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Originally posted by ErinB View PostWOW! Isa! I'm sure that's not what Djay had in mind, but I'm also sure she'll love your version. I think I like this prompt idea.
Originally posted by ErinB View PostOh, Isa, this was perfect. I do so love comforting!Daniel. And dancing *squee* One more prompt left, Fruitcakes. Give her a good one!
~Erin
PS: Stay tuned, 'Kansas' chapter 6 is getting posted as we speak to an LJ or FFN site near you.
Originally posted by LC_ View PostIt was me actually. Someone mentioned that RCC said in the commentary that he was impying a miscarriage, then someone posted those pictures again and when I REALLY looked at that picture I had this WHOA moment...it was heart-stopping when someone verified that these Christmas pictures came before the crying scene...
AND before this topic came up today I was going post a snippet from my WIP, but now I'm not gonna because it'll just have ya'll depressed again.
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Originally posted by natalia View Postwhohooo! fic! now if I can just force myself to focus on french for an hour I shall reward myself with a chapter of Kansas! thanks for the incentive Erin!
Edit: And the prospect of reading discovery is what's getting me through the next few days Darryl. you guys are so good for me
I hope my story lives up to your expectations.
(ps, feel free to leave as many reviews as you like...I don't mind, really! )_______________________________________________________________________________
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Loving the fic, Isa. And it's true..I did have something else in mind when thinking of mistletoe, but I love a good angsty/comfort moment too!
Stef, the vid tutorial sounds a great idea but I'm still getting my head around Photoshop. Don't think I'm ready yet and I'll be at work anyhow. Good luck with it guys.
DjayHe's her Lobster!
LTS: Life's too short
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Originally posted by LC_ View PostCool...nice Darryl. I must confess that in DV fics I will sometimes skim over the really involved action to find the 'action'(lol) I really want, but for the most part this one really had me involved...the only part I skimmed was the involved narrative as Teal'c and the others were moving down the hallway after the elevator. Your showing each place as each event took place was an interesting technique and really kept me riveted. The only problem I had was in the first little part where you had Cam telling Landry, that he was just waiting on Jackson and then Cam saying something like, 'he's here now'....to me that sounded like Daniel had just arrived at the place where Cam was when in fact Daniel never left the infirmary until almost the end....just one of those continuity things.
I can understand what you mean about skimming over for the 'action' you're interested in... Sometimes I feel that way when I'm writing, where I'd rather be steeping myself in and writing nothing but the romantic stuff, forgetting all about the plot, adventure, and such details.
However, I inevitably find myself glad for writing all the action and adventure that I tend to build around the relationship. In my mind, it frames a romance more realistically. I believe that doing so brings an author's story as close to canon as is possible, so that the reader feels like they're getting the 'real deal' (which is my goal, but no idea if I'm close).
Also, I reread the section where Cam was talking about Daniel. I see what you mean, I should have worded his dialog differently there. I can understand how you got confused on a first pass.
I'm glad you liked the style I wrote this chapter in. I was concerned that readers would be too confused...but then, given what was happening, I think I was trying to get the readers to be just as confused as SG-1 was...
So I guess if you liked that style, I pulled off what I was shooting for.
Originally posted by LC_ View PostCare to give us any clue how long we have to wait for Chap 20?
If I were to produce it in a week (DO NOT get your hopes up!) that would be a miracle...(though it happened in the first several chapters...)_______________________________________________________________________________
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Originally posted by djay View PostLoving the fic, Isa. And it's true..I did have something else in mind when thinking of mistletoe, but I love a good angsty/comfort moment too!
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Originally posted by isabelqc View PostJust goes to show how my mind works. To most: mistletoe = kiss = Christmas cuteness. To me: mistletoe = herb/plant = antidote/medicine = poison = whumpage = angst. I'm still glad you liked it though Maybe I'll make the next one uber cute
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Originally posted by isabelqc View Post
But, LC, I live for angst! *pouts and points to the prompts* They weren't cheerful at all imo, well not the first one so much.. Give us angsty goodness...
and yeah in spoilers
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The next hour passed in a blur of gut-wrenching pain and blood, a wailing siren and flashing lights. The first thing that penetrated the armour he had pulled around himself to keep from falling apart was Carolyn physically pulling him away from Vala’s bed.
