I know Dana Jeane volunteered one of her fic, but it really isn't fair for her to be the first vic...er volunteer
The link below is to 'That'll be the Day', a fic i wrote and subbed to a zine.
It's set between Revelations and Redemption and is a run of the mill adventure fic
http://www.gateworld.net/fanfic/arch.../thatllbe.html
Have fun. Nit, pick, comment, whatever.
The only 'rule' of this thead is that you need to explain your comments. By that, if you want to say 'the story sucks'..fine. But you need to tell me why it sucks. Explain your opinion. On the other hand, if there was a part you liked, say why you liked it.
The link below is to 'That'll be the Day', a fic i wrote and subbed to a zine.
It's set between Revelations and Redemption and is a run of the mill adventure fic
http://www.gateworld.net/fanfic/arch.../thatllbe.html
Have fun. Nit, pick, comment, whatever.
The only 'rule' of this thead is that you need to explain your comments. By that, if you want to say 'the story sucks'..fine. But you need to tell me why it sucks. Explain your opinion. On the other hand, if there was a part you liked, say why you liked it.
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