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    Default Stargate: Millennium

    I am hesitant to do this because of how busy I am and a number of personal problems I am facing but here it goes. This is a new spin off series that I've been working on: Stargate Millennium. I have a trailer for it on youtube. You can find the links for both the trailer and my spin off in my signature at the bottom. One more thing about the trailer: I was very picky about how I made it. If you see or hear it happen in the trailer, it'll happen in the series eventually.

    Premise: Tens of thousands of years ago, during the early days of their alliance, the Alliance of Four Great Races chose to explore the universe together. To that end, they build a massive city both as a monument to their new found alliance and to act as a capital for all four races: The Millennium. When the Alliance was dissolved, they chose to abandon the city and leave it for when they either chose to return or for a worth successor.
    Modern day: the SGC assembles the largest expeditionary force in history and send it to the Millennium. The city is located in the galaxy of Caldwell 70 AKA NGC 300. Because of its distance, the expedition has to first be sent to Atlantis to use all three of their newly acquired ZPM's to reach the Millennium and establish a new colony.

    (Note: I wanted all four races for the Millennium for a number of reasons but the primary one is I AM SICK OF ANCIENTS!!! After they discovered Atlantis, it seems like everything is Ancient. It's an Ancient outpost or experiment, or let's go find this new place built by the Ancients. I have recently begun reading other fan spin offs and I'm still HAUNTED by the Ancients. Another reason is to explore the lore of the other races. We don't know much about the Furlings and Nox yet. They helped colonize this galaxy and we get to learn more about them. If this series does well, I intend on even going into the history of the A4GR.)



    "The moment a person is born into a Ror'char society, his future is guaranteed. He is guaranteed an education, a job, a life. He will grow up never knowing the threat of losing everything he holds dear. He will grow up never knowing what it is like to lose a loved one at the hands of a criminal."
    -Overlord Exodan Krell
    The Ror'char: the colony/expedition will meet a number of new civilizations, some friendly and some hostile. The most prominent of them is the Ror'char. The Ror'char is not a race but a civilization of several races from all across the galaxy. They are often called peacekeepers and guardians of the galaxy. In a perverse way, that is true. Their goal is galaxy-wide peace and prosperity. However, they believe that the only way to achieve this is by absolute control. They believe chaos, crime, and cruelty stem from freedom and the only way to prevent these is to quash a societies' freedoms, including freedom of belief. A person must be told what to believe and those who think otherwise must be dealt with by whatever means necessary. Free societies must be 'liberated' and corrupted governments must be overthrown. They feel that if a civilization has grown too large and has not properly dealt with crime and poverty then the Ror'char must step in and help or risk having it spread to the rest of the galaxy.
    However, disagreements in the Ror'char leadership has created a civil war between different Ror'char factions. Some factions have become corrupted by power-hungry leaders while others still pursue the goal of galaxy-wide peace by whatever means necessary. All the factions are also in an arms race, studying Alliance technology left behind to upgrade their weapons and ships.
    (Note: I consider the Ror'char less an enemy and more a neutral faction that simply has an interest that conflicts with the Millennium Expedition/Colony. The Ror'char and Expedition will even occasionally work together if they see a gain to it. There will be an enemy faction later on but it probably won't be what you expect.)


    "Everything in this galaxy tries to kill us."
    -Doctor Steven Chen
    "That's the fifth plant that tried to kill us on this planet."
    -Doctor Steven Chen
    Flora and Fauna: the animals and plants of the Caldwell 70 have also posed a problem. The expedition will have to deal with, on numerous occasions, the alien animals. These range from the vormians, furbie-looking rats that reproduce asexually and can go from one to hundreds in mere days, to the krenshaw, a massive lobster-like creature that's even bigger than a puddle jumper that view humans as a perfect sized meal.


    I will post more later including characters and story outlines.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
    https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5580179/StargateMillennium


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    Default Re: Stargate: Millennium

    I put this up so people who don't have a fanfiction account can tell me what they think. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Even if you have something negative to say, just be polite about it and give me some good reasons and I'll see if I can fix it.

