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    Sent you a VM and Email FH.
    Received it! Thank you!
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    It's a long shot (and I'm probably the only one even in this thread somewhat alive) but looking for someone to look over a 1400-words fic. Grammar and spelling (non-native speaker).

    Stargate Atlantis -- Elizabeth Weir centric -- T -- no pairings -- somewhat episode related to Progeny, The Real World, Lifeline & Ghost In The Machine

    If it could be done this weekend, so I could have it up next week, that would be great.


    Beta found, so no longer needed.
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    I could use a beta for any of my three fics (first two are unfinished). Beta, proofread, commenting on story structure, plot, arcs, dialog, characters, tropes..I could use anything.

    I will beta pretty much anything Stargate, especially Atlantis and give anything I can (you know what I mean).
    Last edited by WraithRichard; September 23rd, 2018 at 11:06 AM.
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    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    Looking for someone who'd be willing to look over an, as of yet unwritten, short drabble/ficlet for a fandom stocking filling. It will be Lorne/Parrish -- PG-13 tame.

    Edit -- beta found!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Falcon Horus View Post
    Looking for someone who'd be willing to look over an, as of yet unwritten, short drabble/ficlet for a fandom stocking filling. It will be Lorne/Parrish -- PG-13 tame.
    I can beta starting next week.
    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

    Whiskey Tango Foxtrot Fiat justitia et pereat mundus. Fiat justitia ruat caelum.



    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    Meanwhile I need beta help myself. I'd especially like help with characterization and continuity, plus fixing plotholes.
    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

    Whiskey Tango Foxtrot Fiat justitia et pereat mundus. Fiat justitia ruat caelum.



    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    And I'm back with another request (more coming as I have 6 more stargate ficlets in the planning stages for this stocking season)... or perhaps I should just list the potential ficlets and see if anyone's interested:

    Stargate Atlantis -- all PG-13 or G even
    Teyla/Kate -- twice
    Rodney McKay/John Sheppard (G) -- already written, so read for beta, and another one planned
    Radek Zelenka
    Cadman/Lorne
    Rodney/Ronon

    And if anyone fancies a beta for a Legend Of The Seeker ficlet, that'll be Cara/Kahlan. Also PG-13 or G.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Falcon Horus View Post
    And I'm back with another request (more coming as I have 6 more stargate ficlets in the planning stages for this stocking season)... or perhaps I should just list the potential ficlets and see if anyone's interested:

    Stargate Atlantis -- all PG-13 or G even
    Teyla/Kate -- twice
    Rodney McKay/John Sheppard (G) -- already written, so read for beta, and another one planned
    Radek Zelenka
    Cadman/Lorne
    Rodney/Ronon

    And if anyone fancies a beta for a Legend Of The Seeker ficlet, that'll be Cara/Kahlan. Also PG-13 or G.
    I can't comment on most ships other than whether I beleive them due to writing or not, but I can beta on weekends and Monday, sometimes other days not Wednesday
    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

    Whiskey Tango Foxtrot Fiat justitia et pereat mundus. Fiat justitia ruat caelum.



    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WraithRichard View Post
    I can't comment on most ships other than whether I beleive them due to writing or not, but I can beta on weekends and Monday, sometimes other days not Wednesday
    Considering I don't normally write them unless I'm feeling really confident or can see it, that makes two of us.
    I'll keep you in mind.

    Also thanks for the feedback on that first one -- haven't had time to check it over but hopefully tonight. The others are still unwritten -- also no time for writing was had. I'm back at work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Falcon Horus View Post
    Considering I don't normally write them unless I'm feeling really confident or can see it, that makes two of us.
    I'll keep you in mind.

    Also thanks for the feedback on that first one -- haven't had time to check it over but hopefully tonight. The others are still unwritten -- also no time for writing was had. I'm back at work.
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    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

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    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    I know that this is the thread for betas, and I've been looking for a beta to my story for a long time now. Many people know I've written a story or two or three, but because my stories are 'alternate universe' stories, or maybe because they're romance stories (to an extent), they don't want to read them. Those that did read them, have told me they read like 'Mary Sue' types of stories. I am not sure. All I know is that I just started writing, and out came these stories. So I am looking for someone willing to read my stories and give me an HONEST answer. Even if it means starting from scratch and rewriting everything. Is there anyone here willing to help a fellow writer out????
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    Quote Originally Posted by imzadi35 View Post
    I know that this is the thread for betas, and I've been looking for a beta to my story for a long time now. Many people know I've written a story or two or three, but because my stories are 'alternate universe' stories, or maybe because they're romance stories (to an extent), they don't want to read them. Those that did read them, have told me they read like 'Mary Sue' types of stories. I am not sure. All I know is that I just started writing, and out came these stories. So I am looking for someone willing to read my stories and give me an HONEST answer. Even if it means starting from scratch and rewriting everything. Is there anyone here willing to help a fellow writer out????
    Did they say why the character(s) came off as Mary Sues?

    you may have to change a lot, but I'm willing to help over discord or google docs
    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

    Whiskey Tango Foxtrot Fiat justitia et pereat mundus. Fiat justitia ruat caelum.



    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    No, WraithRichard, they didn't. I haven't learned that much, but I'm willing to rewrite the whole thing if necessary.
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    Hi everyone. I am looking for a beta for my first fan fic. I am not a native english speaker, that´s why I would need somebody who could correct my mistakes. Different suggestions and opinions are welcome. Thank you very much

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    Quote Originally Posted by AmFor View Post
    Hi everyone. I am looking for a beta for my first fan fic. I am not a native english speaker, that´s why I would need somebody who could correct my mistakes. Different suggestions and opinions are welcome. Thank you very much
    Might want to add the subject, possible pairing, and rating...

    I'm a non-native speaker so can't help with grammar/spelling (my native language is Dutch -- Flemish).
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    It is S/J fanfic- romantic, I am not sure about rating but would say K+? and the story- what could have happened after Beneath the surface episode.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AmFor View Post
    It is S/J fanfic- romantic, I am not sure about rating but would say K+? and the story- what could have happened after Beneath the surface episode.
    If you're still looking someone to beta your work, I might be able to squeeze in some time.

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    Bored. Anyhtihng I can beta that isn't pure romance ?
    Price for Pain What do you mean violence isn't the answer?

    Burn It All Away Blood moves the heavens. Fire purifies the land. Legends change worlds. Destiny burns.

    Whiskey Tango Foxtrot Fiat justitia et pereat mundus. Fiat justitia ruat caelum.



    All are PG-13, each with a single act of rated R violence. Adults situations and other, tamer violence.

    Ficta voluptatis causa sint proxima veris


    I'm creating a fan comic and I want input from as many fans as possible. Please PM me if you want the discord link. You can also chat, show off your own creations, and rp.

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    Hello! I had just written a very action-heavy chapter in something. And I was wondering if there is anyone who could help critique it for me. There were a lot of tactics involved and I just want to make sure that no one does a stupid.


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