The "Star Trek: Elite Force" Fan Fiction Thread

[Col.Foley]

Hi everyone, for those of you who do not know me, or this idea here is the basic information. Over in the Name The Next Star Trek Series Thread I have come up with a series I would like to see in the future of Startrek. Now me and Coloenl Shadow Quinn then started to post short "episodes" Fanfics really. then tonight Docballen then suggested we start our own thread to give our fans easier access to these epiasodes, for people who want to just read them, and not any other stuff. Here is the synopsis for the beginning of the series:

This idea has been kicking around in my head since about 2001. The next ultimate Star Trek series.
Star Trek: Elite Force.
Plot: In twenty three ninety Picard and Tuvok finally convinced the Federation council to form a hazard operations group. Small teams throughout the Federation, the best of the best to serve to protect, and to investigate. These teams would be on deep range out posts, and Starships who explore the very fringes of known space.
2398: Starfleet takes the idea one step further when they create the first Hazard team ship. The Saratoaga. A Soverign class starship. They are rushed into service when a mysterious Borg Cube appears at the edge of Federation space, on a course for Earth. The Hazard team dispatches this enemy. The first couple of seasons could deal with the eradication of the few remaining Borg collectives out there.
Other plots include the finding of a super enemy, which shocks the Federation to the core. Some other plots could be the bringing out, or compleating the arcs of previous series. Like for example "Piece of the Action" "Conspiracy" What happened to Ben Sisko, and also Section 31 could play a part in the early workings.
In later seasons it could deal with the start, or the rising action to the Sphere Builder War. And that could become the enemy that has been suggested in this thread, the one to obliterate the Federation, or bring it to its knees.
Characters:
Neil Henderson: Captain: A vetran of the Dominion war, he served on the Normandy. He faught at the battle of Ar-558. He has a serious persoana, too serious, always thinking about the mission at hand and the best way to complete it.
Tobiase Wolfe: Cmdr: Named after the famous author. Also a vetran of the Dominion War and was on the Normandy. Is the Captains best friend, Shot and crippled during the Domnion war, out of service for five years. Quirky and cynical sense of humor, also spontaneous, sometimes not realizing what he said was actually funny.
Alana Holtz: Cmdr: Worked for Starfleet special operations for all of her life, until joining the Hazard team in 2394. One of the first graduates from the Hazard team training center. On duty, she's seriose, determined, cold, and hard working. Off duty she is warm and loving, reading poetry, music, and holodeck simulations.
James Calloway: Lt. Cmdr: Chief of security, also har working and professional. But he loves sports, and hollo decks, and retuning the phasers, the weapons is his personal domain.
Charles Tucker VII: Lt.Cmdr Determined engineer, not to brilliant, but he is persistant, learning his art well, noqt willing to give up until the job is done.
Elizabeth Daestrom: Lt. Cmdr: per haps one of the most brilliant theoretical scientists of her time. She has been working on the Daestrom institute. But is then transferred to the Saratoga, for her first deep space mission.
Unamed doctor:
Unamed Helms man:

Now in the coming days I will post episodes from this series that I have written from the original thread. This thread would be in order to speculate, discuss, and ask questions about this series. For those of you who have no idea what I am talking about, welcome. And for those of you that have questions, ask, I will be more then happy to answer them with any of my human abillities.

[Col.Foley]

OK as I did this, I came up with my own cast of characters celebrities, and actors who I thought would make good chocies for the character I came up with.

And for all of you who have not read this, or seen the list.
Star Trek: Eliete Force, main cast.
William Petersen-Neil Henderson
Ben Browder- Tobiase Wolfe
Stacy Haiduk- Alana Holtz
Jamie Bamber- James Calloway
Connor Trineer- Charles Tucker VII
Amanda Tapping-Liz Daestrom
Teryl Rothery- unnamed doctor
Raibow Sun Franks- unamed helmsman

Star Trek Eliete Force: Reoccuring cast
Eric Szmanda- Christopher Steven Iversen. He is a brilliant computer whiz, too good for the normal fleet, but perfect for the HT.
Scott Foley- Patrick Jones. The youngest member of the casted crew, only an Ensign he only has two years of deep range experience out in deep range space. Where he became a chief of Security on a Nova Class Vessel, two months prior to joining the HT.
Aaron Douglas- A klingon officer on temporary loan from the KDF. A demolitions expert for the HT, typically Klingon, and in command of Saratoga HT Beta.
Dennis Haysbert- Admiral Womack, determined rigid man, who only show up once or twice to give them instructions, and mandates from the Fed council.
Xander Berkley- He plays the federation President, also seen rarely, but when he is seen the episode usually focuses on him or politics in general.
Claudia Black- She is the Kinsey like person, whose one and only enemy is the HT, she despises them amongest the Borg herself.
Emma Watson- the mysterious alien who they recieved in the pod, she has one of the most interesting back stories in the series.
Now here is the list, crticzism and comments are welcome. Later tonight episode one will re air. Also I will make a similar request that I did in the original post, I need to get character names for the unfilled charqacers.
Thank You,
Foley

[Col.Foley]

Here it is episode one for those of you inteterested.
Since your posting sumaries so will I.

