My review of SGH.

[col_oatmeal]

This is my review of StarGate Horizen. I will post as I go along.

[col_oatmeal]

Act one read.


I read the first act so far and it is pretty good and growing on me. I liked that the show could be like a completely alone or combine with SGA or SG1. I also just liked the name Vailant for the ship. Don't know why but I did. I liked Grant as the Main character. Wish to know more about the Vaiant though like what it looks like.



Questions right now
1)But I want to know his relationship with Christene.
2)Want to know about the ship.
3)Wish to know more about the cast.


So this is pretty good right now.

[col_oatmeal]

The script is getting better over time. Which is normal you get better with practice. I am done with Act 2 page 32.


Ok it's getting even better. Tom and David are introduced. The Vailant is off of earth and gone into hyperdrive. Would have liked a better description of the Vaillant. Sivok seems main enemy. He takes command from a shadowy figure. The shadowy figure talks of getting a Asgard. and a Awakening?


Questions.
1) Who is the Shadowy figure?
2) which Asgard is on the Vaillant?
3) What is the Awakening?

[Erik Pasternak]

The script is getting better over time. Which is normal you get better with practice. I am done with Act 2 page 32.


Ok it's getting even better. Tom and David are introduced. The Vailant is off of earth and gone into hyperdrive. Would have liked a better description of the Vaillant. Sivok seems main enemy. He takes command from a shadowy figure. The shadowy figure talks of getting a Asgard. and a Awakening?


Questions.
1) Who is the Shadowy figure?
2) which Asgard is on the Vaillant?
3) What is the Awakening?

The answer to question two is

Spoiler:

Thor

, as for three, you'll figure that out if you keep reading long enough. Same with one, although that's supposed to be a little more of a mystery and will take longer.

[col_oatmeal]

I was assuming that but just noting that these are unanswered questions. Sorry didn't have time to read any tonight.

[Erik Pasternak]

Personally, I'm glad your enjoying Horizon. I'll be working on the show next season, so I'm excited. Also, feel free to drop by the Horizon Forum, we'd love to have you.

[col_oatmeal]

I tried but it said the forum was being upgraded. so I will try again later. But I first got into Horizen from Elite Anubis Guard. Nice to no that there are other SGH fans here.

[Erik Pasternak]

I tried but it said the forum was being upgraded. so I will try again later. But I first got into Horizen from Elite Anubis Guard. Nice to no that there are other SGH fans here.

Forum's up for business now.

[Alex Rubit]

This is my review of StarGate Horizen. I will post as I go along.

Hey, Col Oatmeal, I had no idea you were posting a review here. I just finally discovered this thread.

I'm glad you've liked what you've read so far. I think it's safe to say that it'll keep getting better (not trying to compliment myself or anything). You'll start noticing some improvements in the script format, since we've started using a new script software with episode 1.05 "Other Cultures...". Just little things like that...

As for the unanswered questions you mentioned, they'll be answers coming up; some answers will come up very soon, others might take a while. But they'll be there.

Feel free to continue with your review. I'd be interested in seeing what you have to say as you go on reading.

[Elite Anubis Guard]

Yep, dont worry, as you read on youll learn more about the characters and the ships and horizon./

[col_oatmeal]

Sorry guys I haven't had much time to read Horizen for thelast several days.