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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    I have been so busy as of late, I am sorry for the delay on Golden Dawn. Working and doing college stuff....
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    when is the next update im dieinggggg

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Famrir_ View Post
    when is the next update im dieinggggg
    sorry, working 40 hours a week, full time college, and then sometimes too tired to think....plus all of the negative review crap.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Amann View Post
    sorry, working 40 hours a week, full time college, and then sometimes too tired to think....plus all of the negative review crap.
    I understand how you feel. Take all the time you need and don't get depressed by the negative review people.

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    Acts 8:39b-40a: The Spirit of the Lord suddenly took Phillip away and the official did not see him again, but went on his way rejoicing. Philip, however, appeared at Azotus (an old city in ancient Israel) and traveled about.

    He is also the author of love and justice:

    Spoiler:
    Romans 5:8: But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: while we were still sinners, Christ died for us.

    John 14:6: Jesus (Christ) answered: I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.

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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    new chapter will be written soon, I have now figured out what I want to do for the next chapter. It will take me a few days, what with college really putting a workload on me, but I will try to post soon as possible. My time is reduced highly since the summer vacation is over
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    taking a bit longer than I thought, but posted soon. Ive started it anyway
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    oooo ok good wat are u mostly working on golden dawn (my favorite) or war of gods and men?

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Famrir_ View Post
    oooo ok good wat are u mostly working on golden dawn (my favorite) or war of gods and men?
    I got chapters in progress for both Finally getting on writing it.
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    the long delayed chapter! Next chapter will be fracking epic, I tell ya
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    I got Amann as uber sued >_< 67 as the score

    56-70 points: Über-Sue. You've got one hell of a Mary-Sue on your hands here, and it's not going to be easy to set things right. But do your best. There may be hope for you yet.
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    how do you put a character up for it?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Amann View Post
    I got Amann as uber sued >_< 67 as the score



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    I don't think he is...it's just a stupid quiz, don't pay attention to it.

    I'm taking it for me character right now, let's see what it gives her...
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    great chapters and cant wait for another and for your spin off war of gods and men.

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    Okay, that test is officially bogus. I've tried as hard as I can to make sure my character Atlantea isn't a Mary Sue and it gave her 115. *falls on her as laughing* That's hilarious.

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    John Smith from Stargate : Wraith wars got

    Your Mary Sue Score: 37
    36-55 points: Mary-Sue. Your character needs some work in order to be believable. But despair not; you should still be able to salvage her with a little effort. Don't give up.
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    there is a new chapter in the works, but will take a little bit to write it. Plus my own life is getting in the way with all the college and work.
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    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4907261/29/Golden_Dawn

    finally got the chapter written. And so it begins.....the war

    *ques the babylon 5 season 3 theme....*
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    very good bud.

    the only problem for me was that it went slow at one point then suddenly picked up speed. it would have been nicer, and made the chapter longer, if you had made it take a little bit longer by making the deceit Janilius played more bvious to the reader but managed to hide it from Amann.

    for example you could have had Janilius on his own as he placed some of the Protoss beacons in where their locations, and let us see what is going through his head as he places the beacons, and from here you could have seen an innocent Kauri child see him and ask what he's doing Janilius could have replied something like leaving a present or something.

    that is merely an example

    EDIT : other than the sudden acceleration of the story i liked this chapter alot
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    Quote Originally Posted by Commander Thor View Post
    very good bud.

    the only problem for me was that it went slow at one point then suddenly picked up speed. it would have been nicer, and made the chapter longer, if you had made it take a little bit longer by making the deceit Janilius played more bvious to the reader but managed to hide it from Amann.

    for example you could have had Janilius on his own as he placed some of the Protoss beacons in where their locations, and let us see what is going through his head as he places the beacons, and from here you could have seen an innocent Kauri child see him and ask what he's doing Janilius could have replied something like leaving a present or something.

    that is merely an example

    EDIT : other than the sudden acceleration of the story i liked this chapter alot
    in a way, that was intentional I wanted it to spiral out of control, to overload the reader to the point where they go "WOAH! HOLY CRAP! THE UNIVERSE IS GONNA END!" Just like the situation is spiraling out of control, so does the story
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    Default Re: Stargate: Golden Dawn

    okay understood
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