Episode 1- Beginnings or endings Pt1
The Saratoga is till in space dock getting fitted for her big mission, to carry the Hazard team into the breach. The ship is not yet complete, only half the crew is on board. But they get a warning, there is a Borg Cube on a course for Earth. The Borg! How is this possibl, Janeway eleminated them nearly twenty years ago. Nonetheless the Hazard team has to mobilize. As the last two members of the senior staff, the chief engineer and the medical officer come on board. The Saratoga detaches its docking clamps and heads to Juipiter, where the Borg Cube will ingress, as the battle begins, the words to be continued flashes on the screen.

[Col.Foley]

And episode two.
Episode 1-2 Beginnings or endings Pt.2
We start off where we left off, the Hazard team is beginning to fire on the Borg Cube. The Saratoga takes a few serious hits, as do the other twelve Starships in formation. One of them is destroyed. The Saratoga starts to put up a Valiant fight, we begin to go back and forth, as the Federatrion council debates one last time whether or not to have a Hazard team at all. The Saratoga on the mean time looses shields on one deck for half a seocond. This leads to the Borg being able to beam fifty drones on board the ship. Tobiase and Calloway begins to get out the IMODS (Infinity Modulators, antil borg weapons. But the catch is that there are only twelve of them in the fleet. They get to the deck and discover that parts of the ship has already been assimilated, as well as at least one member of the crew. Suddenly one of the drones launch a plasma burst at an Ensign hitting her in the chest, a massive firefight ensues.
Meanwhile on the brigde, they get the Borg's shields to drop, Henderson decides to send over a security team, armed with IMODS to destroy the Central Plexis. The battle continues, with no deffinate winner in sight, and the Borg ship marches ever closer to Earth. As twenty two star ships led by the Prometheus, the Titan, and a new class of Federation heavily armed ship, the New Jersey, a mass prototype. But the Hazard team fighting the Borg on the ship continues to loose ground, getting some of the crew assimilated, this is despite the advanced weapons. Will the Borg loose, will the combined firepower be enoug to stop them? Or will all of humanity be assimilated this early in the new show? Needless to say you will find out when I post the next episode.
As always, any comments are welcome.

[Col.Foley]

Here is the next group of episodes.
And you ask and you shale recieve.
Episode 1-15 A Piece of the Cut pt.1
The Saratoga is traveling through space, answering a subspace distress call where there should not be one. They arrive in orbit , where they immedietly get attacked! It is a small ship, no more then fifty meters long, it takes about fifteen shots, draining the shields down only by five percent. The Saratoga opens fire with two phaser bursts, sriving the enem ship away.
Henderson decides to beam down a security team, including Tobiase Wolfe, Alana Holt, and James Calloway. Shorlty after beaming down, they get captured by men led by Fella Oxmix.
This episode will be a heavy Alana centric episode, as we get to see her in action, and her former life as a Fed inteligence officer. This episode will feture, Chicago gangsters with a Fed twist, sexy dresses, Fisbin, escape, and even a plasma based tommy gun, as Fella is looking for his cut that Kirk promised him years ago. This will get interesting. Tobiase manages an escape, but as they are getting away, a beam of blue energy strikes out at a car, blowing it up, knocking Calloway and Holtz out. Wolfe manages ro escape as the two are recaptured by a different organization. As they wake up with guns on them they realize that they may need a bigger cut, and off this realization, the words to be continued appear on the screen.

[Col.Foley]

1-16 A Piece Of The Cut pt 2

We fade back in to a very hurt looking Tobiase Wolfe. He has a cut running across his cheek, and is dirtied. He is heaving around an Enhanced Compression rifle, he realizes that he needs to find a disguise in order to escape, and rescue his people. Who are right now in the hands of another gangster. Meanwhile Captain Henderson is negotiating with Fella for the realease of the crew, whom Fella has tricked into believing that they are still in there. Henderson impatient, decides to send another junior officer down in order to rescue the captives. Who he finds out that Fella does not have the officers.

