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Originally posted by Amann View Post
I'm taking it for me character right now, let's see what it gives her...Last edited by Alteran of Atlantis; 26 September 2009, 11:54 AM.
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there is a new chapter in the works, but will take a little bit to write it. Plus my own life is getting in the way with all the college and work.sigpic
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4907261/29/Golden_Dawn
finally got the chapter written. And so it begins.....the war
*ques the babylon 5 season 3 theme....*sigpic
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very good bud.
the only problem for me was that it went slow at one point then suddenly picked up speed. it would have been nicer, and made the chapter longer, if you had made it take a little bit longer by making the deceit Janilius played more bvious to the reader but managed to hide it from Amann.
for example you could have had Janilius on his own as he placed some of the Protoss beacons in where their locations, and let us see what is going through his head as he places the beacons, and from here you could have seen an innocent Kauri child see him and ask what he's doing Janilius could have replied something like leaving a present or something.
that is merely an example
EDIT : other than the sudden acceleration of the story i liked this chapter alotsigpic
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Originally posted by Commander Thor View Postvery good bud.
the only problem for me was that it went slow at one point then suddenly picked up speed. it would have been nicer, and made the chapter longer, if you had made it take a little bit longer by making the deceit Janilius played more bvious to the reader but managed to hide it from Amann.
for example you could have had Janilius on his own as he placed some of the Protoss beacons in where their locations, and let us see what is going through his head as he places the beacons, and from here you could have seen an innocent Kauri child see him and ask what he's doing Janilius could have replied something like leaving a present or something.
that is merely an example
EDIT : other than the sudden acceleration of the story i liked this chapter alotsigpic
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4907261/1/Golden_Dawn
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yeah, that was my intent I wanted this chapter to be epic hehesigpic
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To those who are waiting for an update, ill try to write one. Right now, i got the swine flu. I just am drained of most of my energy.sigpic
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Originally posted by Amann View PostTo those who are waiting for an update, ill try to write one. Right now, i got the swine flu. I just am drained of most of my energy.
"Oddly, this is familiar to you, as if it were from an old dream, but you can't exactly remember..."
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Uh oh?! SWINE FLU!!!! *calls Dr Bekectt on intercomm* Dr Beckett to Amann's quarters STAT!!!
I also wanted to pop in and say thatm both Taelira, her people (her mother even scares ME even though I created her ), Galadriel is perfect you got her down good and you would have done Ishanna proud for is'ta's protrayal, though you do need to come to chat so we can chat over next chapter....
Keep it up I really like it
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