray: what about melfan?

                        San: she's obviously not herself. I don't doubt she'll find a way to get to us, especially since it was apparently all a trick to get us here

                        Bray: let's go back to the Orion then

                        *run towards beaming platform*
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                          *Ronon being carried by Bray and Shep*

                          Bray "Come on big guy! You've had worse!"

                          Ronon "Yeah like what you did to me!"

                          Bray "Hey that was an accident remember and it did save your life in a way! Anyways if your going to be annoyed be annoyed with Shep"

                          Ronon "He'll pay when we spar next"

                          Shep "Oh come on it's only a flesh wound"

                          *The team reaches the beam point*
                          Last edited by Bray; 29 April 2008, 02:57 AM.

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                            Melfan runs to the beaming platform*
                            Lorne beam me up, and beam the rest to the brig, the are comprimased! They are not what appear to be!
                            Lorne: are you sure?
                            Melfan: Yes i'm sure!
                            *Lorne beams up Melfan*
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                              *they arrive at the beaming platfrom*

                              San: Lorne, beam us aboard! Ronon is hurt and melfan is compromised!

                              Lorne: ...

                              San: Lorne! Do you read?

                              Lorne: Erm, Ma'am, I just beamed melfan aboard who says you are compromised

                              San and Bray simultaneously: oh crap..

                              San: she's the one compromised! She's cloned into a wraith! Watch her closely, you can see she's not herself!

                              Lorne: but who says you're not the ones compromised

                              San: Think Evan!! She turned into a wraith before she was shot!

                              Melfan: Lorne, don't you dare! They'll take command of this ship!

                              San: Lorne, beam us aboard! Now!

                              *beaming sound is heard*
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                                *The Brig,a beaming noice is heard*
                                SanGate: uh ho
                                Bray: This is not the bridge
                                Melfan: Clever. No this is the brig! Some of the wraith DNA was transfered to the clone.
                                SanGate: We can help!
                                Bray: Yea. This is not who you sre!
                                Melfan: What, you are gonna kill me again and then clone me? I'm gonna go find LizzieAnne
                                *Melfan leaves brig*
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