Meanwhile after a brief fire fight Wolfe manages to get his people out, and commondeer a veichle, and a Tommy Guns for James Calloway and himself, they move on to Fella's building where they have discovered there is a jammer preventing any body from being beamed out, it just lets people to be beamed in. They arrive, and manage to get past the guards, into Fella's room, where they take out his personal guards. Fella, however manages to get a distress call off calling in about twenty more guards, another firefight ensues as Wolfe begins to fight a valiant action, but they are severly out numbered. And out gunned. They manage to get a message off to the Saratoga who Captain Henderson orders into a low orbit. Then he orders the phasers set on one point five percent power, and narrow beam, he blows out the windows, then fires again, stunning all of the attackers. Wolfe manages to disable the jammer, as more guards are aproaching from the street. But as he is about to beam the team on board the Saratoga she is attacked by twelve of the ships, the Saratoga has to raise her shields. After a final brief firefight, where Fella is hit in the arm, the Saratoga manages to get her shields down just long enough to get the team on board, then she zooms into Warp, leaving the planet behind for what they hope is the last time.
The last scene has Tobiase Wolfe, Alana Holtz, Henderson, and Liz Daestrom standing around the center chair.
Henderson: Glad to have you all back. Wolfe is aciting uneasy, shifting around in place. Henderson: What is it Commander?
Wolfe: I think I left it.
Holtz: (Puts her head in her hand) Not again.
Henderson: Left what?
Wolfe: My tricorder.
Daestrom: Captain, that tricorder contains information for the Federation database, including some weapons, but alot of engineering scamatics.
As the crew realizes that this may not be over, that they may be seeing more of 'the cut' we fade out

[Col.Foley]

1-27 Scratching the Surface.
The Camra opens up on a picture of the sun rising over a world. It is a beutiful sight from space, we get the sense that a new age is beginning, times are changing is practically radiating through the air, it is quiet, no music or sound. We hold on this peaceful view for just a second. Then we fast pan across the stars, through all of space.
The Camra's view falls on the Saratoga, as she's zooming slowly through space. We continue to move in until we find ourselves in the bridge, it is a peaceful scene, the crew seems to have a pleaseant sensation, laughing can even be heard. Our view continue to pans until we go over to tactical were Tobiase is attempting to tell a joke to James. Then James's console beeps up, they are recieving a distress call from a ship traveling at warp two and is going to intersect their path. They get the small black pod to dock in the launch bay, where they discover that it is over twenty thousand years old. Henderson opens up the pod, and they discover a young, late teens to early twenties, year old girl, she has long brown hair and has white skin, but the most startling thing of all is she is clearly human. The medical officer quickly confirms this assumption. Her DNA is definatly human, but there is something else odd about her, her brain is ninety percent active. Henderson orders her to be made awake. She is and it seems she suffers from some kind of amnesia, she only has a vague idea of who she is.
She is given the tour of the ship, the whole area in the ship. But she seems to start to have an unusual effect on the crew, especially the younger memebers of the crew, but really on the Captian himself. This will be an amazing episode, as we begin to dicover the link between humanity and the preservers, and how everything is all connected, and some things from Voyager. The Captain and this girl share a brief kiss.
This is just before once again they are attacked, this time by an old enemy, three Tholian vessels, how far they are away from Tholian space, and the guest that they just recieved makes them seem like an unlikely coincidence. Will the HT find out why the Tholians are attacking? Will they be destroyed? Will they find out how the Preservers, the Tholians, their new guest, and the aliens that visited the early peoples of earth relate? And will they begin to uncover Humanities true destiny? Where we are, and where we came from, needless to say find out...

[Col.Foley]