“You can’t stay Daniel.”
“But I told her I wouldn’t leave,” he dragged his gaze away from the still, too-pale form of his wife to meet Carolyn’s brown eyes.
”I promised her,” he whispered desperately.
He didn’t even try to stop his voice from shaking. He could let it go now. Carolyn had seen them through every medical crisis in their lives. She knew their struggle to reach for home and family. She knew what this was doing to them.
“I promised, Carolyn,” he whispered again, almost pleading.
The doctor shook her head, steering him towards the door.
it goes on a bit further, but hey I said it was only a snippet.
LC
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Originally posted by LC_ View PostYeah I understand how your mind works Isa(kinda scarey ain't it) BUT you picked the wrong herb...I believe that mistletoe is actually poisonous if ingested...I'm just sayin'....
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EDIT: Ack! LC!! *fails* I can't wait!! Yay!!banner by Stef
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Originally posted by Milena_D View Post
And for Kelly and Fehry, a comprehensive list
F - DJgirl = Wendy
Djay = Djay
F - Gioia = Gioia
natalia = Nat
F - Stef = Stef (ValaMD on FF.net/YT) not to be confused with MD which is Isa’s nickname for me
F - Milena_D. = Milena everywhere cuz I'm nice
F - Isabelqc = Isa (hariboo smirks on LJ)
F - Kales = Kales/Kay (sorrel rowan on FF.net/LJ)
F - CrazyLikeAFox = Cat
F - Odakota-Rose = Ren
F - LC = LC
F - ErinB = Erin (AerynB on FF.net and LJ)
F - Toomi = Toomi
Tonttu (guy) = Tonttu
Kath_pup = Kath
RinggoldGate = Susan
Poundpuppy29 = Erika
F - MaeveBran = Maeve
F - Anjirika = Anjirika
kamiikiteiru = Kami
F - PirateBijjy = Bijjy (GatePirate on FF.net)
Blower'sGate = BG
marbleC (guy) = Walter
F - SG1Cat (guy) = Darryl
F - Cat283 = Buttercup (Boutondor on LJ)
F - LittleMissJigsaw = Kelly
Fehrytales = Fehry
I'm not sure why I specified who the guys are...but the "F"s stand for Ficcers so as you can see there are quite a lot If I'm missing anyone which I'm sure I am or if you're a ficcer and I didn't write it, please tell me. I'm not feeling good and my brain is all fuzzy, it's really not meant as a slight against you.
Originally posted by RinggoldGate
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Originally posted by isabelqc View Post... I guess since it was off-world mistletoe and mixed with other plants its different than Earth mistletoe....
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Originally posted by LC_ View PostFINE!(she huffed) but I don't want anyone throwing rotten vegetables at me...
and yeah in spoilers
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The next hour passed in a blur of gut-wrenching pain and blood, a wailing siren and flashing lights. The first thing that penetrated the armour he had pulled around himself to keep from falling apart was Carolyn physically pulling him away from Vala’s bed.
“You can’t stay Daniel.”
“But I told her I wouldn’t leave,” he dragged his gaze away from the still, too-pale form of his wife to meet Carolyn’s brown eyes.
”I promised her,” he whispered desperately.
He didn’t even try to stop his voice from shaking. He could let it go now. Carolyn had seen them through every medical crisis in their lives. She knew their struggle to reach for home and family. She knew what this was doing to them.
“I promised, Carolyn,” he whispered again, almost pleading.
The doctor shook her head, steering him towards the door.
it goes on a bit further, but hey I said it was only a snippet.
LC
Okay, I may be just as evil. Chapter 6 of "Definitely Not in Kansas" is up. Links are in my sig, but I'll put them up here too.
Chapter 6 LJ
Chapter 6 FFN
~Erin
PS: Isa, I cut the chapter early, please don't hate me
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Originally posted by ErinB View PostLC, you are truly evil Ohmygosh, is this the miscarriage, something else? Why is she hurt, what's going on? Evil, evil I tell you.
Okay, I may be just as evil. Chapter 6 of "Definitely Not in Kansas" is up. Links are in my sig, but I'll put them up here too.
Chapter 6 LJ
Chapter 6 FFN
~Erin
PS: Isa, I cut the chapter early, please don't hate mesigpic
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