This is my review of StarGate Horizen. I will post as I go along.
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Act one read.
I read the first act so far and it is pretty good and growing on me. I liked that the show could be like a completely alone or combine with SGA or SG1. I also just liked the name Vailant for the ship. Don't know why but I did. I liked Grant as the Main character. Wish to know more about the Vaiant though like what it looks like.
Questions right now
1)But I want to know his relationship with Christene.
2)Want to know about the ship.
3)Wish to know more about the cast.
So this is pretty good right now.
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The script is getting better over time. Which is normal you get better with practice. I am done with Act 2 page 32.
Ok it's getting even better. Tom and David are introduced. The Vailant is off of earth and gone into hyperdrive. Would have liked a better description of the Vaillant. Sivok seems main enemy. He takes command from a shadowy figure. The shadowy figure talks of getting a Asgard. and a Awakening?
Questions.
1) Who is the Shadowy figure?
2) which Asgard is on the Vaillant?
3) What is the Awakening?
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Originally posted by col_oatmealThe script is getting better over time. Which is normal you get better with practice. I am done with Act 2 page 32.
Ok it's getting even better. Tom and David are introduced. The Vailant is off of earth and gone into hyperdrive. Would have liked a better description of the Vaillant. Sivok seems main enemy. He takes command from a shadowy figure. The shadowy figure talks of getting a Asgard. and a Awakening?
Questions.
1) Who is the Shadowy figure?
2) which Asgard is on the Vaillant?
3) What is the Awakening?Spoiler:Thor
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Originally posted by col_oatmealThis is my review of StarGate Horizen. I will post as I go along.
I'm glad you've liked what you've read so far. I think it's safe to say that it'll keep getting better (not trying to compliment myself or anything). You'll start noticing some improvements in the script format, since we've started using a new script software with episode 1.05 "Other Cultures...". Just little things like that...
As for the unanswered questions you mentioned, they'll be answers coming up; some answers will come up very soon, others might take a while. But they'll be there.
Feel free to continue with your review. I'd be interested in seeing what you have to say as you go on reading.
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