    I've been getting a fair amount of help from StargateWatcher, Spearhead, and Sealurk (Author of Stargate Ragnorak) who I want to publicly thank.
    Last edited by StargateMillennium; December 9th, 2018 at 04:21 PM.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
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    Hi. You're very welcome for the help. I am also tired, similarly, of the Ancients being the most advanced race of the alliance, light years ahead of everyone else; that's why I purposely made the Furling kin my story series more advanced in some aspects. I would love to find out your take on the likely Nox and Furling history, as well as the Asgard.
    If you're interested in reading my longest fanfic story, which is an action/adventure story involving the elusive Furlings (as well as if you want to read the others), please click the link below.
    [URL="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6888222/1/Tauri_Furling_First_Contact_and_Alliance[/URL]

    RIP Sep 2010 to beloved gateworld.net member and forum contributor Weedle, very skilled soldier with military special operations, a wonderful human being, and a friend to so many on gateworld. May we keep his memory close.

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    Default Re: Stargate: Millennium

    I know of only 1 other writer who has the Four GR all building a city together, so good going with the original idea.
    If you're interested in reading my longest fanfic story, which is an action/adventure story involving the elusive Furlings (as well as if you want to read the others), please click the link below.
    [URL="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6888222/1/Tauri_Furling_First_Contact_and_Alliance[/URL]

    RIP Sep 2010 to beloved gateworld.net member and forum contributor Weedle, very skilled soldier with military special operations, a wonderful human being, and a friend to so many on gateworld. May we keep his memory close.

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    Default Re: Stargate: Millennium

    Quote Originally Posted by StargateWatcher View Post
    I know of only 1 other writer who has the Four GR all building a city together, so good going with the original idea.
    Hmm, I might want to check that out see what that guy did. Yeah, I'm just skimming over the premises of the other spin offs and it seems to always involve the Ancients. They have a mission and find an Ancient space station or they find another Ancient city or they get stranded and make a home inside an Ancient ship and they usually all have some old enemy of the Ancients. It's as if everyone forgot about the Nox and Furlings.

    I hope this does well. I'm only going to try to expand the lore if I have enough followers to motivate me to keep going. In fact, I already have some of the back story for the Alliance planned that would even explain why all the races were so hesitant to share technology or interfere.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
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    Well, I'm suffering some extreme writer's block right now so I guess I'll mess around with this again. Made some concept art. I guess I'll put it up as well as the descriptions.

    The X699
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    The X699 is the Tau'ri's first true directed energy weapon. It has gone through several changes since original iteration. It is no longer a large clunky shape and now sports a sleeker design. The crystal lenses have been moved from the barrel to the inside of the weapon. The crystal tray has been moved to the stock and the naquadah generator has been replaced with a more efficient naquadah power cell in the butt.

    The newer design also sports a higher rate of fire and greater accuracy than the original design. Picatinny rails along the top allows for any additional attachments such as holo sights and scopes.

    Jennifer Hailey's personal X699 has modified her weapon to have an even higher rate of fire, improved efficiency from the naquadah power cell, an Eloran heat sink to allow for longer bursts of fire, and fierri modifications that have increased the energy output of each bolt. Her X699 can easily be identified with the phrase 'badass blonde' carved into the stock.



    Hand Blaster
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    The Goa'uld Hand Blaster is the pistol variant of the staff weapon, possessing many of the same drawbacks. It is large, relatively unwieldy, and has a significant recoil. Its rate of fire is higher than that of a staff weapon and each shot has around the same power.




    Spear Weapon
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    The Goa'uld Spear weapon is the sniper variant of the more common Staff weapon. The Spear weapon is notably shorter than the staff, possessing a smaller power source, and containing a spear point that can be used to impale targets at close range.

    Spear weapons also contain a retractable forward grip and an attachable scope to be used for sniping. The weapon is mounted on the user's shoulder akin to a rocket launcher with a grip for better handling. The bolt of energy is smaller and travels several times faster than a staff bolt.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
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    The Tale of Nox and Aurox
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    In the galaxy of Caldwell 70, there is a religion called Nox, made by the race known as Nox, founded by a man named Nox. However, his story is unknown to most.