This episode will be similar in style to lowe decks, and Voyager's Good Shepard. We open up with a view of a card game going on between the entire group of younger guest stars, except Patrick. The Klingon looks mostly board. But then, they get a message that the ship is going to red alert and that all senior staff report to the brifing room. The group of players start to speculate about what this is all about, and off their speculations we go to.
The briefing room, where we find out that the Breen are being pesky on the outer boarder of Federation space. They are selling a highly addictive, and lethal drug to a young colony on the very fringes of Federation space, a colony that is suseptable to drug abuse. We also find out that a Miranda class ship was already sent to the region, but was fired on, where it took heavy damage. An act of war, but the one thing is that they are a 'rogue group' that formed after the Domnion War. And sense they fired on a Federation Vessel, the HT is ordered to go take them out. They arrive where they immedietly launch two shuttles into the atmosphere. They continue to approach, flying low to the ground. But they are opened up on, the shuttle led by Tobiase Wolfe and his team is immedietly hit where it starts to spiral hard into the ground. The second shuttle flies evasive manuevers, but gets hit a glancing blow, where the ship starts to go down. But they surrvive mostly intact, but they get into an argument about tactics, how even though they are members of the HT, most of the shuttle crew is the technical members, and not actual soldiers, the Klingon disagrees and orderes them to mobilize to rescue their fallen comrades.
Meanwhile on the Saratoga, Patrick Jones comes up with a genious pan to render aide to the forces on the ground. The ship will launch two Victor class assault shuttles to take out the space craft batteries, and one bunker complex located a kilometer from the base. They launch the attack that goes well, as one of the shuttles return home, while the other shuttle lands and drops off Patrick as well as the helmsman. will they rescue the crew? Will this unlikely, and unknown group of heroes comes together to be heoric? Will they rescue their besieged comrades? Needless to say, speculate, and find out...

[Col.Foley]

Ep 1-29 The Men OF Hazzard.
This episode will be similar in style to lowe decks, and Voyager's Good Shepard. We open up with a view of a card game going on between the entire group of younger guest stars, except Patrick. The Klingon looks mostly board. But then, they get a message that the ship is going to red alert and that all senior staff report to the brifing room. The group of players start to speculate about what this is all about, and off their speculations we go to.
The briefing room, where we find out that the Breen are being pesky on the outer boarder of Federation space. They are selling a highly addictive, and lethal drug to a young colony on the very fringes of Federation space, a colony that is suseptable to drug abuse. We also find out that a Miranda class ship was already sent to the region, but was fired on, where it took heavy damage. An act of war, but the one thing is that they are a 'rogue group' that formed after the Domnion War. And sense they fired on a Federation Vessel, the HT is ordered to go take them out. They arrive where they immedietly launch two shuttles into the atmosphere. They continue to approach, flying low to the ground. But they are opened up on, the shuttle led by Tobiase Wolfe and his team is immedietly hit where it starts to spiral hard into the ground. The second shuttle flies evasive manuevers, but gets hit a glancing blow, where the ship starts to go down. But they surrvive mostly intact, but they get into an argument about tactics, how even though they are members of the HT, most of the shuttle crew is the technical members, and not actual soldiers, the Klingon disagrees and orderes them to mobilize to rescue their fallen comrades.
Meanwhile on the Saratoga, Patrick Jones comes up with a genious pan to render aide to the forces on the ground. The ship will launch two Victor class assault shuttles to take out the space craft batteries, and one bunker complex located a kilometer from the base. They launch the attack that goes well, as one of the shuttles return home, while the other shuttle lands and drops off Patrick as well as the helmsman. will they rescue the crew? Will this unlikely, and unknown group of heroes comes together to be heoric? Will they rescue their besieged comrades? Needless to say, speculate, and find out...

[Col.Foley]

Bull Run 1-30 pt 1
On the season finale of ST EF...
The Borg return. The HT is ordered to intercept, and go to a science station on the very edge of Federation Space. This science station is working on an em pulse designed to 'unassimilate' any Borg vessel that it is used on, toatally secret. But a Nova class ship on a resupply mission to the station got assimilated, so the Saratoga is going to the deep range station to provide support, and defend the station from Borg attack.
The Saratoga arrives out side of the station where Daestrom, Tucker and Tobiase beam over to the station with Beta team to perfect the unassimilation technology and to defend the station if it is boarded. They also beam over ten additional IMODs in order for the stations security to have a chance. They get ready for the war, the battle, and the fight of the Federation. As Liz attmepts to get the technology working she discovers that it is at least another year away from being finished with the current resources.
We then go to space to discover that the Saratoga and an Akira class Starship is laying mines out side of the likely Transwarp vecotrs to take out as many vessels as possible.
Which about twenyty hours later, they arrive, the full Borg battle group. 12 ships in all, led by two tactical cubes, and one diamond. The mines go off taking out two vessels, one of which is the cube.
Off of this very desturbing image we smash to black, and the words to be continued appear slowly on the screen.

