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    http://www.fanfiction.net/community/...ncients/68490/

    I'm writting this as a new series continuing Atlantis after season 5, yet before 'Enemy at the Gate' which was such a pathetic episode I can't bring myself to consider it as canon.

    This 'series' is more than just Atlantis, it brings together the overarching storyline of the stargate universe and explains why the ascended ancients act as they do. I've tried to write this as canon and to give the 9th chevron a legitimate purpose(I do not care for the SGU premise). I've worked quite a while to make all of this fit and have gotten several insightful reviews posted in response...yet I am always craving more input.

    Think of this series as my attempt to put right all that TPTB have done wrong. I've written it in episode form, and I am currently on episode 4. The link is to a 'community' that has the episodes listed for easy reading.

    Bring any discussion or criticism you have. That's the point of this thread.


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    Below is a basic comparison of the civilizations in stargate current to the most recent episode.

    Add up the three areas and you'll get a basic idea of the civilization level.


    Expansion

    +1 Air Flight...Genii
    +2 Space Flight
    +3 Orbital Habitat
    +4 Colonization of a second planetoid
    +5 Colonization of entire Star System
    +6 Interstellar Travel
    +7 Interstellar Colony....
    +8 Galaxy-wide Travel(end to end)...Tok'ra Remus Nox Lovakora
    +9 Galaxy-wide civilization(sporadic, widespread)....Jaffa Bra'tac's Jaffa Wraith Aschen
    +10 Intergalactic travel............Tauri Ori
    +11 Intergalactic Colony
    +12 2 galaxy civilization(sporadic, widespread)....Furlings
    +13 3 galaxy civilization(sporadic, widespread)....Asgard
    +14 4 galaxy civilization(sporadic, widespread)
    +15 5 galaxy civilization(sporadic, widespread)
    +16 Etc.

    Technology

    +1 Steam Power
    +2 Electric Power
    +3 Atomic Power...Genii
    +4 Hydrogen Power
    +5 Naquadah Power....Tauri Jaffa Tok'ra
    +6 Ion Power....Wraith
    +7 Neutron Power.....Aschen Furlings Remus
    +8 Neutrino Power.....Asgard
    +9 Tachyon Power.... Bra'tac's Jaffa Nox
    +10 Lessat Power....Ori
    +11 Keiron Power....Alterra
    +12 Unknown.... Lovakora

    Population

    +1 1 million... Asgard
    +2 10 million... Nox
    +3 100 million....Aschen
    +4 1 billion....Tauri
    +5 10 billion....Remus
    +6 100 billion....Jaffa Wraith Furlings
    +7 1 trillion... Lovakora Ori
    +8 10 trillion
    +9 100 trillion
    +10 1 quadrillion
    +11 10 quadrillion
    +12 100 quadrillion
    Last edited by Aer'ki; May 21st, 2011 at 11:58 AM.

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    very very very good, please continue

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    Default Re: Return of the Ancients

    Yes, very good!

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    This "Richardson", is he an alteran?!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rasunda View Post
    This "Richardson", is he an alteran?!
    stevenson is

    i cannot wait to see how this plays out.
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    Oh, Stevenson!

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    I read Pilot episode chapters 1-3 and it is really good so far, I'm going to have to come back. I'm at work and must get back to the grindstone.
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    Well, your responses were more positive than I'd expected. Thank you.

    Does the presence of the 'Originals' and the 'Ascended Empire' make sense when looking back over both SG-1 and Atlantis as to why the Ancients behaved as they did after they ascended?

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    i like this fanfic I like how it is written. Please keep it up.

    On another note, i got my own ancient fanfic in my sig. (advertisement ftw)

    But yes, I find myself wanting to read more about your story Please post soon.
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    Damn thats one good fanfic.. Just keep them comming please
    McKay: "We need the Zed-Pee-Em to power the gate."
    O'Neill: "Huh?"
    Daniel: "Zee-Pee-Em. He's Canadian."
    O'Neill (to McKay): I'm sorry.

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    That really was a thrilling storyline, I really hope to see more of this unfold in the near future.
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    Amazing fan fic!!!
    One of the best out there...any chance there will be more?

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    when is the next episode coming out.

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    amazing storyline , if u are not in the writing buisness u should be .
    Hope u will finish the first season at least , i know it has to be time consuming but its just not fair leaving us craving for more

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aer'ki View Post
    Does the presence of the 'Originals' and the 'Ascended Empire' make sense when looking back over both SG-1 and Atlantis as to why the Ancients behaved as they did after they ascended?
    Yes I think it explains their almost zealous approach to non interference a lot better than the actual writers of the show have over the years.

    I have been watching some old episodes over the last few days and I like how you have tied in the concept that the gates dont always Kawoosh, for example Lya does it in one episode and also Old Cassandra in "1969".

    Am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this, it has the scope for several seasons worth of stories and I personally would have prefered to have seen this on the screen instead of the new SG Universe series and also any future Movies, great job Aer'ki!
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    Quote Originally Posted by SG Manchester View Post
    Yes I think it explains their almost zealous approach to non interference a lot better than the actual writers of the show have over the years.

    I have been watching some old episodes over the last few days and I like how you have tied in the concept that the gates dont always Kawoosh, for example Lya does it in one episode and also Old Cassandra in "1969".

    Am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this, it has the scope for several seasons worth of stories and I personally would have prefered to have seen this on the screen instead of the new SG Universe series and also any future Movies, great job Aer'ki!
    i couldnt agree more, you really got something here, please continue it

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    I have to admit that I could not stop reading. I am finally glad that someone really brought a better understanding of the Ancients and their capabilites to SG.

    I love the ZPM facility. Powerfull and so simple I love it!!

    When can I get more!?

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    excellent episode great to read really looking forward to next

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    Episode five is shaping up well, geat work! And great reason for the gate Kawoosh being what it is!
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    Great series! I love it!

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