    Long before the formation of the Alliance of Four Great Races, there was a race known as the Sillerens. They were among the most powerful races in the universe with unmatched military technology. And each Sileren possessed god-like abilities. Lesser races would tell tales of how a single Silleren soldier could wipe out entire armies with little more than a glare.

    The Sillerens were divided into nations, each with their own leaders and politics. However, a day came when all the nations ended up at war with each other, a war that consumed their galaxy and even neighboring galaxies.

    Disillusioned by the war, the warrior Nox and his brother Aurox abandoned their posts and went on a pilgrimage of sorts, trying to make sense of everything. The details of their pilgrimage is described in the Book of Nox. However, the two brothers came to very different conclusions by the end of their travels. Nox forsook all violence. But Aurox felt that violence was a tool to be used. The two brothers gathered their own followers. Those that followed Nox practiced pacifism and understanding. Those that followed Aurox practiced honor and nobility. Nox encouraged being one with nature, to understand that despite their power they were still small in the universe. Aurox encouraged ingenuity and ambition, that one should work to constantly improve themselves.

    Fearing that his brother and those that followed him would be wiped out, Aurox and his followers formed the Order of Aurox, a military group that would use their technology to protect the weak, the first group being Nox and his followers. Nox protested but Aurox did not listen, cutting down those that threatened the pacifistic group. The two groups endured until the Sillerens were wiped out, destroyed by their own war. Their home galaxy was uninhabitable and even their neighboring galaxies were ravaged.

    Seeing as how they would never agree and could not coexist, Aurox and his followers left to carve their own path.

    Nox would come to the end of his life, but his followers honored Nox by renaming themselves after him. They continued his teaching and began a religion in his name to teach lesser races, hoping they too would follow the path.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
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    FF 305 Typhon
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    The SGC noted that every new enemy they encounter proved more powerful than previous ones. Fearing that they may not be able to build and advance their warships fast enough to meet the coming challenges, the Typhon was built as an answer and is the first ship built with knowledge from the Asgard Core. Rather than being built for direct combat, the Typhon was built for hit-and-run tactics, reconnaissance, and stealth.

    Its shielding is weaker than that of the 304, its hull strength is comparable to the Prometheus, it only carries 2 F302's, and it is a third of the size of the 304. Along with this is carries 12 railguns (compared to the Prometheus's 24), 6 VLS missle tubes (compared to the Prometheus's 12), and only a single Asgard beam weapon (compared to the 304's 4).

    Despite it seeming to be a step back, the Typhon possesses a slew of new tricks. The ship contains two 'thumper cannons', energy turrets built with knowledge from Athena and blueprints from the Asgard core. These weapons are meant for ship to ship combat. The railguns also have a new targeting algorithm which allows them to serve as point defense weapons to shoot down incoming enemy fire.

    However, the iconic ability that defines the Typhon is its cloak. The ship's entire design was built around this. To assist with this, the Typhon has the stealth protocol and the Hephaestus Core. When cloaking, the stealth protocol is engaged, turning off all nonessential systems to reduce the amount of energy needed to be masked. Furthermore, the Hephaestus Core begins absorbing energy from the ship.

    A new feature are the six torpedoes at the front of the ship. These weapons are equipped with the Type-2 stealth drive, a lesser version of a cloaking device that leaves the torpedo visible. The torpedo is propelled using cold gas rather than regular thrusters, resulting in a slower speed. However, this allows the torpedo to be fired while cloaked, something once assumed to be impossible. The torpedo is also difficult to detect, allowing surprise nuclear strikes against ships.




    The Hyperspace Missile Program
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    The Hyperspace missile program was started after the Horizon attack on Asuras. The SGC sought new ways of launching their weapons. The ICBM on earth meant any country could attack another country without every landing a single troop. They aimed to replicate that for space. The result was the Hyperspace Missile. As its name entails, it is a missile containing a hyperspace generator. After being launched, the missile will enter hyperspace, exiting at its destination and hitting its target. Current models of the HM have it armed with Horizon weapons, giving the SGC the capability to wipe out any planet without every endangering their people.


    Stargate spin off series: Stargate Millennium
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