[Col.Foley]

Here we are again.
Bull Run 2-1 Pt 2
We pick off with the battle comencing. The Akira clas star ship is quickly destoryed, and the Saratoga continues to take heavy damage. Just when the ship is about to loose shields Henderson orders the Saratoga to hail the Borg. Out of simple curiousity they stop firing. Henderson threatens that if the Borg try to ataack the HT, or the station, then he will destory the station along with all the information. They exchange verbal words for a second. By which time Henderson manages to convince them that they might have twenty such reasearch out posts, and that they can't afford to let this information slip throgh their fingers. As the transmission ends Calloway reminds Henderson that they still have people on the station. A vicous Mexican stand off ensues, as the fleet and the Saratoga begins to face off, neither giving in an inch. As the crew on board the Saratoga begins to buy time, and hatch a plan to get the team off of the station. They send a message to the team to let them know to put a spacial charge on the anti matter tanks for the station to destroy it, they will send a shuttle for the crew, using a lot of static from the deflector dish. Will the HT plan work, will they stop the borg from assimilating them, and the information on the station?

[Elite Anubis Guard]

You come from reading Horizon and you're not even gonna try a script series? :O

[Col.Foley]

You come from reading Horizon and you're not even gonna try a script series? :O

Well with that I don't have the time to do my own season's worth of scripts, I really don't but believe me the idea has occured to me to eventually do one. Will it happen? Honestly I don't know, it proabably won't end up happening, but I am still considering it.

[Col.Foley]

2-15 Through the breach.
The Saratoaga is traveling along Quantum Slip Stream, a technology since perfected from Voyager. Any way, a star exploades, intercecting with their path, this shock wave pushes the stream out of our universe and into the parrellel one. Which the HT are quick to discover. They find a pair of raiders, but are over powered because of power failures. The raiders lead them to a liberated Andore. Which the rebels are using as their new base. Patrick Jones, Tobiase Wolfe, and James Calloway beam down, along with Liz Daestrom, they are quick to discover that Tobiase Wolfe is now leading the rebellion against the Alliance, needless he is impressed with the potential that the Saratoga could bring. We also discover that in this universe Liz daestrom is Tobiaese's mistress, a thought which disgusts our Liz. We discover that Alana Holtz is really a femfatal, with seductive powers having worked in a bar on Vulcan, now she works for the rebellion. james's character is virtually the same in both univers's, and Tucker and Henderson are nowhere to be seen. We then here of a rather brilliant but dubious plan on Tobiaes's part to free the world Terra from Alliance control. And needless to say the chances of success just went up considerably with the HT.
This of course leads to the moral conundrum of should they help another universe fight a war. Tobiase thinks they should, because the Rebels will just take the Saratoga by force if they don't, and he would rather do it alive and free, then dead and captured. So it is agreed, they will help, as Tucker under guard works round the clock to get the ship battle ready. Which he does. The Sartoaga zooms to warp leaving Wolfe, and Jones behind. But as they leave the system, a Cardasian Galor class ship enters orbit and quickly beams down two hundred soldiers, the Rebels are quickly overwhelmed. In the cave where the Wolfes and the rest of the crew a stun grenade quickly materializes knocking them unconsiuose for five seconds. But it is long enough where they now have weapons pointed at them, another man walks in, and our people are shocked to discover that the leader of the Aliiance strike force in none other then this univer's Henders, and off this reaction, we smash to black, to be continued.

[Col.Foley]

2-16 Through the Breach pt.2
We go from right where we left off on the last episode. The Saratoaga is zooming away at high warp, and the Cardassian troops, along with their leader are reveling in their victory. But our view goes back up into outer space, where we see the Cardassian ship in orbit of the planet, as a phaser strike comes out of nowhere. It's the Saratoga, still heavily damaged, Tucker thought that he could finish the repairs on route to Earth, instead they have to go to battle with limited weapons, the Cardie ship opens fire again, dropping the Saratoga's shields down by a full thirty percent. On the surface Henderson is informed of this, and just about as he is going to kill the hostages they are beamed away. we go back to the Saratoga as she zooms to warp, with the Cardie ship following a few minutes later. The Cardassian vessel will intercept the Saratoga again because of the ships damage. Suveral attempts fail at causing the Cardasian's ships warp field to fail, the ship begin to fire on the preatty much helpless ship. The Saratoga finally manages to cause the ship to break off pursuit with a plasma stream detonated with a phaser strike. The HT continues to its mission toward Earth, but now the Aliiancew knows that they are coming.
They manage to avoid detection and drop out of warp right by one of the moons of Juipiter, where they launch shuttles with stealth protocals to board the stations, the teams manage to do this. And a firefight ensues aboard the station, this univers's James takes a hit dying. Meanwhile back on the Saratoga our Henderson recieves a call from their Henderson, requesting a meet on the moons surface. This univers's Tobiase goes with our Henderson. They meet in a long time abandoned structure, dating back to the original terran empire. A slight philosophical debate ensues.
Will the HT make it off the universe? Can they return home? Will they get out of this universe fully intact? As al ways, find out.