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    story-just the beginning?

    now, it's ben a while, and I am a little rusty on my story writing, so go easy on it ok.

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    the end of the universe has come, the tardis sits in the void near death, the doctor long dead lies rotting in his grave on trenzalore many trillions of billions of centuries ago, the tardis is all that remains of the universe, the only thing that remains in the universe, all planets, suns, galaxies, all of everything gone, time did its most efficient job and destroyed every atom in the universe and the atoms in the remains of the tardis are succumbing, even time itself is succumbing to the icy cold depths of death.

    the nothingness calls deep cold and limitless, the all of everything is silence. the stillness is all there is and was, until, a great flash of light pierces the dim light inside the tardis, a small sphere of silver appears in the dimming light inside, outside time and space are all but gone, the void of nothingness is everywhere, inside the tardis, a single drop of silver, like a drop of mercury, grows and grows and grows, it fills the entire inside of the tardis, every crack and crevice, every nook and cranny, right down to the very quantum level and is absorbed by the tardis remains, once again all is silence and the light of the last remains of the universe , the last light in the universe dims and dims and....stops dimming, the atoms of the tardis stop their decay, they just stop, it was as if death had decided to let go of the last of the universe and let it stay. no, no that wasn't it, the tardis began to become brighter, it was as though life it self was returning to the tardis once again, the power levels were growing systems that had ben dormant for trillions of centuries began to not only power back up, but repair them selves, it was as if there was a new life force flowing through the oldest thing that ever existed or will exist.

    the tardis remains begin to revitalize, repair, some parts even become like new, right off the factory floor, this goes on for what would have be billions of centuries, that is if time still existed, even the glitch in the navigation system was fixed, though that alone was the last thing fixed, and it took a hundred thousand centuries, the stubborn machine, any way, after all that time the tardis was as if it was brand new, right off the factory floor, but what now, with no time vortex, with almost no time any where, what was the tardis to do. it sat there for a few centuries more, then another flash of light and another drop of mercury and once again it filled the tardis, but this time it didn't stop, it filled the entire inside of the tardis, so much so that the doors burst open and the silver covers the entire outside, the beautiful blue is covered with a brilliant silver, to the point of covering the entire thing, until there was nothing left of it, just a sphere of silver.

    where there was a brand new tardis, now there is nothing but a sphere of silver, and now the sphere is shrinking, a sphere that was several feet across is now about half its size, and the inside of the tardis is shrinking, crushing consoles, power generators, everything is being crushed and destroyed, not just destroyed, utterly obliterated, down to the very quantum level, from half its size to less than the size of a human hair, then the last of it is just the size of half of a drop and then a blinding flash of light, and the nothingness that is the universe is all that remains.

    in a white room, there is a blinding flash of light, and in the middle of the room, there is a small drop of silver, it grows and expands to the size of the sphere, the silver vaporizes and the blue of the tardis is once again seen , the inside is as if nothing ever happened, it is like new, just as if it came off the factory floor, brilliant and new. another small silver sphere hovers at the door entrance, it is scanned, it is filled with the remains of organic matter, plant, animal, and others. a tray slides out from the wall and the silver vaporizes depositing the material, the tray slides back in to the wall and then a purple sphere flies through and decontaminates the entire tardis.

    the organics were collected, analyzed and studied, each particle of organic matter is separated and placed into separate dishes, in some dishes there is but a single speck, others, there was plenty of for extensive experiments, whole eco systems from countless worlds were represented in the organic matter, and entire races were there too, from human to time lord, from dalek to sontaren, from ood to sleeven and countless other races, the walls of the entire room was filled with the organic matter just waiting to be analyzed.

    time passed, i guess you could say that time passed if it still existed, the analysis went on and on, who knows how long, but it went on. Eventually it finished, all the organic material was duplicated and placed in a seperate container, where it would remain, the original material was loaded in to a container and placed back in to the tardis. the tardis herself wondered what was going on and readied her defenses but it was no use, what ever defense she had was useless, it simply penetrated it and moved on to what it was doing. once the container was placed in the tardis, it was given a program to follow and she had no other choice but to follow it. the tardis started its engines and followed the program, the flash occurred again and again the silver formed again, this time it encased the tardis and again it crushed it, back in , what was our universe, the flash and the sphere happened again, and again the tardis is as new as it ever was, the sphere parted and the tardis doors opened and the container was thrown out in to the void and the sphere closed around it, and once again there was nothing but the silver sphere, the canister drifted away from the tardis and then a large green ish mist emitted from it, the canister flew off in to the nothingness of the void and was gone. after much "time" passed, there was a green flash and a giant explosion of light, a wall of flame and gasses came hurtling towards the silver sphere and it vaporized the sphere leaving the tardis as good as new, she understood finally, she understood what all had happened, the rebirth of a universe and the return of her true love her thief, as she started her temporal engines and flew back to the work shop where she would wait to be stolen by her love again.

    as she disappeared she couldn't help but wonder who it was who did every thing and why. we follow the trail back to the white room, out the door, and down the hall, through floors and decks and rooms, all that are empty and unused for who knows how long, the only room with any thing even running is a light in the only room with a body in it, long dead and mummified, a recording plays, of a man, the picture was degraded so much that there is barely any picture, but the sound is still audible, though it is in bad shape too, it is the last words of the man, the VERY old man.

    "this is Malcom renyolds, sole survivor of the prototype ship serenity, this was supposed to be the the, maiden voyage of the serenity, the reality bending engines which were to propel the ship to the void between universes so man kind could survive the end of the universe, but something went wrong wrong wrong, once we entered the void time was supposed to stop for us , we were supposed to see the end of the universe, but something went wrong with the drive, or so we thought, it turns out that the company that built this ship designed it to re create the universe in their own image, so they could be the masters of the universe again, they made it so it could happen again over and over , i don't know how much longer i have, but should some one see this message know this, whoever we are, it isn't the void, we passed through the void to the no where, time and space and dimension and reality it self don't exist, i'm not even sure i exist, i am setting the controls to search the void for any thing that can get us back, but if it can't , it will do what it must to recreate reality on its own. you want to hear the funny part, they did,'t put their organic samples on the ship because it was supposed to be just a test flight, so now the scanners are looking for any organic material and technology that can help it do its mission, and there is no way i can over ride the commands, so if you are aboard i wish you luck, because you are going to die here." "this is Malcom renyolds, sole survivor of the prototype ship serenity.....

    the end, or the beginning, who knows.

    #2
    What has been will be?
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      #3
      Originally posted by Gatefan1976 View Post
      What has been will be?
      yes and no, things COULD wind up like it did before, but not EXACTLY, like flowers in the spring time, some flowers come up with ten petals, last year, but only wind up with five petals this year, or twelve the next year, or it could have a garden where your pumpkins grew to just the perfect size and the next year, they wound up a little smaller, the same thing happened, just a little difference in each one, so the same, but different.

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