Stargate:Geothues New Script Based Stargate with the first script Released 3rd March

[stargaters]

We Have Moved

[Esquin]

Work on the Weir, Mckay and Sheperd characters, they don't really seem right. specifically Mckay doesnt seems himself, to loud I think. Sheperd is to quick to anger and Weir seems like a dumbass which we know she isnt, she's a Doctor of soemthing.

It neesd some work its very short and doesnt have alot of story in it. A piece like that should take several pages to finish. Idealy you want them traveling to the ship at the end of act one at the earliest.

You also might want to check on your scales, it's less then twice as long as the Daedalus and its width and heights arn't really apropriate for it's length. The ship isn't even as big as a hive ship, considering the size of Orion the 2 ships would be fairly comparable in seize. If you really want a planet scale vessl your gonna have to scale up massivly. For example in the series "Stargate Destiny" Which i write for we introduced a vessel called an onslaught cruiser in episode 104. That thing was 10 km's long, now tahts a city scale war ship

[Skydiver]

Guys, let's remember that how a person interprets a character is a very subjective and personal thing.

My version of Sam may or may not seem like an accurate interpretation to someone that sees her differently from me.

[stargaters]

Work on the Weir, Mckay and Sheperd characters, they don't really seem right. specifically Mckay doesnt seems himself, to loud I think. Sheperd is to quick to anger and Weir seems like a dumbass which we know she isnt, she's a Doctor of soemthing.

It neesd some work its very short and doesnt have alot of story in it. A piece like that should take several pages to finish. Idealy you want them traveling to the ship at the end of act one at the earliest.

You also might want to check on your scales, it's less then twice as long as the Daedalus and its width and heights arn't really apropriate for it's length. The ship isn't even as big as a hive ship, considering the size of Orion the 2 ships would be fairly comparable in seize. If you really want a planet scale vessl your gonna have to scale up massivly. For example in the series "Stargate Destiny" Which i write for we introduced a vessel called an onslaught cruiser in episode 104. That thing was 10 km's long, now tahts a city scale war ship

Ok i agree with the 10kms long thing but that was 2 pages of 47 so far
it was a little taste of whats to come on the 3rd of March i live in Aus So i don't know if the Seasons are different over there..

ALSO McKay, Wier and Sheppard Are only Characters in the First Ep of Geothues remember that
But thanks for all the feed back there will be a twist thats why i got them to the ship at the end of act 1 which is 10 pages long

[ThePope]

How long is the 1st season going to be? and did you wright it all yourself? because thats a hell of alot of work if you did!!

[stargaters]

How long is the 1st season going to be? and did you wright it all yourself? because thats a hell of alot of work if you did!!

20 Episodes
and i am at the moment writting about 6 Story Plans i have bt if anyone is intrested in co writing or writing i am looking for help if anyone is intrested. And will be writing the others if i get no one to help

[stargaters]

Hey,

as it turns out i am only gone for a week so i will be back on the 7th/8th Of March
Liam

ALSO I HAVE ADDED A FEW MORE PAGES TO THE EXTRACT CAUSE IF IM NOT HOME TO PUT IT UP I WANTED TO GIVE A BIT MORE OF A EXTRACT

[stargaters]

If there are any writers out there interested in Writing For Stargate: Geothues
please contact me also any Musicians Who would Like to help by Designing the Theme Music that would also be Appreciated

Thanks
Liam
aka Stargaters
Writer and Creator of Stargate: Geothues
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[Elitenova]

Cant there be a Battlstar Galactica and Stargate Crossver.

[Esquin]

Would you stop. No series is going to write a battlestar-stargate rossover episode. If you want to do it go away and do it in your own series no one wil like be but go ahead. Just stop bugging peopple about it.

Destiny didnt want your battlestar ideas either did Horizon or Nexus now stop!

[stargaters]

Neither does Stargate Geothues we have a good Amount of Ideas
I don't really like the idea of a Stargate Battlestar Cross over because they are 2 different Ones About a Stargate and ones about a ship of a federation thingy

(P.s) you can tell i only watched the first 3 eps of BSG
if only i knew there is internet connection up here i would have bought my Pen Drive up.

Be Back on the 10th

[The Signal]

There is no way the two can cross with it working, the two plotlines just cannot mix, stop buggin people with it!